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Wah! Kya Baat Hoti - 4th April 2007, 11:00 PM

Raat ki Baat hoti, ya Chand ki Baat hoti
Tum kaho gar hoti, toh kya Baat hoti

Amavas ki Raat na hote tum gayab Chand ki Manind
Wo ek Khushnaseeb Raat hoti, Sitaron ki Baraat hoti

Majma laga hai, jane kis kis ne Shirqat ki
Khel hai koi, tum aate toh Hijr ki Maat hoti

Kya kahen k abb Muskurate hain hum
Jafa gar Chupp hoti toh kahin Wafa se Baat hoti

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti


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5th April 2007, 10:26 AM

adaab wafa ji,
kaisi hain aap?
bahut din baad aapka kalaam padhne mila.aapko padhna to hamesha se hi mujhe bahut pasand raha hai.

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti

yeh sher bahut acha laga,yunhin likhti rahen,khush rahen.
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gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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5th April 2007, 10:39 AM

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Raat ki Baat hoti, ya Chand ki Baat hoti
Tum kaho gar hoti, toh kya Baat hoti

Amavas ki Raat na hote tum gayab Chand ki Manind
Wo ek Khushnaseeb Raat hoti, Sitaron ki Baraat hoti

Majma laga hai, jane kis kis ne Shirqat ki
Khel hai koi, tum aate toh Hijr ki Maat hoti

Kya kahen k abb Muskurate hain hum
Jafa gar Chupp hoti toh kahin Wafa se Baat hoti

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti
wafa ji namaskar

kafi dino baad pada hai aapko maine

per yakeen maniye aapke kalam ko pad kar kafii sukoon mila or har ek sher per daad niklii
maqta to bus poochiye hi mat kamal hai

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti

ek umda kalam per dil se daad hazir hai.................

ek sher arz hai

aakhirii samay bhii raah terii takte rahe
chain hota marke, gar mulakaat hoti

shukriyaa

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7th April 2007, 01:44 PM

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adaab wafa ji,
kaisi hain aap?
bahut din baad aapka kalaam padhne mila.aapko padhna to hamesha se hi mujhe bahut pasand raha hai.

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti

yeh sher bahut acha laga,yunhin likhti rahen,khush rahen.
tc bye
bahut bahut shukriya aapka....aapne mujhe yaad rakha..yahi jankar behad khushi hui mujhe

ghazal ko padhne aur sarahne ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya ata karti hoon aapka
bahut shukriya!


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9th April 2007, 07:09 PM

Wafa:

ek khuubsuurat khayaal ke liye mere jaanib se daad haazir hai.. YuuN hi likhate raheN... zor--e-qalam ho aur zeyaadah

Mayank

do-ek Sher arz karta huuN.. Aarzoo LAkhanvi jee kaa..


zamaanaa yaad teraa ai dil-e-naakaam aataa hai
Tapak pa.Date hai.n aa.Nsuu jab vafaa kaa naam aataa hai

vafaa tum se kare.nge dukh sahe.nge naaz uThaaye.nge
jise aataa hai dil denaa use har kaam aataa hai



buraa jo dekhan mai.n Chalaa, buraa naa milyaa koye
jo mann Khojaa apnaa to mujh se buraa naa koye



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10th April 2007, 03:54 AM

wafa jee adaab :

bahot dino baad bazm meiN aapki tehreer ko deKHa ..khusHii huii,,khayalaaT ko baRe hi umda tarike se pesH kiye haiN aapne.yuuNHi liKHte raheN .daad hazir hai kubul kijiyeNga

apnaa khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN

duaoN ke saath ijaazaT

aapka dost
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10th April 2007, 08:36 AM

wafa ji namaskar

Maine aaj apko pehli baar pada hai aur mujhe itna pata bhi nahi hai ki kaise likhte hai aur kya likhte hai lekin aap logo ke beech aa kar main bahut khush hoon. dil ke chupe jazbaaton ko byan karne ka mauka jo mil jaata hai.
aur sach kahu to mujhe apki likhi yeh rachna samjhane mein badi mushkil ayi kyunki aapne itna achha aur chun chun kar shabdon ka istemaal kiya hai. plz aise hi likhte rahe.

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10th April 2007, 10:07 AM

wafa ji namaskaar....!

aap to janti hi hai, ki aapka likha mujhe behad pasand hai.....har baar ki tarah es baar bhi bemisaal hai aapki gazal....har sher khoobsurat bana hai, yu hi likhti rahiye.


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12th July 2009, 10:59 PM

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Raat ki Baat hoti, ya Chand ki Baat hoti
Tum kaho gar hoti, toh kya Baat hoti

Amavas ki Raat na hote tum gayab Chand ki Manind
Wo ek Khushnaseeb Raat hoti, Sitaron ki Baraat hoti

Majma laga hai, jane kis kis ne Shirqat ki
Khel hai koi, tum aate toh Hijr ki Maat hoti

Kya kahen k abb Muskurate hain hum
Jafa gar Chupp hoti toh kahin Wafa se Baat hoti

Khair Diljalon mein abb apni ginti sahi “wafa”
Dil toh dafna diya, gar jalta toh Wah! Kya Baat hoti
Wafa ji..........adaab !......

abhi-abhi maine aapki nazm padhi.......sabhi sher bahut umda hai.........ehsaas bahut khubsurat lage.......nazm padhte waqt dil ko chhuti hai....mann ke dard se baate karti lagti hai.....aapki nazm....

mujhe padhkar acha laga.........aise hi aate rahiye......khush rahiye.....

dil se daad deta hu..........




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Wafa Ji........

aaj bazm mein aapke is kalaam pe nazar padi.... kis kis sher ki taarif karoon...har sher lajawab hai....

koshish karna ke poorane dost phir mil saqein........

Tumhara apna........



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