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Sad 'UFF' Ye.....jhooti umeede..... - 11th November 2006, 01:00 PM



Jab bhi khuda se apne liye kuchh maanga....
tanhaiya hi mili.....

Ham ye soch kar shukrguzar kiye khuda k dar par...
ki ab hamari baichainiyo ko sakoon ki panaah mili..

Magar badnaseeb dil-e-gulista.n me gul nahi khilte..
fir na jaane kyu jhuti umeedo me hamri rooh u gaafil firi....

Kuchh mil gaya ki murad me jab bhi apni jholi tatoli...
to paaya naye jakhmo ki ek aur bisaat mili.....

jab b khuda se apne liye kuchh manga...tanhaiya hi mili...

UFF ye bakasi ka aalam...
UFF ye naakamiyo ke manzer...
UFF ye jhuti khushiyo ki chaah me
Nikalte aansu....
UFF ye 'gam-e-lashkar' ki haalat....

Diwaro se takra kar sif fod le....
ya 'Ya Khuda' ab to maut mile....

UFF....UFF.....UFF....

GAM-E-LASHKAR



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DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
   
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13th November 2006, 12:55 PM

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Jab bhi khuda se apne liye kuchh maanga....
tanhaiya hi mili.....

Ham ye soch kar shukrguzar kiye khuda k dar par...
ki ab hamari baichainiyo ko sakoon ki panaah mili..

Magar badnaseeb dil-e-gulista.n me gul nahi khilte..
fir na jaane kyu jhuti umeedo me hamri rooh u gaafil firi....

Kuchh mil gaya ki murad me jab bhi apni jholi tatoli...
to paaya naye jakhmo ki ek aur bisaat mili.....

jab b khuda se apne liye kuchh manga...tanhaiya hi mili...

UFF ye bakasi ka aalam...
UFF ye naakamiyo ke manzer...
UFF ye jhuti khushiyo ki chaah me
Nikalte aansu....
UFF ye 'gam-e-lashkar' ki haalat....

Diwaro se takra kar sif fod le....
ya 'Ya Khuda' ab to maut mile....

UFF....UFF.....UFF....

GAM-E-LASHKAR
dost bahut be-basinazar aa rahi hai aapki es rachna mai.n

Kuchh mil gaya ki murad me jab bhi apni jholi tatoli...
to paaya naye jakhmo ki ek aur bisaat mili.....

yeh sher bahut accha lagga, dard mahsoos hua yeh sher padkar.

yu hi likhti rahiye.

aapki dost


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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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hi - 13th November 2006, 01:00 PM

sunita ji appko raj ka namaskaar......appki rachna parhi bhut achi laggi...dil ko bechain kar gai appki soach......khuda appko hamesha khush rakhe......take care......raj......


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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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13th November 2006, 01:04 PM

gam-e-lashkar ji namskaar

aapki rachna me dard bhare asaar dekhe maine aapne bahot hi achhi tarhase is peshkiya hai aapne khuda kare aapke dard bhare ehsas khusi me badal jaye

is peshkas ke liye dil se niklidaad kubul kijieynga

apna kahyal rakhiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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23rd November 2006, 03:50 PM

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dost bahut be-basinazar aa rahi hai aapki es rachna mai.n

Kuchh mil gaya ki murad me jab bhi apni jholi tatoli...
to paaya naye jakhmo ki ek aur bisaat mili.....

yeh sher bahut accha lagga, dard mahsoos hua yeh sher padkar.

yu hi likhti rahiye.

aapki dost
Helo sunita ji....namaskaar and sorry again for late reply..

chalo sunita ji aap jaise diggazo ko hamara likha kuchh to achha laga...dil ko jaan kar skoon mila....aapse waise muje bahut c shikaytai.n hai....bad me kabi kahungi...lagta hai aap hame bhool gaye....

no pm...no call...anyways...i think its your style...i wil try to manage myself in ur way....

aap shayed bahut busy ho so jyada waqt nahi lungi...

lot of thanks for appreciating me.....

ok bye...take care..



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23rd November 2006, 03:53 PM

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sunita ji appko raj ka namaskaar......appki rachna parhi bhut achi laggi...dil ko bechain kar gai appki soach......khuda appko hamesha khush rakhe......take care......raj......
veer ji...thanks for coming and appreciating me ...and tanks aapne jo hamare liye khuda se jo arz kiya....

u also take care of urself....and sory for late reply....

ok bye...



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23rd November 2006, 03:56 PM

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gam-e-lashkar ji namskaar

aapki rachna me dard bhare asaar dekhe maine aapne bahot hi achhi tarhase is peshkiya hai aapne khuda kare aapke dard bhare ehsas khusi me badal jaye

is peshkas ke liye dil se niklidaad kubul kijieynga

apna kahyal rakhiyenga

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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dhaval ji....thanks for coming .....achha laga jaan kar ki aapko hamara likha pasand aaya....aur aapki dil nikli daad hamare sir - ankho per...aur dhaval ji...dard hota hai ...dard bhara dil hota hai tabi ek shayer paida hota hai..kyu maine theek kaha na...so shayer hai to laazmi hai dard bhara dil hoga aur dard per hi bas likh paayenge...i hope u understand me...

thanks agains for appreciating me...

ok bye..t/c///



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