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tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge......... - 16th September 2015, 11:53 AM

tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.

muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,

ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.

kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.

tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.

koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....


Shaad...

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bahut khoob.. - 16th September 2015, 01:43 PM

adaab shaad sahab......
dil khush ho gaya aapki ye muhabbat bhari ghazal padhkar...bahut pyare ehsaas..ye bekarari aur dard jo sirf muhabbat bhara dil hee samajh sakta hai.......
sach kahoon...kisko khas kahoon kise rahne doon..har ek sher mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya...
tadap,samarpan,khwahish..kya kya rang bhar diye hain aapki qalam ne ek tahreer me......

tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge
........superb.
dil se daad qubool kijiyega............

khush rahein.......
aur yoon qalam chalti rahe...yahi dua hai......



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16th September 2015, 04:52 PM

Shaad, bahut hi acchi gazal bani hai, hame sabhi ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye, pyar, dard tadap, tanhai...sabhi ko ba-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne, yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge.



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16th September 2015, 10:23 PM

Shaad ji.....aapko padhkar ek baar bahaut achha laga...bahaut khoob likha hai aapne.

Khaas yeh sher kuch jyada hi dil ko chu gaye...
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,

koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....

Aise hi likhte rahiye...


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17th September 2015, 09:54 AM

Shaad bhai

Namaste

Subha subhaa bazm mein aapki koshish par nazar padii...bahot khoob andaaz e ebahaan rahaa aapka aur ehsaas dil ko chhu gayen

Dil se daad aapko

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18th September 2015, 11:40 AM

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adaab shaad sahab......
dil khush ho gaya aapki ye muhabbat bhari ghazal padhkar...bahut pyare ehsaas..ye bekarari aur dard jo sirf muhabbat bhara dil hee samajh sakta hai.......
sach kahoon...kisko khas kahoon kise rahne doon..har ek sher mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya...
tadap,samarpan,khwahish..kya kya rang bhar diye hain aapki qalam ne ek tahreer me......

tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge
........superb.
dil se daad qubool kijiyega............

khush rahein.......
aur yoon qalam chalti rahe...yahi dua hai......


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aapki inaayaten aur saath yunhi banaa rahe aisi main har dam kaamna karta hoon..

aap logon se bahut kuch seekhne ko milta hai to isiliye aage bhi apni raay aur mashware baantte rahiyega... khush rahiye

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Shaad, bahut hi acchi gazal bani hai, hame sabhi ashiyaar bahut pasand aaye, pyar, dard tadap, tanhai...sabhi ko ba-khoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne, yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge.

bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka Sunita dee..... jo aapko pasand aaya ye kalaam...
aati rahiyegaa aur apna khayala rakhiyega...

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Shad bhai ....bayane mohabaat meiN aap ki apne mehboob
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tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.

muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,

ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.

kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.

tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.

koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....


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21st September 2015, 01:03 PM

Wah !

Bas wah wah hee nikal rahi hai iss ko paDh kar.

Bohot khuub. Daad qubuul kijiyega.

Likhte rahiye.


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tumhaare ishq me jaanaa agar kuch kar na paaenge,
tumhaarii yaad me taDpenge aankhoN ko rulaaenge.

muhabbat me agar apne sitaare honge gardish me.n,
chale jaaenge uske dar pe sar apnaa jhukaaeNge,

ye dil ab to tumhaaraa naam sun kar kaaNp Uthtaa hai,
magar is kam bakhat ko ham tumhaaraa hi banaaeNge.

kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.

tumhe soche binaa kaise muqammal kar deN tahreereN,
jo ab tum yaad aaoge Qalam bhii tab uThaaenge.

koii poochega tumse jo is afsaane ke baare me,
to kah denaa ke khud kirdaar hii kissaa sunaaenge....
kiyaa thaa saath mil kar ham ne jo vaadaa muhabbat kaa,
chalo tum bhool jaao par, hamee tanahaa nibhaaenge.


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28th September 2015, 10:55 AM

pasandeedgee ke liye sabhii doston ka tahe dil se shukriyaa pesh karta hoon.....
apna kahayal rakhieey aap sab aur aate raha kijiye.............

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bhai miyaaN Shaoib ab tum to yooN karo ke.....khaNjar hi utaar do!


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