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Khaas koi apna saa, aaj fir yaad aaya hai... -
26th January 2013, 01:30 AM
Khaas koi apna saa, aaj fir yaad aaya hai,
Salaamati ke ehsaas ne dil ko sataaya hai Ho khudaaya who salaamat, ho jahaan bhi Jaane kyun meraa yeh dil ghabraaya hai Pahunchade koi to aaj uski khabar mujh tak, Nahin dil se huwaa woh aaj bhi paraaya hai Sulaaya jis ehsaas ko thha humesha ke liye, Aks kyun bankar palkon me samaaya hai Woh woh nahin aaj, naa hi main main hoon, Fir woh kya hai jisne is tees ko utthaaya hai Duaago main hoon, ke khush woh rahe Lafzon me jiska khayaal utar aaya hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th January 2013, 07:38 AM
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Maza aa gaya par ke aap ke.Beautifully composed, well versed and nice flow of thoughts from bigining till end. Aap ki ghazal par ke main apni rachna ki do lines kahunga : Tu nahin per dil mein teri tsaveer to hai lekin, Maine tere aks ko apni ruh mein basa rakha hai. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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26th January 2013, 09:15 AM
Pulkit bhaiyaa:
namaste! aapki koShiSh jo baat keh rahiiN hai merii dil ki baat bhee wahee haii... bahot achChhe tareeqe se aapne uss ehsaas ko apni koShiSh meiN peSh kiyaa haii... apnaa Khayaal rakheN... KhuSh raheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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26th January 2013, 10:01 AM
बहुत ही सुंदर रचना बड़े ही अछे अहसासों से बंधी कही आपने......दाद हाज़िर है.....वसूल पाइयेगा
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26th January 2013, 11:34 AM
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waaahh Pulkit bhaiyaa ... kya baat hai subah subah aapka tazatareen kalaam padhaa... dil ko yaqeen maniye itna sukoon milaa ke bataya nahi jaa sakta hai... ummdaah ... bahot ummdah... likhte raheiye.. yuNhi bazm ki raunak badhaate rahiye... Shaad... |
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26th January 2013, 04:35 PM
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 Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th January 2013, 07:41 PM
bhai Pulkit miyaaN,
pehle to namaste duuje Ghazal par mubarakbaad qabuul farmaaiye aur teeje aate raha kijiye, raunak bani rehti hai rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th January 2013, 11:43 PM
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Wah!....bohat khoob pulkit ji....sabhi ashaar lajawaab hain....yuhi likhte rahiye....:-) Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th January 2013, 07:40 PM
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Tumhe koshish acchi lagi jaankar khushi huwii... Kaii baar aisa hota hai ke aab koshish karte reh jaaye ho aur lafz nahin milte... aur kabhi yun bhi hota hai ke achaanak mann me khayaal aata hai aur lafz aap hi judh jaate hain... Is martaba kucch aisa hi huwaa ke ehsaas ko lafzon me dhaalne ke liye koshish nahin karni padhi... Yunhi saath banaaye rakho... main koshish karta rahoonga likhne ki Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th January 2013, 07:44 PM
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apna khayal rakhiyegaLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st January 2013, 03:02 PM
Pulkit mere bhai
aaj taqriban 3 months baad is forum per aana hua, Tumhare kalam per nazar parhi to parhe baghair na reh saka. Tumhare khayaal ki khoobsurti, tumhare khuloos ka izhaar aur tumhare andaaz ki saadgi hamesha ki tarah tumhare is kalaam mein badarja atm maujood hai. Meri bharpoor daad qubool karo. Is kalaam mein rawaani ka kuch saqam hai voh mera khayal hai ke tum shayed aaj kal parh kem rahe ho is wajah se hai. bas aadat ke mutabiq (jo jaanta hoon ke bohat buri hai) tumhein nasihat karoon gaa ke tum asaatida ke kalam ka dono nasr bhi nazm bhi khoob mutaleaa kiya karo. Tum jitne achcha insaan ho to kalaam bhi tumhara utna hi achcha aur jaandaar hona chahiye. God bless you, and all your family. musharrafhusain |
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1st February 2013, 08:55 PM
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Laajawaab Ghazal Huii Janaab ! Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th February 2013, 07:10 PM
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Jaankar khushi huwi ke tumhe mere alfaaz pasand aaye... Aise hi saath dete raho... apna khayal rakho... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th February 2013, 07:12 PM
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Aapka reply apni koshish par paakar humesha hi aise khushi hoti hai jaise maano Amitabh bacchan ka autograph mil gaya ho... Aapko alfaaz pasand aaye aur aapne ise Ghazal ka darza bhi diya, bahut hi accha laga... Yunhi haunsla badhaate rahiye, apna khayaal rakhiye Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th February 2013, 07:15 PM
Hi Zainy,
Aapko ehsaas-o-aashaar pasand aaye, jaankar khushi huwi... yun hi haunsla badhaati rahiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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11th February 2013, 07:22 PM
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Main humesha se hi lucky raha hoon ke aapki raaiy aur daad mujhe milti rahi hai... Bhai, aapne sahi kaha, aajkal likhna aur padhna dono hi kaafi kam ho gaya hai... Job, Family sab ki taraf time pehle se zyada jaata hai ab... Fir is baar yeh khayaal kucch yun mann me aaye ke zyada chhed chaad karna sahi nahin laga Agli baar ek behtar koshish ke saath lajd hi haazir honga... Aapke blessings humesha se hi special rahe hain and I've been lucky in this regard Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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19th February 2013, 06:22 PM
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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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