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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani


na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….


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Mai koi pashemaani wala kaam nahiN karti isliye dimag mein koi sher nahiN araha hai
haa haa haaaa......
bahot khub......
vaise pashemaanii nahiN hone wale sher bhii toh keh saktii ho?



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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani


na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!

dekha... kitnii inspirational hai Nazneen saahibaa?

Hassanbhai bhii inspired ho gaye unkii baatoN se



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9th September 2014, 11:48 AM

hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo



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waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!

dekha... kitnii inspirational hai Nazneen saahibaa?

Hassanbhai bhii inspired ho gaye unkii baatoN se
batieN ... konsi bateN

bhai... aik seedhe saahay purush per yeH ilzaam aayad na kejiye...
hum kisi se inspired nahi haiN.. bas shayari shoq hai zoq hai....

bohat bohat shukriyaaH pasandeedgi ke liye...


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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani


na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
pashemaan nahi maiN iss janam meN.......
mujhe fikr hai agle chheh janmoN kii........



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hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo
waaahh! behad umdaaH khayaal hai Adil bhai..
aur waah... kia soch hai....... aap ki soch ko salaam pesh karta hooN....
bas daad hi daad..


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waaahh! behad umdaaH khayaal hai Adil bhai..
aur waah... kia soch hai....... aap ki soch ko salaam pesh karta hooN....
bas daad hi daad..
Hassanbhai,

dilse aapka behad maskuur hooN....

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pashemaan nahi maiN iss janam meN.......
mujhe fikr hai agle chheh janmoN kii........

hahahahaha..

kia khoob alteration ki hai.. maan gaye saheb..
aap ne to mehfil-e-fusoon ko mehfil-e-shugal-mela bana diya


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hahahahaha..

kia khoob alteration ki hai.. maan gaye saheb..
aap ne to mehfil-e-fusson ko mehfil-e-shugal-mela bana diya
LOLzzzzzz....

bas yuN hi logoN ke khayaalii pulav, saat janm saath nibhaanaa, vagairah vagairah pe khayaal aa gayaa.. aapka sher paRH ke ...............



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dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii

(*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting)



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LOLzzzzzz....

bas yuN hi logoN ke khayaalii pulav, chheh janm saath nibhaanaa, vagairah vagairah pe khayaal aa gayaa.. aapka sher paRH ke ...............
saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai
nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN
khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..

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dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii

(*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting)
waaahh! Adil bhai.... aap jiye to aise jiye...
bohat accha jiye...... qaabil-e-tareef hai aap ka jeena.....
sabhi ghumoN ko saath le kar jiye per kabhi pashemaaN na huay... wahh!
dherooN daad iss besh-qemati khayaal ke liye.....


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waaaahhh! Ananth sir.... bohat khoob...
lekin maiN aap ke sher ko iss taraH lonH ga ke bandaH iss taraH zindagi
guzaaray ke saray us ke husn-e-akhlaaq ke taabay hooN!.. aur woH hur
dil azeez ho........ insanooN meiN bhi aur farishtoN meiN bhi... aur
jahaN tak meri kam-aqli hai farishtay pashemaaN nahi hotay.....
socch aacchi hai lekin thodi si alteration honi chaiye.. farishta lafz
istemaal na kareN...... mere hisaab se! aur aagay aap behtar
samjhtay haiN.....
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
ye lafz 'farishte' aur unkaa pashemaan hona mujhe bhii khatak rahaa tha ....

par uspe kuchh aur raaye dene se pehle maiN Ananthji kii baat samajhnaa chaahtaa tha jo wo yahaaN bayaan karnaa chaahte haiN.

chaliye hassanbhai, aapne ab jab mudda uTHaa hi liyaa hai to, Ananthji se pehle iiskii interpretation dekh lete haiN.. shaayad unkii zehn meN kuch aisii baat ho jo hameN na samajh aayee ho ?

