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Love SDC ke members kii taarif meN (ruba'yaat) - 10th September 2014, 04:51 PM

hamaare interview ke dauraan, Sunita dii ne arz kiya tha ki hum hamaare yahaaN maujud dostoN ke baare meN kuchh pesh kare... toH aaj yahaaN hum aap sabhii kii taarif meN ye ruba'yaat pesh kar rahe haiN..

Ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegii....

zaraa sun lo maiN laayaa hooN mere dil ka jo nazraanaa
sar-e-mehfil-e-shayri ke sitaaroN kaa hai afsaanaa
zaraa dil thaam ke baiTHo sabhii kii baateN karnii hai
yahaaN har shaks hai apnaa nahiN koii hai begaanaa

yahaaN ek shakhsiyat aisii jo hum sab kii dulaarii hai
sabhii sammaan dete haiN bulaate pyaar se dii hai
ye Sunita hai jinko hum sabhii dil meN basaate haiN
hameshaa khush rehnaa tum duaa tumko hamaarii hai

hai jauhar apne vaalid kii ye kaun hai hum bataate haiN
ye un meN se hi ek aisii jo ye mehfil sajaate haiN
hai Zainy naam uskaa jo naginaa bazm-e-shayri kaa
hamaaraa saath hai tumko ye hum vishvaas dilaate haiN

sabhii hum bazm daaroN meN hai ek apnaa dil-o-jaanaa
jo KHud ko kehte adnaa par samandar hai wo irfaaN* kaa
na jaao naam pe unke ye Zarraa ansh hamaaraa hai
hamaari hai duaa purii tumharii ho manokaamnaa
(*knowledge, wisdom)

kanval saa khiltaa jheel meN kanval saa naam jinka hai
bahot kam boltaa lekin pate kii baat kartaa hai
kahe Aru magar hai naam Arvind jo khile dil meN
hameshaa yuN rahe dil meN sabhii ke jaise rehtaa hai

rahe benaam sa lekin kare sirkat jo mehfil meN
machaaye dhoom kuchh aisii banaa le jaa sabhii dil meN
kahe Anjaan khud ko par ilmoN kaa khazaanaa wo
zaraa rakhnaa meri khaatir jagah apne baRe dil meN

agar likhooN koii tehriir magar unkii na taarif ho
lage aise zaraa humse unhe ruswaaii hai kuchh to
sharaarat unkii baatoN meN rahe wo Shaad hi hardam
duaa itnii KHudaa se wo hameshaa shaad rakhe tujhko

uDaaneN unchii hai jiskii jise paane ko chalde hum
vahaaN kaise koii pahunche jahaaN koii nahi aalam
Ufaq kehte haiN sab jisko falak se arsh mile jaise
sabhii kaa pyaar paanaa ye duaa meri tumhe hardam

kahaaN tu aa gayii leke zamiin pe aasmaaN jaise
sitaaraa bhii chalaa aayaa tera majnooN bane jaise
Parii KHud ko tu kehtii hai Ananth meN khoii rehtii hai
duaa dono ko khush rehna hameshaa aaj ke jaise

jo mastaanii kahe KHud ko wo divaanii bhii rehtii hai
magar wo hai jo divaanii to apne Mast kii kehtii hai
banaaii kya hai joRi aur naam bhi Mast aur Masti kaa
raho taa-umr tum yuN hi ye mehfil tumse kehtii hai

karo unse savaal koii javaab unkaa rahe sachchaa
kisii bhii uljhanoN kaa unse mil jaayega hal achchhaa
isii fitrat pe rakhkhaa hai unhoN ne naam Zidd yaaroN
merii arzoo rahe apnaa hameshaa hi hunar pakkaa

hamaari bazm meN hai ek phool aisaa khilaa yaaroN
jahaaN jaaye wo muskaaye machaaye dhuum kya yaaroN
hamaari naak hai wo to hamaari Naaz hai wo to
zaraa bachke hi rehnaa kab karegii kya pataa yaaroN

KHuda kaa wo parastaar hai khuda ka naam letaa wo
ibaadat hi muhabbat aur muhabbat meN ibaadat ho
Hassan bandaa hai parvar kaa hamaarii aaNkh ka taaraa hai
hameshaa khush rahe tu aur KHuda kii rehmateN bhii ho

sitaaroN kii ye mehfil meN kaii aise bhii taare haiN
chamakte haiN magar gumnaam se phir bhii hamaare haiN
sabhii ke kuchh apne bhii yagaane se thikaane haiN
sabhii se bantii ye dunya sabhii yaa-rab hamaare haiN

