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deedar-e-yaar meiN pashemaani kesi!
pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?


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deedar-e-yaar meiN pashemaani kesi!
pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Hassanbhai,

kya baat hai.... sahi kahaa.... pyaar kiya to Darnaa kya.....



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11th September 2014, 11:29 AM

shiiriin* sii khataa par wo pashiimaa.n-nazarii**

bhala kaun saza de aaise tifl-e-maasoom*** ko

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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kya baat hai.... sahi kahaa.... pyaar kiya to Darnaa kya.....
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Waaaaaahhhhh!!!! Hassan bhai ...bohat khoob
thankyou so so much guys................


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shiiriin* sii khataa par wo pashiimaa.n-nazarii**

bhala kaun saza de aaise tifl-e-maasoom*** ko

*sweet
**regretful looks
***innocent child
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Ananth sir..

masha Allah.. subhan Allah..... sadqe jaaoN iss pashemaan-nazaari per..

dherooN daad is khoobsorat aur naazuk se sher ke liye sir..... reps added


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shiiriin* sii khataa par wo pashiimaa.n-nazarii**

bhala kaun saza de aaise tifl-e-maasoom*** ko

*sweet
**regretful looks
***innocent child
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Ananthji,
bahot khub... lagtaa hai bachche ne koii sharaarat karke aapko aisa look diya hai? haa haa haaa...................

khush rahiye....................



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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Waaaahhhhh! bahot hi sweet and cute sa sher hai jij as adil said mujhe bhi lagta hai rudrah se inspired hokar ye sher bani hai
Naaz! ... mehboob bhi tifl-e-masoom ho sakta hai!

kuch aise insaaN bhi paaye jatay haiN dunia meiN jo mehboob ko
bachoN ki taraH deal karte haiN.. unheiN wesa hi pyaar karte haiN....

yeH meri raaye hai.. aap ikhtilaaf bhi rakh sakti haiN...


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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... Ananth sir..
masha Allah.. subhan Allah..... sadqe jaaoN iss pashemaan-nazaari per..
dherooN daad is khoobsorat aur naazuk se sher ke liye sir..... reps added
Bohat bohat shukriya Hassan bhai iss hausla affzaayi k liye thanx for the reps 2





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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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bahot khub... lagtaa hai bachche ne koii sharaarat karke aapko aisa look diya hai? haa haa haaa...................
khush rahiye....................
Bohat bohat shukriya Aadeil sahab...aap ne sahi farmaaya mere bete se hi inspired hai ye sher ...3 mahine ka hai sirf abhi se he seems to know all these





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12th September 2014, 11:02 AM

guzre waqt k baad hoti hai pashemaanii

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ye soch kar gar yun kiya hota to kya hota ?
waaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!
bahot khub, Ananthji.....
ye sach hai ki insaan karne ke baad hi sochte haiN ki ye kuch iis tarah kiya hota ya nahi kiya hota ..................



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yeah sir.. that's very true........

dherooN dherooN daad.........


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Love Mohabbat ki daastaaN...!! - 12th September 2014, 04:03 PM

aaj bohat khamoshi hai yahaN....
chalo khamoshi door karte haiN..
pesh-e-khidmat haiN kuch adh-adhooray alfaaz:-

mohabbat ki daastaaN

mohabbat ki daastaaN
zarra sun toH meri jaaN
ishQ karna nahi asaaN
kabhi karta hai hairaaN
to kabhi karta pashemaaN
rakhta hai ik alag shaaN
nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN
agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN
nazroN se haal hota bayaaN
lagta to hai be-zubaaN
per leta hai kayi imtehaaN
hewaaN ko banaye insaaN
yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN
gar kar le koi iss jahaN
saath rehta hai daaemaaN
teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN
jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN?

hewaaN : animal
daaemaaN : always


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***innocent child
areeeeeeeeeee wahhhh

Pari, etni gehri urdu....bahut kamaal


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isssi ka naam zindagi hai.. issi ka naam jeena hai..
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bohat khoob... adaigi bhi khoob rahii.. aur waahh! kia takhyyul hai..

