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hai takaaza ke dil ko maareN bhi - 19th August 2014, 02:34 AM

kuch arsa qabl ek qit'aa post kiya tha jis par ehbaab ne daad ataa farmaayi, ba-sad-mazrat keh raha hooN ki waqt ki qillat kuch aisi rahi ke maiN un dostoN ka shukriya adaa nahiiN kar paaya, kal jawaab haazir karooNga

ek taaza Ghazal ke do she'r chaspaaN kar raha hooN, ummeed hai kisi kaam ke hoNge


hai takaaza ke dil ko maareN bhi
aur phir haNs ke din guzaareN bhi

aap ki, bad-salookiyaaN bhi saheN
jaan-o-dil aap hi pe vaareN bhi!?


kyoN bhyee!!


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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19th August 2014, 03:03 AM

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hai takaaza ke dil ko maareN bhi
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kiyaa kehny moHteram ... bahut umdaa . dil ko maarna bhee hai or haNs ke guzzarna bhee hai , bhai waaH !!!



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aap ki, bad-salookiyaaN bhi saheN
jaan-o-dil aap hi pe vaareN bhi!?

bahut Khoob !
woh taqaazaa dunyaa ka tha yeh taqaazaa muhabbat ka hai

laa jawaab dono sher

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19th August 2014, 10:59 AM

khoob se khoobtar sher kah diye janaabe aali..... waahhh kyaa kahne....

Allah aur nawaaze...... daad pesh hain

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19th August 2014, 11:58 AM

bahut umda sher pesh kiye hai,maikash jee....daad kubul kare.



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Bahut -bahut .....umda ashaar huye hai...daad
   
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hai takaaza ke dil ko maareN bhi
aur phir haNs ke din guzaareN bhi

aap ki, bad-salookiyaaN bhi saheN
jaan-o-dil aap hi pe vaareN bhi!?


wahhhh! waaah! waaah! Maikash saheb,

Aap ne sacche pyar ki khoobsorat misaal pesh ki hai,
iss dil-nasheeN-o-dilfareeb qita ne meHfil ko chaar chaand laga diye!

Mukammal ghazal ka besabri se intezaar rahe ga!

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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19th August 2014, 07:33 PM

waaaaah Maikash sahab waaaaah !! bahaut lutf haasil hua in 2 aashaar ka, pooree ghazal ki tishnagi bhi reh gayee !! tah e dil se dheron daad !!


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19th August 2014, 09:18 PM

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kiyaa kehny moHteram ... bahut umdaa . dil ko maarna bhee hai or haNs ke guzzarna bhee hai , bhai waaH !!!






bahut Khoob !
woh taqaazaa dunyaa ka tha yeh taqaazaa muhabbat ka hai

laa jawaab dono sher

zor e qalam aur zyadaa
pazira'ii ke iNtehaa'ii mashkoor hooN aapka bhai

rab raakha
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goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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19th August 2014, 09:41 PM

maikash bhaiya

Pranaam SSA

Sher donon hi laa-jawaab. Dil se daad

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Jsk

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19th August 2014, 10:34 PM

Bahut ache maikash sahib ..kya baat hai janaab , bemissal hai aap ka andaaz..

Apkee shayri ke bare me do lines meri taraf se ..( chota munh bari baat)

vaise tau hum bahut kum bolte hain ,her baat kehne se pehle tolte hain.
Per jab bhi moonh kholte hain phool khud ba khud jharne lagte hain
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