Ki hamdam ho Ki mujeeb ho Ki Ahmed ho Ki sukanya
Naresh bhi aur harash bhii hai harek naam meN hai bas maayaa
sabhii kii hai jagah dil meN kisii ko bhuul nahi paauuN
rubaaii ke hi avval aur aakhir meN bayaaN aayaa
~ Adil



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10th September 2014, 04:59 PM

bahut umdah !!!

kharree tareef kii appne sabhee dostoN kee , mazaa aa gayaa peRHny mai .

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10th September 2014, 05:00 PM

WAH WAH ! ....Bohat khoob...super duper ruba'yaat of the year!........

Per jinke naam nahi unse pitne ke liye tayyar rahiye...

Kidding!..




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10th September 2014, 05:03 PM

waah waah adil jee......kya adbhut kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.....kya adayegi aur kya bayangi hai......sach me padkar maja aa gaya.....dil se nikke jajbaat.....



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चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था

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10th September 2014, 05:21 PM

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bahut umdah !!!

kharree tareef kii appne sabhee dostoN kee , mazaa aa gayaa peRHny mai .

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WAH WAH ! ....Bohat khoob...super duper ruba'yaat of the year!........

Per jinke naam nahi unse pitne ke liye tayyar rahiye...

Kidding!..
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waah waah adil jee......kya adbhut kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.....kya adayegi aur kya bayangi hai......sach me padkar maja aa gaya.....dil se nikke jajbaat.....
Mujibbhai, Aruji aur Zainyji...

aap sabhi kaa teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN...



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Adil bhai,

sacch meiN aap ne aaj aik karishma kar dikhaya....
dil ki gehraaiyoN se bas wah wah hi nikal rahi aur
aap ne jiss mohabbat se nawaaza hai apne dostooN ko
uss liye bas duayeN hi nikal rahi haiN mann se....
Ishq hi ishq hai kalaam meiN ... pyar hi pyar hai alfaazoN meN....
bas bhai Allah se dua hai ke aap hamesha khush raheN aabaad raheN (ameen)..
aur aap ne mujhe jo izzat bakhshi hai maiN aap ka qarz-daar
ho gaya hooN... waqt aane pe zaroor yeH qarz chukaoN ga insha Allah..

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apna khayaal rakhiye ga!

duaooN ke saath,

Khaaksaar,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")

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WAH WAH ! ....Bohat khoob...super duper ruba'yaat of the year!........

Per jinke naam nahi unse pitne ke liye tayyar rahiye...

Kidding!..
Aadeil.Bhai ...

Kya baat hai , aap ki koshosh kabile tareef hai...

Arz kiya hai ..

Aap ka ye dilchasp andaaz humein bahut bhaya:
Naraz hai aapse ki humara naam nahi aya.

shayad hum aap ke tareef ke kaabil na.thhe
ya phir aap doston ko kojne mein uljhe hue the.

Jaate jaate bus aap se guzarish karte hain
Agli kaavish mein pehle no hone ki umeed rakhte hai


Vaise aap ne akhri pehre mein Chamakte gumnaam taaron mein humara naam likh diya hai



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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10th September 2014, 07:51 PM

Ki hamdam ho Ki mujeeb ho Ki Ahmed ho Ki sukanya
Naresh bhi aur harash bhii hai harek naam meN hai bas maayaa
sabhii kii hai jagah dil meN kisii ko bhuul nahi paauuN
rubaaii ke hi avval aur aakhir meN bayaaN aayaa



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Ki hamdam ho Ki mujeeb ho Ki Ahmed ho Ki sukanya
Naresh bhi aur harash bhii hai harek naam meN hai bas maayaa
sabhii kii hai jagah dil meN kisii ko bhuul nahi paauuN
rubaaii ke hi avval aur aakhir meN bayaaN aayaa
Aadeil Bhai ,

Aap bus aap hi hain .. itna prompt jawab aa gaya aapka , main aapka mushkoor ho gaya ....

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11th September 2014, 01:50 AM

Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab is izzat affzaayi aur duaon k liye....thanx a lot

Stay happy n blessed





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Wow! what a pleasant surprise, this is so touching adil....u r just amazing mere dost...well done

Kuch meri tarafse tumhare liye........

