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She loves me, She loves me not!! - 8th September 2007, 03:29 PM

Hi Friends,

Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

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bahut accha likha hai.......kuch likhe bina raha naa saki....daaad kabul karnaa


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9th September 2007, 04:26 PM

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Hi Friends,

Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

================================================== ====

wow that's so very beautifull pulkit ji bohat hi khoobsurti se woh ahsasat bayan kiye hain jab aap jaan nahi paatay ke samanay walaa apke liye aesi feelings rakhta hai ya nahi bohat hi khubsurti se un ahsasaat ko alfaz diye hain yunhi likhte rahiye aur rohin ji ki bhi ye poetry main ne pehle parrhi hai woh bhi apni jaga khubsurat thi magar aapki poem aesay lagi ke chand alfaz main aap wazah ahsasa bayan ker jayen ....khush rahiye


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Dear pulkit,

kaafii dino.n ke baad tumharaa likha huaa kuchh paRhne ko milaa hai, aur paRh kar behad achchha laga.. agar sirf poetry ke nazariye se kahuu.n to, bohat achchhe wordings hai.n aur flow bhii bohat khuub hai, jis ke liye mere jaanib se daad haazir hai!

aur agar tumhaare dil-o-deemaagh par yeh sawaal dauD rahaa hai, to ek dost ke hesiyat se yehii kahuu.ngaa ki, laDkiyo.n ke dil kii baat jaan,na bohat mushkil hai, so behtar hai kii directly puuchh lo, kii she loves u or she loves me not. agar haa.n kahetii hai to, yeh to hai hii bohat achchha hai, aur agar naa kahetii hai to bhii buraa nahii.n. dil to kabhii na kabhii to yeh pata chalna hee thaa.. achchha hai kii waqt rehte pataa chal gayaa

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Hi Shalini,

Glad that you liked these thoughts... Accha hai naa isi bhaane tum aayin to sahi... Keep coming and Take Care


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10th September 2007, 05:24 PM

She loves me, She loves me not...

So finally the day arrived.......

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

acchaaa....so romantic.....


She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

haa sahin hain. ladkiyon ko samajhna asan kaha hain......

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

Plzz tell me the name..so i can tell aunty..finally my works..over..

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

kitne confuse ho tum???

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

jaake usise poochlona..mamala finish....haa to haa warna chata

.....just kidding.............are aaj bahot dino baad tumko pareshan karne ka mauka mila to kaise jaane deti..waise........copy paste se hindi aur ab english..2 good....feelings ke to kya kehne.... aise hi likhte rehne...

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hello pulkit ji

bro, u have expressed ur feelings very beautifully, lovin the tag line "she loves me...she loves me not" tell her this poem, i m sure she will fall for you jus like the rose petals.
very delicate feelings u have mentioned in this poem of urs. really touchd my heart. seriously, everything is beautifully expressed and very vivid and graphical. do keep on writing like this. take care of urslf

till the next time...

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Hi KoiToho,

I am glad that you liked my feelings dear.... Dil me ehsaas thhe kaagaz pe utaarne ki koshish ki thhi... aapne aise appreciate kiya bahut acchha laga... Duaayen saath rakhiyega... take care


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Dearest Maynak bhai,

Aapki daad paakar humesha lagta hai ke waakayi maine accha likha hai is baar... hehe... I am glas ke aapko ehsaas-o-bayaan dono pasand aaye... Bhai I know how these girls are.... inki apni adaayen hai... you dont worry... I'll take care of everything

yun hi saath dete rehnaa... apna khayal rakhna...


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Dear Mausam,

Karlo karlo mujhe pareshaan... mujhe mauka mila to main bhi chhodoonga to nahin I am soo glad that you liked my feelings... hehe... vaise is subject me main kucch likhoon to tumhe special pasand aana thha... Rahi meri maa ko bataane ki baat... pehle main apni confusion to door karloon...

English me its easier to express yourself so kabhi angrezi vich hi likh lete hain.... versatility hai apun ki just kidding...

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14th September 2007, 12:15 PM

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Hi Friends,

Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

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hello hai ji
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uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
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kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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Hi Friends,

Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

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hi pullu tu english men likhane men guru hai yaar yeh men pehle bhi keh chukaa hoon tere kalaam men, yeh kalaam bhi jabardast hai tera, padh kar mazaa aa gaya, aur saath men vo kalam bhi padhaa jis ki tumne link di hai magar tera kalam mujhe kuchh hat ke lagaa,

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hello pulkit ji

bro, u have expressed ur feelings very beautifully, lovin the tag line "she loves me...she loves me not" tell her this poem, i m sure she will fall for you jus like the rose petals.
very delicate feelings u have mentioned in this poem of urs. really touchd my heart. seriously, everything is beautifully expressed and very vivid and graphical. do keep on writing like this. take care of urslf

till the next time...

manish
Hi Manish,

I am really glad that you liked my feelings and my words soo much... thanks for all the appreciation buddy... it really inspores me to keep writing... I just try to express myself... aap logon ka pyaar hai jo itni taareef karte hain....

