marna pada

[punjabiroop]

hum umidon ki duniya basate rahe

woh bhi har kadam par humein aazmate rahe

jab mohabbat mein marna pada

hum mar gaye,woh bahane banate rahe

[ruhani]

Originally posted by punjabiroop
hum umidon ki duniya basate rahe

woh bhi har kadam par humein aazmate rahe

jab mohabbat mein marna pada

hum mar gaye,woh bahane banate rahe

dear roop,
umeed zindaghi mein kabhi mat karna kisi se tht is why we have heartaches becoz we expect, so better in life never expect as it only gives pain.jo sacha pyaar karte hai woh azmate nahi hai.neways pain is there in ur thought. loved reading these lines.keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
with love
urs jas

[punjabiroop]

thanks jas
hume himmat dene ke liye

[kasak]

hi roop.......
wonderfully written.....
but u knw jas di is equally right.......ummeed karna aaj ke zamaane me bebuniyaad hai......it'll alwaz give pain.......
phir bhi if read as words,the lines r really gr8......
do keep on writing....

with luv,
KaSaK.......

[punjabiroop]

thanks kasak
mujhe khushi hoyi jo apka mera sher pasand aya
take care