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pyaar hai so hai, jag hansaayi kesi?
HSN bhai, aap ke sher pad kar to dil meiN pyar hi pyar bhar jata hai


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ye soch kar gar yun kiya hota to kya hota ?


sahi baat hai Anant ji...aksar aisa hota hai


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13th September 2014, 03:42 AM

pashemaaaN haiN ghar apna jalaa ke
malbay pe ro rahe hain sir tikaa ke
mayoos paDay haiN aur sochte haiN
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doston ... aadaab

aapne is hafte ke lafz "pashemaan" par kya khoob mehfil-e-aashaar sajaayee. sab shora ne khoob se khoob aashaar aur nazmein pesh kareen. aap ne lafz "pashemaan" ko na sirf har tarah ki "pashemaanee" se bachaaya, par is lafz ko apne aap par fakhr karne ki bahaut si wajahein bhi di hain

saath hi bahaut hi achchhee guftagoo bhi huwee kayee alfaaz ya jumlon ke sahi maaynon aur istemaal ke oopar. aap sab ne is bazm ke sachche maqsad ko sahi maaynon mein haasil kiya, ki hum sab ek doosre ki ungli thaam kar saath saath seekhenge aur zauq-e-sukhan haasil karenge.

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sabhi puraane doston ne to apne sukhan ke jalwe bikhere hi hain, saath hi khushi ka ek aur sabab ye bhi huwa ki SDC ke aur kuchh saathee bhi pehli dafa hamaaree is koshish mein saath dene ke liye tashreef laaye ... respected Sunita didi aur azeez Mujeeb bhai. main aap ka istaqbaal karte huwe ye ummeed karta hoon ki aap ke khayaalat ka noor is mehfil ko aage bhi charaaghaan karta rahega.

doston, jald hi main naya lafz le kar haazir hounga. jab tak naya lafz naheen aa jaata aap isee lafz par guftagoo aur mashq-e-sukhan jaaree rakkhein

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naya lafz ... - 14th September 2014, 09:05 PM

doston

aadaab o tasleemaat

is baar ka lafz hai "zulmat" which means darkness or something black

ye lafz bahaut hi asardaar tareeke se shayari mein istemaal hota hai. is ke literal meaning ke saath saath is ka symbolic meaning bhi bahaut powerful tareeke se use hota hai, symbolising dark times / circumstances / places / events etc ...aur in jazbon ki taraf ishaara kar sakta hai (if used appropriately in the right context) jaise maayoosee, naaumeedee, naainsaafee, zulm-o-sitam wagairah wagairah .... haan, magar saath hi ye literal form mein istemaal hone par bhi powerful hai.

ek related lafz jo shayari mein dekhne ko aata hai, wo hai "zulmaat" jis ke bhi similar maayne hain. mera andaaza hai ki ye lafz "zulmat" ka jama form hai, this is my guess. par is par agar koyee member aur roshni daalna chaahein ya koyee technical clarification de sakein, to bahaut achchha rahega.

is baar hum lafz "zulmat", "zulmaat" ya related words jaise "zulmatoN", "zulmateiN" wagairah par shayari karenege.

dekhte hain in lafz par ustaad shora ke kahe kuchh behtareen aashaar ...

zulmat-kade meiN mere shab-e-gham ka josh hai
ik sham'ma hai daleel-e-sahar so khamosh hai
- Mirza Ghalib

shikwa-e-zulmat-e-shab se to kaheeN behtar tha
apne hisse ki koyee sham'ma jalaate jaate
- Ahmad Faraz

yooN achaanak tere aariz ka khayaal aata hai
jaise zulmat meiN koyee sham'ma bharhak utthee hai
- Sahir Ludhianvi

roshni ke liye ghar jalaana parha
aisi zulmat bardhee tere jaane ke baad
- Khumaar Barabankvi

gham-e-zamaana teri zulmateiN hi kya kam theeN
ki bardh chale haiN ab in gesuoN ke bhi saaye
- Hafeez Hoshiarpuri

shaam-e-gham ki zulmateiN haiN aur sehra-e-hayaat
deeda-e-bedaar ko anjum-fishaaN karte chalo
- Qabil Ajmeri

siyah-khaana-e-dil meiN hai zulmatoN ka hujoom
charaagh-e-shauq jalaao ki roshni ho jaaye
- Qabil Ajmeri

vo meri jur'ratoN par be-niyaazee ki saza dena
hawas ki zulmatoN par naaz ki bijlee gira dena
- Majaaz ki nazm se

kuchh yaad aa gayee thi wo zulf-e-shikan-shikan
hastee tamaam chashma-e-zulmaat ho gayee
- Firaaq Gorakhpuri

roshni saaya-e-zulmaat se aage n bardhee
zindagi sham'ma ki ik raat se aage n bardhee
- Shakeel Badayuni



is lafz par mashq-e-sukhan ka silsila hum chalaayenge agle 7 din tak yaani 21st September, raat 9:00 PM India time, ya 3:30 PM GMT tak. to ab intezaar kis baat ka hai, bas shuru ho jaaiye ! aur lafz "zulmat" par se zulmat ka parda uthaaiye aur us par apne sukhan ka noor barsaaiye

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teri zulmat, meri ulfat!
nahi hoti mujh se yeH chahat...


