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Ghazal: haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do... - 25th February 2012, 10:18 PM

aadaab dosto,

kaise haiN aap sab? umeed hai khairiyat se honge.. yahaan aana thoda kum ho gaya hai iske liye maufi chahta hun.. ek taaza ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai.

maayoos saare din jo hai raatoeN meiN badal do
haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

hawas ki hai hawaa chali, insaan se bacho
ikhlaas jo bhi dil meiN hai saansoeN meiN badal do

hai agar majaal to, mazhab ke nigahbaan
ruuh ko bhi kyun nahin zaatoeN meiN badal do?

aap se dar khwaast hai bismil ke khudaya
woh yaad aayega hameiN yaadoeN meiN badal do


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28th February 2012, 07:43 AM

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

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28th February 2012, 11:06 AM

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aadaab dosto,

kaise haiN aap sab? umeed hai khairiyat se honge.. yahaan aana thoda kum ho gaya hai iske liye maufi chahta hun.. ek taaza ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai.

maayoos saare din jo hai raatoeN meiN badal do
haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

hawas ki hai hawaa chali, insaan se bacho
ikhlaas jo bhi dil meiN hai saansoeN meiN badal do

hai agar majaal to, mazhab ke nigahbaan
ruuh ko bhi kyun nahin zaatoeN meiN badal do?

aap se dar khwaast hai bismil ke khudaya
woh yaad aayega hameiN yaadoeN meiN badal do


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28th February 2012, 03:09 PM

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aadaab dosto,

kaise haiN aap sab? umeed hai khairiyat se honge.. yahaan aana thoda kum ho gaya hai iske liye maufi chahta hun.. ek taaza ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai.

maayoos saare din jo hai raatoeN meiN badal do
haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

hawas ki hai hawaa chali, insaan se bacho
ikhlaas jo bhi dil meiN hai saansoeN meiN badal do

hai agar majaal to, mazhab ke nigahbaan
ruuh ko bhi kyun nahin zaatoeN meiN badal do?

aap se dar khwaast hai bismil ke khudaya
woh yaad aayega hameiN yaadoeN meiN badal do


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maayoos saare din jo hai raatoeN meiN badal do
haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

hawas ki hai hawaa chali, insaan se bacho
ikhlaas jo bhi dil meiN hai saansoeN meiN badal do

hai agar majaal to, mazhab ke nigahbaan
ruuh ko bhi kyun nahin zaatoeN meiN badal do?

aap se dar khwaast hai bismil ke khudaya
woh yaad aayega hameiN yaadoeN meiN badal do


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aadaab dosto,

kaise haiN aap sab? umeed hai khairiyat se honge.. yahaan aana thoda kum ho gaya hai iske liye maufi chahta hun.. ek taaza ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai.

maayoos saare din jo hai raatoeN meiN badal do
haasil nahi jo khwaab wo khwaaboeN meiN badal do

baithe rahoge aaj bhi rishtoeN ki shaakh par?
gairoeN ko ja milo gale yaaroeN meiN badal do

kisne kahaa hai aapse, khaamosh ab raho
bigdi agar jo baat hai baatoeN meiN badal do

hawas ki hai hawaa chali, insaan se bacho
ikhlaas jo bhi dil meiN hai saansoeN meiN badal do

hai agar majaal to, mazhab ke nigahbaan
ruuh ko bhi kyun nahin zaatoeN meiN badal do?

aap se dar khwaast hai bismil ke khudaya
woh yaad aayega hameiN yaadoeN meiN badal do


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