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DostoN bohat ho gayi pashemaani... ab ho jaye kuch ishQ ki mehrbaaani
 na ho pashemaaN apne pyar pe sanam! aise hi nahi milay hum tum iss janam…. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 11:45 AM
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bahot khub...... vaise pashemaanii nahiN hone wale sher bhii toh keh saktii ho?  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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9th September 2014, 11:46 AM
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dekha... kitnii inspirational hai Nazneen saahibaa? Hassanbhai bhii inspired ho gaye unkii baatoN se ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:48 AM
hai pashiimaanii tujhe kiis Gam pe aey insaan bataa
hai guloN kii bhii haqiiqat khaar meN palte haiN wo ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:50 AM
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 konsi bateN bhai... aik seedhe saahay purush per yeH ilzaam aayad na kejiye... hum kisi se inspired nahi haiN.. bas shayari shoq hai zoq hai....  bohat bohat shukriyaaH pasandeedgi ke liye... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 11:51 AM
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mujhe fikr hai agle chheh janmoN kii........  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:53 AM
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aur waah... kia soch hai....... aap ki soch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.... bas daad hi daad.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 11:56 AM
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dilse aapka behad maskuur hooN.... Regards Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 11:59 AM
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hahahahaha..kia khoob alteration ki hai.. maan gaye saheb.. aap ne to mehfil-e-fusoon ko mehfil-e-shugal-mela bana diya tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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bas yuN hi logoN ke khayaalii pulav, saat janm saath nibhaanaa, vagairah vagairah pe khayaal aa gayaa.. aapka sher paRH ke ...............ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 12:36 PM
dil-e-naadaaN na samjhaa ishq meN kitnaa ta-assuuf* hai
sahey Gum phir bhii tarz-e-naa-pashiimaanii** nahiN chhoRii (*grief, regret, remorse; habit of not regretting) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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jisay hum chahtay haiN woH laDki aisi hai nahi hoti pashemaaN woH jaan-e-jaaN khul ke jeeti hai, khul ke pyaar karti hai.. saat : seven tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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bohat accha jiye...... qaabil-e-tareef hai aap ka jeena..... sabhi ghumoN ko saath le kar jiye per kabhi pashemaaN na huay... wahh! dherooN daad iss besh-qemati khayaal ke liye..... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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lijiye aadeil sahab,Hassan bhai aur saali sahiba muzrim haazir hai aaplogon ka...my sincere appologies if i hav unknowingly hurt religious sentiments...mere aaise koi irada nahi tha...m more than ready to change the word if suggested any alternative...but i would like to state the context out of which I used that word.I have attempted to use Hindu mythology n beliefs in that...first of all I used "Farishte as a messenger of GOD."According to Hindu mythology...YAMA is the God of death...he has a assistant known as CHITRA GUPT....who (chitra gupt) maintains the book of life of all humans on the planet...in which he records the noble deeds and sins committed by each individual...he also maintains the time of death of each person...when a persons time arrives he advices the God of death...who inturn sends a messenger to bring the soul of that person...so according to my version a person should live a glorious life full of noble deeds so dat when the god of death sends his messenger to pick him up he shall be embarrased to pick up that soul as he lived a glorious life full of noble deeds yet he has to go coz that how the cycle of life goes on...I hope that I was able to explain my context..however any other suggestion is most welcome n Hassan bhai u can suggest me a word to change Farishte Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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9th September 2014, 01:02 PM
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Hassanbhai, ab ye kaun laRkii kii baat chheR lii aapne? magar mera khayaal hai ki agar laRke iis qadr jiite aaye haiN toh laRkiyaaN kyuN nahi jii saktii? toh uus khayaal pe aapko bahot bahot mubaarakbaad.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 01:19 PM
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hamari sab ki baat rakhne ke liye teh-e-dil se shukriyaaH, aap ki ijaazat se misraa saani meiN alteration kar raha hooN.. umeed hai aap mutafiQ hooN ge:- karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh iis tarah se saraa-e-faani main makhlooQ bhi rahe pashemaaN ke chala gaya aik acchaa insaaN… tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 01:21 PM
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aur jee janab.. hum to issi haQ meiN haiN aur aap se poori taraH mutafiQ haiN... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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9th September 2014, 01:22 PM
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9th September 2014, 01:55 PM
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.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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9th September 2014, 01:55 PM
ek qi'taa... dil-fareb maashukaa pe.....
kHo diya dil to pashemaan huve aaj kyuN itnaa wo hairaan huve? dil khilaunaa hai samajhte the wo aaj phir kyuN wo pareshaan huve? ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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9th September 2014, 03:44 PM
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kia kamaal ka qit'a pesh kiya hai... DherooN daad ka nazraana khaas iss qit'a ke liye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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ki baat kehne ki koshish ki hai... mujhe accha laga ke aap ko pasand aayi meri koshish........ bohat bohat shukriyaaH! Apna khayaal rakhiye ga, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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10th September 2014, 07:45 AM
jalai jaati hain ladkiyaan aaj bhi azaab-e-aliim* k baad
jahez ** lene-dene waale kahan pashemaan hue hain *extreme torture **dowry Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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10th September 2014, 10:25 AM
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dear mere ek bhii sher meN maine ye nahi likhaa hai ki maiN pashemaan hooN... hum pashemaan hone waloN meN se nahi hai, mohtarmaa....  zaraa phirse gaur farmaaiye...... Waaaaahhhh! fusooN e adil full on bahot khoob dear [/QUOTE]Thanks a lot, Naaz..... waiting for your aashaar............... eagerly.................. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Ananthji, aapne ek behad hi sensitive aur aham mudde pe aavaaz uTHaaii hai...... dahej ke liye, maarpit, pareshaan karnaa, mental & physical torture, abuse.... pataa nahi ye sab havaskhori kab band hogii............. bahot hi khub bayaanaat huii hai, janaab........ dheroN daad..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 10:32 AM
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya............ ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 10:58 AM
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Ananth sir.. aap ne kia dil soz.. jigar-andooz muDay per haath rakha hai.. dard hi dard hai..... khalish hi khalish hai......... aik haqeeqat hai .. is se nam hum door bhaag saktay haiN na aap... bas Allah se dua hai ke sab ko hiDayat day (ameen).... aap ki socch ko salaam pesh karta hooN.. sir..... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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ke yeH sher bhi maiN ne likha tha... I'm obliged, sir! take care.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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bahuttttttttttttt sahi kaha hai aapne Anant ji...dil ku chu gya aapka sher. reps added +++ .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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10th September 2014, 12:04 PM
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Naaz, iis sher ko paRHke maaloom hota hai, kyuN itna shaant baithii thii .......bahot hi khubsurat khayaal pesh kiya.... pride in love...... beautiful thought, reflecting positive approach to love........................ dheroN dheroN dheroN daad........................... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th September 2014, 12:16 PM
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Thanx for the appreciation saali sahiba Most daughters dont even tell their parents that they are subjected to extreme torture by the in-laws.Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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very sensitive issue i've seen worst cases of dowry crime |
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10th September 2014, 12:18 PM
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Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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10th September 2014, 12:21 PM
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AmeenMohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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10th September 2014, 12:27 PM
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Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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10th September 2014, 12:29 PM
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Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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(#1160)
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10th September 2014, 12:39 PM
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isssi ka naam zindagi hai.. issi ka naam jeena hai.. issi ka naam khul ke zindagi meiN sar-e-aam pyaar karna hai... bohat khoob... adaigi bhi khoob rahii.. aur waahh! kia takhyyul hai.. maan gaye saaheb... .. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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