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Waaahhh !! Chhote se sher mein ek daastaan keh di !! Dheron daad Hassan bhai !!
Jee zarra saheb.... Ab aap hi batayeN:-

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Wwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhh !!!!!!! Qayamat barpa sher raha !!! Zabardast bayaan N@zneen ji !! Kya baat hai !! Zulmat ki panaah mein bhi bedaari hi mili hogi shayad par sahar ki bedaari gawaara naheen hai lagta hai !!! Fantastic !!!! Beshumaar daad aap ko !!


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chaliye, purani ghazlon ke 2 aashaar lafz-e-zulmat ki nazar karta hooN


zauq-e-nazzara-e-zulmat ka junooN
aur bardhta hai harik shab mera


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Dard hi dard hai.....zulmat hi zulmat hai....
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zulmat-e-shab meN jalne se behtar!
do pal ki zindagi, tu khul ke jiya kar...
Haan !! Waise ye bhi behtar hai !! Agar zulmat mein naheen ji sakte to noor ki talaash karein bajaaye zulmat mein zindagi barbaad !! Ye bhi sahi hai. Magar kuchh log jinhein zulmat se mohabbat hai wo naachaar kahaan jaayein ?

Waise ye ek zulmat vs noor par debate jaise hone ke aasaar nazar aa rahe hain

Khair chhorhiye ... sher bahaut achchha hai aap ka. Dheron daad Hassan bhai !!


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14th September 2014, 11:23 PM

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wahhh! Waaahh! Waaaah! Zarraa saheb... Hamesha ki tarah
iss baar bhi aap ke ashaar ne qayamat bapa kar dii..
Dard hi dard hai.....zulmat hi zulmat hai....
Teh e dil se nikli dherooN daad qabool kejiye ga sir..
Is mohabbat bhari pazeeraayee ka tah e dil se shukriya ada karta hoon Hassan bhai !!


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15th September 2014, 12:06 AM

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Haan !! Waise ye bhi behtar hai !! Agar zulmat mein naheen ji sakte to noor ki talaash karein bajaaye zulmat mein zindagi barbaad !! Ye bhi sahi hai. Magar kuchh log jinhein zulmat se mohabbat hai wo naachaar kahaan jaayein ?

Waise ye ek zulmat vs noor par debate jaise hone ke aasaar nazar aa rahe hain

Khair chhorhiye ... sher bahaut achchha hai aap ka. Dheron daad Hassan bhai !!
Zarrra saheb.. aap ki baat se maiN iss hadd tak mutafiq hooN ke
hum jaise shayeroN ke liye zulmat meiN rehna aik taraH se lazmi amar ban
chala hai... kyuN ke jab tak dard na mile ga .. Dard bayaaN kese kareN ge!..
Agar jazboN ko alfazooN ki roop meN haqeeqat meN dhaalna hai to.. Haan! Phir zulmat
laazmi hai.... Aur agar shayri profession hai to alfazoN ka khazana hai.. Kissi taraH se bhi istemaal
kar leN.. Lekin dard ubhar ke saamne nahi aaye ga... Yeh meri soch hai!
YahaN maiN baat aashiqoN ki kar raha tha ke woH iss zulmat se nikleN
khul ke pyar kareN... Na dareN... Aur zinda dil raheN aur apne pyaar ka sahii taraH
khayaal kareN/izhaar kareN.. zulmat me jiye to kia jiye....! Be-waris lamhoN ke maqtal se nikleN!
Do pal ki hai zindagii kyuN na pyar meN ishQ o mohabbat meN basar kareN... Jo humsafar hai uss ko
zulmatoN ke andhere se nikaal kar ujaaloN se ru ba ru kareN.. Noor hi noor bhar
deN un ki zindagi meN...


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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15th September 2014, 02:52 AM

zarra socho us shakhs pe zulmatoN ke kia pahaaR toote hooN ge!
jis shakhs ko rote hue aaj tak kisi ne nahi dekhaa....!


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15th September 2014, 07:39 AM

Waah! Distance learning karte karte paaya mere sare dost jo pehle hi bohut aage the, aur bhi aage nikal gaye hain,zarra ji, Hassan ji, anant ji,naaz and Adil ji aap sabko main musalsal pad rahi hun bas reply nahi kar pati �� aap sab ki jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai, iss bazm ko itni khoobsurati se sajaane ke liye.

Ek choti si koshish main bhi karke dekhti hun,

Teri zulmaton se rasn-o-daar achaa
Maut detaa hai,tadpaata toh nahi?


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15th September 2014, 07:45 AM

Zulmatein sehna teri kismat nahi, e aurat
Kadam badaa aage aur noorjahan ban jaa


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