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Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ... ! - 18th December 2010, 12:34 PM

Kuch Iss Tarha Baat Ho Gai
Mohabbat Unke Saath Ho Gai ...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...

Kitni Shaam Se Udaas HaiN AankeN
Kyaa Intezaar Ki Apni Bisaat Ho Gai ...

Takiye Par Rakhta Kaise Sar " Naresh"
Darr Ke Tanhaai Se Yeh Karamaat Ho Gai ...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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18th December 2010, 02:15 PM

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Kuch Iss Tarha Baat Ho Gai

Mohabbat Unke Saath Ho Gai ...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...

Kitni Shaam Se Udaas HaiN AankeN
Kyaa Intezaar Ki Apni Bisaat Ho Gai ...

Takiye Par Rakhta Kaise Sar " Naresh"
Darr Ke Tanhaai Se Yeh Karamaat Ho Gai ...

aadaab
tamannaa chunne me raat ho gayi

kal raat us se yun hi mulaaqaat ho gayi
lagtaa hai jaise phooloN ki barsaat ho gayi

us ne chalaaye shaoq se nazron ke apne teer
doolhaa thaa qalb zakhmon ki baaraat ho gayee

thaa muntazir nigaah me armaaN liye huye
guzree jawaan subh to ab raat ho gayee

ik ik sadaay e jism ko wo choomtaa rahaa
allaah re ye kaisee inaayaat ho gayi

bistar ki silwaten hi meree raaz daar hain
maidaan maar kar bhi mujhe maat ho gayi


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18th December 2010, 06:46 PM

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Kuch Iss Tarha Baat Ho Gai



Mohabbat Unke Saath Ho Gai ...
Achcha hai...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Theek hai...

Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

Bayani kamzor rahi, pehla misra padhkar yu laga koi suspense create kiya hai aapne.......par dusre misre me aisa kuch nazar nahi aaya....kis mausam ki barsaat bhi thoda ajeeb laga sunne me........

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...

Jo main samjha hu us hisaab se theek hai.....

Kitni Shaam Se Udaas HaiN AankeN
Kyaa Intezaar Ki Apni Bisaat Ho Gai ...

Yaha agar SHAAM na hoker SHAAMO kaha jata to behtar hota........aur mujhe to ab tak BISAAT ka istemaal dusre misre me samajh me hi nahi aaya.

Takiye Par Rakhta Kaise Sar " Naresh"
Darr Ke Tanhaai Se Yeh Karamaat Ho Gai ...

Yaha phir samajh me nahi aaya aap kis karamaat ki baat kar rahe hai kya aap yeh keh rahe hai ke takiye pe sar na rakhna koi karamaat hai



Meri observation meri la ilmi ki wajah se bhi ho sakti hai.............Masood saheb jaise behtareen shayer ne agar aapki peshkash ko samjha hai aur uski shaan me itne khoobsurat sher kahe hai to yaqeenan yeh meri nasamjhi hai ke main theek se aapki peshkash samajh nahi paya.


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Kuch Iss Tarha Baat Ho Gai
Mohabbat Unke Saath Ho Gai ...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...

Kitni Shaam Se Udaas HaiN AankeN
Kyaa Intezaar Ki Apni Bisaat Ho Gai ...

Takiye Par Rakhta Kaise Sar " Naresh"
Darr Ke Tanhaai Se Yeh Karamaat Ho Gai ...
bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkash naresh saheb...
daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
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Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
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kya baat hai naresh bhai.. uff wo muhabbat.. nadaan muhabbat jaane kya kya yaad dila gai aapki ye koshish.. yoon samajh lo aap ne ek baar fir se meri muhabbat nai kar diii ... dil se daad haaazir hai..


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Kuch Iss Tarha Baat Ho Gai
Mohabbat Unke Saath Ho Gai ...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...

Kitni Shaam Se Udaas HaiN AankeN
Kyaa Intezaar Ki Apni Bisaat Ho Gai ...

Takiye Par Rakhta Kaise Sar " Naresh"
Darr Ke Tanhaai Se Yeh Karamaat Ho Gai ...
wah naresh bhai wah kya baat hai bahut khoob daad kubul faramaayen
duaon ke saath
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aadaab
tamannaa chunne me raat ho gayi

kal raat us se yun hi mulaaqaat ho gayi
lagtaa hai jaise phooloN ki barsaat ho gayi

us ne chalaaye shaoq se nazron ke apne teer
doolhaa thaa qalb zakhmon ki baaraat ho gayee

thaa muntazir nigaah me armaaN liye huye
guzree jawaan subh to ab raat ho gayee

ik ik sadaay e jism ko wo choomtaa rahaa
allaah re ye kaisee inaayaat ho gayi

bistar ki silwaten hi meree raaz daar hain
maidaan maar kar bhi mujhe maat ho gayi


ye chand sher aap ki ghazal ke naam isee se main daad pesh kar rahaa hun

mukhlis
masood hassaas
Masood Bhai ... Aadaab !

Humse khoobsurat aur aalaa darze ki ghazal share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya ... aapki ghazal ke aaine meN mujhe apna likha ........ bahut dhundlaa nazar aaya ... aainda bhi aise hi saath nibhaate rahen aur hausla dete rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !




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Meri observation meri la ilmi ki wajah se bhi ho sakti hai.............Masood saheb jaise behtareen shayer ne agar aapki peshkash ko samjha hai aur uski shaan me itne khoobsurat sher kahe hai to yaqeenan yeh meri nasamjhi hai ke main theek se aapki peshkash samajh nahi paya.
Shukriya ...... Sajid Bhai ! Jo aapne meri koshish ko kimti waqt diyaa ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkash naresh saheb...
daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega....
Vikram Ji ... Koshish ko saraahane aur aapki daad ka bahut bahut shukriya ... Khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

Bahut Nazdiik Tha Cheharaa Unke
Tamanna Chhuune MeN Raat Ho Gai ...


kya baat hai naresh bhai.. uff wo muhabbat.. nadaan muhabbat jaane kya kya yaad dila gai aapki ye koshish.. yoon samajh lo aap ne ek baar fir se meri muhabbat nai kar diii ... dil se daad haaazir hai..
Shaad Ji .... Aadaab !

Koshish ko pasand karne aur dili daad ka bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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priya naresh ji .. aapkee rachna mein is tarah prem bhavna ki komal abhivyakti hai ki lagta hai ki woh ek sundar pratima hai jismein aapne jeevan daal diya hai ...

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Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
Tasveer Se Unki Mulaakaat Ho Gai ...

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Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

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aapki pasandegi aur humeshaa saath ka bahut bahut shukriya .. khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath ... !




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Ji .... Good One ............
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priya naresh ji .. aapkee rachna mein is tarah prem bhavna ki komal abhivyakti hai ki lagta hai ki woh ek sundar pratima hai jismein aapne jeevan daal diya hai ...

khas taur se in ashaar ne to ghazab dha diya ...

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
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Zulf Ka Khulnaa Hii Ghazab Thaa
Yeh Kis Mausam Ki Barsaat Ho Gai ...

tah e dil se daad aur dua ke saath .... zarraa
Zarraa Ji ... Aadaab !

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Bhaiya.......bahut bahut bahutttttttttt khoob likha hai aapne, padne meiN bhi majja aaya, bahut lai meiN likha hai aapne, yeh 2 ahsaas to bas dil loot le gaye...!

Kitaab Ka Warq Palatke Dekhaa
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