Yeah... donno she'll fall or not but making her read this is not a bad idea...


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shayad tumhi per fitt baithey

mein ik deewana ladka tu ik parii si ladki
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aise hi pyare pyare post likhte raho


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Kaisi hain aap? hope erything's good... Accha laga jaan ke tumhe mere ehsaas sohne se lage... bass aap doston ka saath raha to likhte rahenge kucch kucch... take care... bbyee...


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hi pullu tu english men likhane men guru hai yaar yeh men pehle bhi keh chukaa hoon tere kalaam men, yeh kalaam bhi jabardast hai tera, padh kar mazaa aa gaya, aur saath men vo kalam bhi padhaa jis ki tumne link di hai magar tera kalam mujhe kuchh hat ke lagaa,

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Dear Manu,

I am glad that you liked my feelings this time too... Tumhe itna pasand aaya... jaankar bahut accha laga... Sab creations me apni baat hoti hai... Jab Rohin likhta hai to bass I just keep reading it...

Take care...


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Hi Manish,

I am really glad that you liked my feelings and my words soo much... thanks for all the appreciation buddy... it really inspores me to keep writing... I just try to express myself... aap logon ka pyaar hai jo itni taareef karte hain....

Yeah... donno she'll fall or not but making her read this is not a bad idea...

hahaha....do tell us what hapnd whn she read it!!!! cnt wait.....

remember..if she says yes...the idea was mine.....


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hahaha....do tell us what hapnd whn she read it!!!! cnt wait.....

remember..if she says yes...the idea was mine.....
I'll surely tell you... but pehle main use padhvaoon to...


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Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

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Bahut khoob pulkit... well written... well expressed...
Hope your love gives you all the love you deserve...

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Writing somethin after a long time... and it's a bit different too... Hope you'd like it... Wehenever i think of this title... It remineds me of an awesomeeee post Rohin, my buddy. Could not resists sharing that too along:

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=37379

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She loves me, She loves me not...

I call her, she says Hi with a big smile,
where were you all this while...
at that moment I got this thought
she loves me, she loves me not!

She shares her heart with a blush,
and` talks about her old and new crush
oh god she confuses me a lot...
she loves me, she loves me not!

All day long I get hiccups of her name
It's just a coincidence or love game
she misses me too or it's just my thought..
she loves me, she loves me not!

It has been a little time since we met,
but I find her close as a friend best
can't say if same feelings she's got
She loves me, she loves me not!

One moment she makes me feel the special most
another moment I would be like any other dost
Oh God, someone tell me please,
She Loves me, She Loves Me Not...

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Sitting here smiling deeply reading ur poem ...........

Its so interesting , so intriguing , very well compiled ........

Hmmm

I have nt go the rite but , why don t u ask urself DO I LUV HER

If the answer is YES

If u re sure of ur emmotions , if u re confident about ur own feelings for her , that should be enough for u ,

As far as her attitude is concerend , I believe in DIRECT DIALLING

AAR YA PAAR

DO OR DIE

APPROACH HER

ASK HER

IF SHE LUVS U

BINGO!!

IF SHE DOES NT

MAKE HER FALL FOR U

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Hey I m so sorry for being so personal here , but i w just thinking aloud I guess

Its just that I found ur poem so very interesting and so close to reality ......

Luved it

Ill look fwd to ur posts from now on

Kinddaa like 'em ,

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Dearest Rohin,

Thanks for all the wishes... Wish the same for you... Saath rehna aise hi


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Dear Maham saahab,

Good to see you again... and again you've flattered me a lot... I just let my feelings flow and am so glad that find it well compiled too

U know what... I think you have a great sense for poetry and I would love to read what you write... You hit the nail on the head... From these few lines of mine you were able to make out that there is some confusion in my mind regarding whether I love her or not.......

That's what i am trying to do... checking if i am confident... its like there but still not there... when I feel confident... I'll def. ask her....

Aage bhi aapse mulaakatein hoti rahen aisi koshish rahegi... Do post something...


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Good to see you again... and again you've flattered me a lot... I just let my feelings flow and am so glad that find it well compiled too

U know what... I think you have a great sense for poetry and I would love to read what you write... You hit the nail on the head... From these few lines of mine you were able to make out that there is some confusion in my mind regarding whether I love her or not.......

That's what i am trying to do... checking if i am confident... its like there but still not there... when I feel confident... I'll def. ask her....

Aage bhi aapse mulaakatein hoti rahen aisi koshish rahegi... Do post something...
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Dear Maham saahab,

Good to see you again... and again you've flattered me a lot... I just let my feelings flow and am so glad that find it well compiled too

U know what... I think you have a great sense for poetry and I would love to read what you write... You hit the nail on the head... From these few lines of mine you were able to make out that there is some confusion in my mind regarding whether I love her or not.......

That's what i am trying to do... checking if i am confident... its like there but still not there... when I feel confident... I'll def. ask her....