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Waaaaahhhh! jij umda sher hai bas ek word change kar dijiye jaisa ki PS ne bhi point out kiya ki farishtey pashemaaN nahiN hote....sher o shayari meiN humeiN thoda religious sentiments ka bhi khayal rakhna chahiye i hope jij u dont mind

lijiye aadeil sahab,Hassan bhai aur saali sahiba muzrim haazir hai aaplogon ka...my sincere appologies if i hav unknowingly hurt religious sentiments...mere aaise koi irada nahi tha...m more than ready to change the word if suggested any alternative...but i would like to state the context out of which I used that word.I have attempted to use Hindu mythology n beliefs in that...first of all I used "Farishte as a messenger of GOD."According to Hindu mythology...YAMA is the God of death...he has a assistant known as CHITRA GUPT....who (chitra gupt) maintains the book of life of all humans on the planet...in which he records the noble deeds and sins committed by each individual...he also maintains the time of death of each person...when a persons time arrives he advices the God of death...who inturn sends a messenger to bring the soul of that person...so according to my version a person should live a glorious life full of noble deeds so dat when the god of death sends his messenger to pick him up he shall be embarrased to pick up that soul as he lived a glorious life full of noble deeds yet he has to go coz that how the cycle of life goes on...I hope that I was able to explain my context..however any other suggestion is most welcome n Hassan bhai u can suggest me a word to change Farishte





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saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai
nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN
khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..

saat : seven
waaah... masha allah!!!!!

Hassanbhai, ab ye kaun laRkii kii baat chheR lii aapne?

magar mera khayaal hai ki agar laRke iis qadr jiite aaye haiN toh laRkiyaaN kyuN nahi jii saktii? toh uus khayaal pe aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad....



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lijiye aadeil sahab,Hassan bhai aur saali sahiba muzrim haazir hai aaplogon ka...my sincere appologies if i hav unknowingly hurt religious sentiments...mere aaise koi irada nahi tha...m more than ready to change the word if suggested any alternative...but i would like to state the context out of which I used that word.I have attempted to use Hindu mythology n beliefs in that...first of all I used "Farishte as a messenger of GOD."According to Hindu mythology...YAMA is the God of death...he has a assistant known as CHITRA GUPT....who (chitra gupt) maintains the book of life of all humans on the planet...in which he records the noble deeds and sins committed by each individual...he also maintains the time of death of each person...when a persons time arrives he advices the God of death...who inturn sends a messenger to bring the soul of that person...so according to my version a person should live a glorious life full of noble deeds so dat when the god of death sends his messenger to pick him up he shall be embarrased to pick up that soul as he lived a glorious life full of noble deeds yet he has to go coz that how the cycle of life goes on...I hope that I was able to explain my context..however any other suggestion is most welcome n Hassan bhai u can suggest me a word to change Farishte
Ananth sir.. itni izzat bakhshne ke liye aur
hamari sab ki baat rakhne ke liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaaH,
aap ki ijaazat se misraa saani meiN alteration kar raha hooN..
umeed hai aap mutafiQ hooN ge:-


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waaah... masha allah!!!!!

Hassanbhai, ab ye kaun laRkii kii baat chheR lii aapne?

magar mera khayaal hai ki agar laRke iis qadr jiite aaye haiN toh laRkiyaaN kyuN nahi jii saktii? toh uus khayaal pe aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad....
Adil bhai.. mohabbatoN se nawaazne ke liye behad shukriyaaH!
aur jee janab.. hum to issi haQ meiN haiN aur aap se poori taraH mutafiQ haiN...


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Ananth sir.. itni izzat bakhshne ke liye aur
hamari sab ki baat rakhne ke liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaaH,
aap ki ijaazat se misraa saani meiN alteration kar raha hooN..
umeed hai aap mutafiQ hooN ge:-

karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh iis tarah se saraa-e-faani main
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beti ke janam pe na ho pashemaaN!
kal yeHi roshan kare gi tera jahaN....


janam : birth
superb HSN bhai...bahuttttttttt umda sher kaha hai aapne aur yeh baat sahi bhi hai...betiyaaN hai to khushiyaa hai, jis ghar meiN beti nahi wo ghar ghar nahi


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ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve
aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve?
dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?



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ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve
aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve?
dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?
wahhh ... Adil bhai.. bohat bohat khoob..
kia kamaal ka qit'a pesh kiya hai... DherooN daad ka nazraana khaas iss qit'a ke liye..


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superb HSN bhai...bahuttttttttt umda sher kaha hai aapne aur yeh baat sahi bhi hai...betiyaaN hai to khushiyaa hai, jis ghar meiN beti nahi wo ghar ghar nahi
Baaji..... aik haqeeqat ko le kar kuch alfaazoN se apne dil
ki baat kehne ki koshish ki hai... mujhe accha laga ke aap ko pasand aayi
meri koshish........ bohat bohat shukriyaaH!