Wo dost hai sabka aur yaaroN ka yaar hai
Hai sabko wo pyara aur usey sabse pyar hai
Ghalib ka deewana FusooN apna chalata hai
DiloN ko jeet leta hai wo Aadeil 'safeer' kehlata hai
..............................................

Naaz,
I am touched by this gesture......
bahot hi khub rubaa'i likhii hai......
I accept this invaluable gift of yours..



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Adil bhai,

sacch meiN aap ne aaj aik karishma kar dikhaya....
dil ki gehraaiyoN se bas wah wah hi nikal rahi aur
aap ne jiss mohabbat se nawaaza hai apne dostooN ko
uss liye bas duayeN hi nikal rahi haiN mann se....
Ishq hi ishq hai kalaam meiN ... pyar hi pyar hai alfaazoN meN....
bas bhai Allah se dua hai ke aap hamesha khush raheN aabaad raheN (ameen)..
aur aap ne mujhe jo izzat bakhshi hai maiN aap ka qarz-daar
ho gaya hooN... waqt aane pe zaroor yeH qarz chukaoN ga insha Allah..

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apna khayaal rakhiye ga!

duaooN ke saath,

Khaaksaar,
Hassanbhai,
apne aap ko karz-daar keh kar hameN sharmindaa na kareN.... bas aap logoN kaa pyaar aur dostoN se jo izzat milii hai wo hamaare liye sabse baRaa nazraanaa hai

aap hameshaa khush raheN, yehi duaa hai



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Aadeil Bhai ,

Aap bus aap hi hain .. itna prompt jawab aa gaya aapka , main aapka mushkoor ho gaya ....

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Sanjayji,

bas yuN hi aapki duaa hamaare saath banii rahe......



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Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab is izzat affzaayi aur duaon k liye....thanx a lot

Stay happy n blessed
................................................ .....

Thanks Ananthji for such nice words.....



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Love dil se shukriya bhai - 11th September 2014, 09:58 AM

Aadeil bhai muje lafz nahi mil rhe, ki kaun se lafzoN se aapke en ehsaasoN ki tareef karuN, aik aik lafz apne-pan aur pyar se bharpoor hai, sacchi keh rhi hu...muje lafzoN ki kami mehsoos ho rhi hai...!

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kya kahuN aapke bare meiN, muje to kuch samaj nahi aata hai,
SDC par aakar sabse jud jata, koi na koi rishta nata hai,
aap neik-dil ensaan ho, sabse rishta nibhana aapko aata hai,
aap jaise shayroN se hi SDC ka gulshan harpal mehkata hai




Aadil bhai...aapne kuch dosto ke bare meiN apne ehsaas alag post meiN likhe hai, agar aap manjoori de to maiN unko maiN rubaye meiN add karna chahti hu, taaki usko bhi sab dost pad sake.
DuaoN ke saath


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Aadeil bhai muje lafz nahi mil rhe, ki kaun se lafzoN se aapke en ehsaasoN ki tareef karuN, aik aik lafz apne-pan aur pyar se bharpoor hai, sacchi keh rhi hu...muje lafzoN ki kami mehsoos ho rhi hai...!

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Aadil bhai...aapne kuch dosto ke bare meiN apne ehsaas alag post meiN likhe hai, agar aap manjoori de to maiN unko maiN rubaye meiN add karna chahti hu, taaki usko bhi sab dost pad sake.
DuaoN ke saath
Sunita dii,
aap iise ehsaan na kahiye... ye to aap sabhii kii mohabbat hai.....
aur hamaaraa farz hai...........

duaaoN ke saath........
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Aadeil bhai muje lafz nahi mil rhe, ki kaun se lafzoN se aapke en ehsaasoN ki tareef karuN, aik aik lafz apne-pan aur pyar se bharpoor hai, sacchi keh rhi hu...muje lafzoN ki kami mehsoos ho rhi hai...!

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kya kahuN aapke bare meiN, muje to kuch samaj nahi aata hai,
SDC par aakar sabse jud jata, koi na koi rishta nata hai,
aap neik-dil ensaan ho, sabse rishta nibhana aapko aata hai,
aap jaise shayroN se hi SDC ka gulshan harpal mehkata hai




Aadil bhai...aapne kuch dosto ke bare meiN apne ehsaas alag post meiN likhe hai, agar aap manjoori de to maiN unko maiN rubaye meiN add karna chahti hu, taaki usko bhi sab dost pad sake.
DuaoN ke saath
Sunita dii,

ye toh bahot hi achchhaa hoga agar aap mere alag se likhe misroN ko bhii original post meN shaamil kar deN......

aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN.....