Aage bhi aapse mulaakatein hoti rahen aisi koshish rahegi... Do post something...
Good to see ME

AGAIN

!!!!

hey hey hey !!!!

Mana janab ke hamare naam ka matlab CHAAND hei magar is bazm ke aakash pe pehlee baar ubhre hein

This is the first time i ve met u , sir ........

As Maynak ji has corrected u , I m female

Besides that blunder , I thank u for all ur lovely wordz here that u bestowed on me.



I do certainly hope ......now that u know i m a female none of them wud change

Sure !

I d be glad to have someone like u on my posts , Let s see wat u ll have to say to my trivial creations ,

Awaiting to meet u again on the road of this forum ,

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Your poetry is just as beatiful and wonderful as a person you are!!!

Awesome job Bhaiya!

Keep up the Great work!

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Thanks for correcting me Mayank bhai... Ab tum to atleast jaante hi ho meri urdu kitni acchi hai...


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Maaham Saahiba,

Thanks for corrceting me... English language can create such confusions at times... so I got confused too....

Good to see you again as I read this reply after the reply on "Lagta ek pal hai..." where you flattered me first and then here...

Well your sense of poetry does not change with yours being a female, neither do my words.... hopefully aap se mulaakat hoti rahegi...

take care...


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Dearest Priya,

It is always soo good to see you around... I am really glad that you liked my expressions so much... Dont know why... but I always wait for your reply on my posts... may be for the special relation we share...

Take good care of urself sis... and have a great time...


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Pulkit jii aapki yeh poem bohat hi cute hai....very simple ,sweet and innocent....aagey ki kahaani jaanne ke liye sab ke comments aur aapke replies bhi padhe......kahani adhuri hai ab tak........aagey kya hua....????...........




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Hi Zainy,

Well Well Well.... The confusion was there till the end... but I did manage the guts to ask her...She told me she had no such feelings and always saw me just as a friend... It did hurt a little but not much...

It was later I also realized that I didn't actualy love her but it was her qualities that made me feel that she was the most appropriate for me and so the confusion...

Now...she is married to someone whom she loves and he loves her and I am married to my wife, who loves me a lot and so do I

Who says love stories don't have a "Happy Ending"

Glad you liked this poem... It was again long time back...

Aati rahiye..hausla badhaati rahiye... do take care


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Well Well Well.... The confusion was there till the end... but I did manage the guts to ask her...She told me she had no such feelings and always saw me just as a friend... It did hurt a little but not much...

It was later I also realized that I didn't actualy love her but it was her qualities that made me feel that she was the most appropriate for me and so the confusion...

Now...she is married to someone whom she loves and he loves her and I am married to my wife, who loves me a lot and so do I

Who says love stories don't have a "Happy Ending"

Glad you liked this poem... It was again long time back...

Aati rahiye..hausla badhaati rahiye... do take care


Hmmmmm......well !!...phases of life...................

Actually i was under the impression that shweta ji is the same girl....i hope mere sawaal ne aapko kisi tarah se hurt nahi kiya....

Anyways jo hota hai acche ke liye hi hota hai...Apke haatoN ki lakiron me pyari pyari shweta ji thi,shayed isiliye aysa hua....

chaliye ab aap hamari pyari bhabhi shweta ji ke liye ek acchi si poem likhiye...hamari request hai aapse, waise tou aapne shwete ji ke liye aur bhi bohat kuch likha hai, ek aur sahi on my request,..aur haan title hoga.........."shweta my sweetheart"....




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Hmmmmm......well !!...phases of life...................

Actually i was under the impression that shweta ji is the same girl....i hope mere sawaal ne aapko kisi tarah se hurt nahi kiya....

Anyways jo hota hai acche ke liye hi hota hai...Apke haatoN ki lakiron me pyari pyari shweta ji thi,shayed isiliye aysa hua....

chaliye ab aap hamari pyari bhabhi shweta ji ke liye ek acchi si poem likhiye...hamari request hai aapse, waise tou aapne shwete ji ke liye aur bhi bohat kuch likha hai, ek aur sahi on my request,..aur haan title hoga.........."shweta my sweetheart"....
Dear Zainy,

As you correctly said, these are phases of life and they don't hurt me coz I try to take positives from each phase...I will definitely try to write something for Shweta when time permits....

Actually I am at a client side for last 2 weeks and that's why got lot of time to visit the site regularly... I am flying back today aur India jaakar routine busy ho hi jaana hai... but stil I'll definitely try to write and be regular on site...

In the meantime... you take care...bye...


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Pulkit pra jii,

I hope u r doing good!!!

Aaj tuhadii post nazar mein aayiii .. I was shocked yeh kaise hua meine nahi padhii ...as u knw meri reply bina tumharii post adhurii hongii ..lolz.. just kidding

Bahut changii lagii tuhade ehsaaas ... ji Zainy ji b sehi kaha hai ....we r looking fwd to read more ..........!!!

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