Apna khayaal rakhiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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lafz karm ko tabdiil karke 'kaaj' kiyaa hai......
raaye kii ummeed rahegiii
arey insaan! tu kitnaa hai pashemaan?
kare bad* kaaj** jab bhii, zudd-pashemaan***?

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--Adil


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pashemaan nahi maiN iss janam meN.......
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dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii

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saat janam saath nibhaane ka kehti hai!
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khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai..

saat : seven
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dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo
aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve?

WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! ek se badhkar ek....sabhi ko dheron daad ....bohat khoob





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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad

jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain

*extreme torture
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kaLse fusooN par itni bar to pashemaaN ho chuke
Naaz,
dear mere ek bhii sher meN maine ye nahi likhaa hai ki maiN pashemaan hooN...

hum pashemaan hone waloN meN se nahi hai, mohtarmaa....
zaraa phirse gaur farmaaiye......


Waaaaahhhh! fusooN e adil full on bahot khoob dear [/QUOTE]

Thanks a lot, Naaz.....

waiting for your aashaar............... eagerly..................



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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad

jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain

*extreme torture
**dowry
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Ananthji,

aapne ek behad hi sensitive aur aham mudde pe aavaaz uTHaaii hai......

dahej ke liye, maarpit, pareshaan karnaa, mental & physical torture, abuse.... pataa nahi ye sab havaskhori kab band hogii.............

bahot hi khub bayaanaat huii hai, janaab........

dheroN daad.....



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Ananthji,

aapka bahot bahot shukriya............



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jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad

jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain

*extreme torture
**dowry
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!
Ananth sir.. aap ne kia dil soz.. jigar-andooz muDay per haath rakha hai..
dard hi dard hai..... khalish hi khalish hai.........
aik haqeeqat hai .. is se nam hum door bhaag saktay haiN na aap...
bas Allah se dua hai ke sab ko hiDayat day (ameen)....

aap ki socch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.. sir.....


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bunch of thanks sir.... though aap mera aik sher phad'hna miss kar gaye..



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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani


na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam!
aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam….
WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Hassan bhai...dheron daad





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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. I'm flattered Naaz...


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WAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Hassan bhai...dheron daad
be-had shukriyaaH Ananth sir.. yaad dihaani ke liye..
ke yeH sher bhi maiN ne likha tha...

I'm obliged, sir! take care..


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bahuttttttttttttt sahi kaha hai aapne Anant ji...dil ku chu gya aapka sher.

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10th September 2014, 12:04 PM

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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
PashemaaN hotey gar ruswaaii se dartey
waaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Naaz,
iis sher ko paRHke maaloom hota hai, kyuN itna shaant baithii thii .......

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dheroN dheroN dheroN daad...........................



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10th September 2014, 12:16 PM

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very sensitive issue i've seen worst cases of dowry crime
bahot khoob jij....touched my heart.

Thanx for the appreciation saali sahiba Most daughters dont even tell their parents that they are subjected to extreme torture by the in-laws.





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10th September 2014, 12:18 PM

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Ananthji,
aapne ek behad hi sensitive aur aham mudde pe aavaaz uTHaaii hai......
dahej ke liye, maarpit, pareshaan karnaa, mental & physical torture, abuse.... pataa nahi ye sab havaskhori kab band hogii.............
bahot hi khub bayaanaat huii hai, janaab........
dheroN daad.....
Bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...ji sahi kaha aap ne ye humari society ka ek kaala sach hai.





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10th September 2014, 12:21 PM

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!
Ananth sir.. aap ne kia dil soz.. jigar-andooz muDay per haath rakha hai..
dard hi dard hai..... khalish hi khalish hai.........
aik haqeeqat hai .. is se nam hum door bhaag saktay haiN na aap...
bas Allah se dua hai ke sab ko hiDayat day (ameen)....
aap ki socch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.. sir.....
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10th September 2014, 12:27 PM

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10th September 2014, 12:29 PM

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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
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Bohat khoob...bohat umdaa sher hai saali sahiba...dheron daad





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NaazaaN the ishQ meiN charche sar-e-aam the
PashemaaN hotey gar ruswaaii se dartey
waaaahh! Naaz...
isssi ka naam zindagi hai.. issi ka naam jeena hai..
issi ka naam khul ke zindagi meiN sar-e-aam pyaar karna hai...

bohat khoob... adaigi bhi khoob rahii.. aur waahh! kia takhyyul hai..

maan gaye saaheb... ..


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