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Sunita dii,
aap iise ehsaan na kahiye... ye to aap sabhii kii mohabbat hai.....
aur hamaaraa farz hai...........

duaaoN ke saath........
Adil
Aadeil bhai maine ehsaas likha hai shayad aapne us ehsaaN pada hai


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chamakte haiN magar gumnaam se phir bhii hamaare haiN
sabhii ke kuchh apne bhii yagaane se thikaane haiN
sabhii se bantii ye dunya sabhii yaa-rab hamaare haiN

Ki hamdam ho Ki mujeeb ho Ki Ahmed ho Ki sukanya
Naresh bhi aur harash bhii hai harek naam meN hai bas maayaa
sabhii kii hai jagah dil meN kisii ko bhuul nahi paauuN
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First I would like to clap for the breathless poetry you have composed.I know its really tough.Chalo abb Rachna ki baat karein.I would like to convey my big thanks to you for giving me place in your poetry.Kitni khoobsurti se sab ka varnan kiya hay.Sada Kush Raho


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Wow! what a pleasant surprise, this is so touching adil....u r just amazing mere dost...well done

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DiloN ko jeet leta hai wo Aadeil 'safeer' kehlata hai
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Aadeil bhai

aap ke khoosburat aur hairat anghez qalaam par daad doon, ki aap ke beinteha khuloos ka shukriya ada karoon, ki aap ne jo itni dariyadilee se pazeeraayee ki hai us le liye ehsaanmand ho jaaoon !!! to main n sirf ye sab bhi hoon, balki in se bhi kaheen zyada mashqoor o mamnoon hoon. Aur saath mein is qadar hairaan bhi hoon ki ek hi dil mein itna hunar aur itni mohabbat ek saath kaise bas rahi hai !!!

to bas aap ki shaan mein kuchh misre kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon, ye jaante huwe bhi ki aap ki shakhsiyat itni vishaal hai, ki ye misre suraj ko diya dikhaane ke jaise hain ...

kaho shaahon ka shah us ko faqeeron ka faqeer us ko
adab ki maano sargoshi ke aawaaz-e-zameer us ko
kamaan-e-ilm meiN jaane n teer-e-fiqr kitne haiN
nichhaavar jis pe ahl-e-bazm kehte haiN "Safeer" us ko



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Aadeil bhai maine ehsaas likha hai shayad aapne us ehsaaN pada hai
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Sunita dii,

These lines are really touching... And also thanks for the REPS......



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First I would like to clap for the breathless poetry you have composed.I know its really tough.Chalo abb Rachna ki baat karein.I would like to convey my big thanks to you for giving me place in your poetry.Kitni khoobsurti se sab ka varnan kiya hay.Sada Kush Raho
Sukanyaji,

aapka bahot bahot shukriya...... bas yuN hi aap sab ke dil meN hamaari jagah banii rahe ....

duaaoN ke saath,



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Aadeil bhai

aap ke khoosburat aur hairat anghez qalaam par daad doon, ki aap ke beinteha khuloos ka shukriya ada karoon, ki aap ne jo itni dariyadilee se pazeeraayee ki hai us le liye ehsaanmand ho jaaoon !!! to main n sirf ye sab bhi hoon, balki in se bhi kaheen zyada mashqoor o mamnoon hoon. Aur saath mein is qadar hairaan bhi hoon ki ek hi dil mein itna hunar aur itni mohabbat ek saath kaise bas rahi hai !!!

to bas aap ki shaan mein kuchh misre kehne ki koshish kar raha hoon, ye jaante huwe bhi ki aap ki shakhsiyat itni vishaal hai, ki ye misre suraj ko diya dikhaane ke jaise hain ...

kaho shaahon ka shah us ko faqeeron ka faqeer us ko
adab ki maano sargoshi ke aawaaz-e-zameer us ko
kamaan-e-ilm meiN jaane n teer-e-fiqr kitne haiN
nichhaavar jis pe ahl-e-bazm kehte haiN "Safeer" us ko



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Zarraasaab,

I am left speechless with all the love and respect that you have showered on me... aapke misroN ne hamaare dil ko chhuu liya hai........ yuN hi aapke dil meN hameN jagah dete rahiyegaa....

duaaoN ke saath................



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