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Gam ki saheli Zindgi. - 18th September 2015, 12:45 PM

Dosto, arse baad aaj kuch likha hai, kalam badi mushkil se chali hai...kuch ehsaas jo dil meiN machal rhe thy...unko lafzoN ka libaas pehna diya hai. mere liye bahut muhskil tha ab yeh likhna...kyuki maiN to likhna hi chord chuki thi...ab kuch aziz dosto ke kehne par kalam pakdi hai...umeed hai wo aziz ab khush hoNge


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18th September 2015, 01:10 PM

namastey di....
Aapka dard bhara kalaam padhkar dimaag me zindgi ki sachchai ki tasweercsi ban gayi aur dil me dard bhar aaya....aapko arse baad padha aapne meri khwahish poori ki is baat ka shukriya dil se..aur ab ye mat kahiyega ki likhna chhod diya hai maine......aapke kalaam me hame aapke ehsaas ke sath zindgi ka tazurba bhi milta hai..aur bahut kuch seekhne ke liye bhi......
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18th September 2015, 01:38 PM

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ek ek panktii dil pe gahree chaap chhoortee huii hai..... daad pesh hai aapko is khoobsurat kalaam k liye....... bas ek guzaarish hai ke ab likhtii raha kijiye......

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Accha hai saccha hai.. koi baat nahi kahunga .. samajh aata hai ki dil se likha gaya gaya .. kahin nahi kahin hath dil se jude lagte hai .. likhte rahiye khyaal rakhiye apna ..

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18th September 2015, 04:28 PM

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Bahot waqt baad aapki koi peshkash bazm mein nazar aayii...aapki koshish mein hameshaa badii hi saadagee hotii hai...jo dil mein hai wo lafzon mein hotaa hai...zindagii ko lekar aapne jo apne dil ki baat kahi hay bahot hi gehrii baat kehbdii...bhagvaan se yahee praarthnaa kartaa hun ki zindagee khushiyon se saje aapki...aapse yahee guzaarish hai ki likhte rahiye...aapki koshish kp dekh kar bahot khushii huii sister.... apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa...khush rahen

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Finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy aapne likha :-)
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Dosto, arse baad aaj kuch likha hai, kalam badi mushkil se chali hai...kuch ehsaas jo dil meiN machal rhe thy...unko lafzoN ka libaas pehna diya hai. mere liye bahut muhskil tha ab yeh likhna...kyuki maiN to likhna hi chord chuki thi...ab kuch aziz dosto ke kehne par kalam pakdi hai...umeed hai wo aziz ab khush hoNge


Ek uljii paheli zindgi,
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wo khushiya sab le gya,
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bachpan bada haseen tha,
tab thi albeli zindgi.

mast hawa si joomti,
khuhboo chameli zindgi.

haath tera tha haath mei.
thi saaj-sureli zindgi.

ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

apno ne hi kiye fareb,
kar di zehreli zindgi.

yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.

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Bohat khoob! - 21st September 2015, 02:13 PM

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Dosto, arse baad aaj kuch likha hai, kalam badi mushkil se chali hai...kuch ehsaas jo dil meiN machal rhe thy...unko lafzoN ka libaas pehna diya hai. mere liye bahut muhskil tha ab yeh likhna...kyuki maiN to likhna hi chord chuki thi...ab kuch aziz dosto ke kehne par kalam pakdi hai...umeed hai wo aziz ab khush hoNge


Ek uljii paheli zindgi,
gam ki saheli zindgi.

wo khushiya sab le gya,
ab veeran haweli zindgi.

bachpan bada haseen tha,
tab thi albeli zindgi.

mast hawa si joomti,
khuhboo chameli zindgi.

haath tera tha haath mei.
thi saaj-sureli zindgi.

ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

apno ne hi kiye fareb,
kar di zehreli zindgi.

yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.

-Sunita Virender
(17.09.2015)

ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

Wah bohat khoob Sunita ji


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22nd September 2015, 02:05 PM

*yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.
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Wah ji wah ...aap ki ye lines tau kamaal ki lagi...ek karvi sachchayee batan ker di aapne .

Sunita ji bahut achcha laga aap ko padh ke.

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22nd September 2015, 07:58 PM

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Bohut hi dard bhari lagi aapki rachna. ye kehna chahiye ki rachna nahi aapke dil ka aainaa si lagi.

Prarthna karoongi ishwar se ki aapke saare dard kat jaayein aur jija ji bhi lout kar aa jaaein. bohut tapasya ho gayi aapki.

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Dosto, arse baad aaj kuch likha hai, kalam badi mushkil se chali hai...kuch ehsaas jo dil meiN machal rhe thy...unko lafzoN ka libaas pehna diya hai. mere liye bahut muhskil tha ab yeh likhna...kyuki maiN to likhna hi chord chuki thi...ab kuch aziz dosto ke kehne par kalam pakdi hai...umeed hai wo aziz ab khush hoNge


Ek uljii paheli zindgi,
gam ki saheli zindgi.

wo khushiya sab le gya,
ab veeran haweli zindgi.

bachpan bada haseen tha,
tab thi albeli zindgi.

mast hawa si joomti,
khuhboo chameli zindgi.

haath tera tha haath mei.
thi saaj-sureli zindgi.

ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

apno ne hi kiye fareb,
kar di zehreli zindgi.

yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.

-Sunita Virender
(17.09.2015)

Kamaal ho gaya dii. MaiN aapke kalaam ka muntizar thaa aur darasal kehne bhi wala thaa ke aap aajkal likhte nahi haiN. Aapne likhaa, aur yun likha ke dhamaka huaa.

Bohot bohot mubarakbaad. Aalishan peshkash.

Likhte rahiye aue apna khayal rakhiye.


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Dosto, arse baad aaj kuch likha hai, kalam badi mushkil se chali hai...kuch ehsaas jo dil meiN machal rhe thy...unko lafzoN ka libaas pehna diya hai. mere liye bahut muhskil tha ab yeh likhna...kyuki maiN to likhna hi chord chuki thi...ab kuch aziz dosto ke kehne par kalam pakdi hai...umeed hai wo aziz ab khush hoNge


Ek uljii paheli zindgi,
gam ki saheli zindgi.

wo khushiya sab le gya,
ab veeran haweli zindgi.

bachpan bada haseen tha,
tab thi albeli zindgi.

mast hawa si joomti,
khuhboo chameli zindgi.

haath tera tha haath mei.
thi saaj-sureli zindgi.

ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

apno ne hi kiye fareb,
kar di zehreli zindgi.

yu to sab saath hain,
phir bhi akeli zindgi.

-Sunita Virender
(17.09.2015)
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namastey di....
Aapka dard bhara kalaam padhkar dimaag me zindgi ki sachchai ki tasweercsi ban gayi aur dil me dard bhar aaya....aapko arse baad padha aapne meri khwahish poori ki is baat ka shukriya dil se..aur ab ye mat kahiyega ki likhna chhod diya hai maine......aapke kalaam me hame aapke ehsaas ke sath zindgi ka tazurba bhi milta hai..aur bahut kuch seekhne ke liye bhi......
Isliye likhti rahiye......muskarati rahiye...
Dua karoongi dard sirf kalaam me dikhe aapki zindagi me iska asar na ho......
Ishq ke ehsaas jald padhne milenge isi ummeed ke sath...
Is behatreen peshkash par meri taraf se daad qubool kijiyega.....
Rep++ dene ki gustakhi kar rahi hoon...


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Aapka qalam to behat umdaa rachna keh gaya.Jawaab mein kuch lines

Kabhi apni kabhi begani si zindagi
Rait si hathon se fisalti zindagi

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ek ek panktii dil pe gahree chaap chhoortee huii hai..... daad pesh hai aapko is khoobsurat kalaam k liye....... bas ek guzaarish hai ke ab likhtii raha kijiye......

Shaad....


Shaad bhai, aapko mera likha sahi lga aur pasand aaya, bahut khushi hue yeh jaan kar. aapki guzaarish par gaur kiya jayega

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Accha hai saccha hai.. koi baat nahi kahunga .. samajh aata hai ki dil se likha gaya gaya .. kahin nahi kahin hath dil se jude lagte hai .. likhte rahiye khyaal rakhiye apna ..

Kunaal


Kunaal ji...bilkul sahi kaha aapne "dil se likha gya hai" aap jaise shayar hi pehchaan sakte hai ki likhvat dil se hai ya dimaag se

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Sister

Pranaam

Bahot waqt baad aapki koi peshkash bazm mein nazar aayii...aapki koshish mein hameshaa badii hi saadagee hotii hai...jo dil mein hai wo lafzon mein hotaa hai...zindagii ko lekar aapne jo apne dil ki baat kahi hay bahot hi gehrii baat kehbdii...bhagvaan se yahee praarthnaa kartaa hun ki zindagee khushiyon se saje aapki...aapse yahee guzaarish hai ki likhte rahiye...aapki koshish kp dekh kar bahot khushii huii sister.... apnaa khayaal rakhiyegaa...khush rahen

Aapka

Chhotu

Chottu....tuje maloom hi hai ki kam hi likhti hu, ab to jaise likhna chordh hi diya hai...kuch dostoN ne bahut majboor kar diya tha ki kuch likhuN to muje kalam chalni padi
teri pyrai si duaoN ke liye bahut bahut shukriya

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Namaste Di,

Finallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy aapne likha :-)
Padhkar aapko bahaut achha laga...aapki yeh koshish bahaut pyari aur bahaut sundar hai. Aapne zindagi ko kitne ache se explain kar diya...I am sure hum sab yehi feel karte hain zindagi ke bare mai kisi naa kisi mod pe aur aapne bas woh baat kehdi. Aapko padhna bahaut achha laga di...please request hai aage bhi aap aise hi likhte rehna thoda jaldi se...itna gap naa lijiyega...thank you di baat maan ne ke liye...am very happy :-)

Love you tons!

Jiya........tumhe accha lga ki maine likha aur mere ehsaas tumhe pasand aaye bahut bahut shukriya


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bohat khoob di.......................
shukriya zainy

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ek ek pal rhi samet.ti,
ab khali hatheli zindgi.

Wah bohat khoob Sunita ji
Praveen ji....aapko pasand aaya mera likha...mere liye bahut badi baat hai...dil se shukriya.

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phir bhi akeli zindgi.
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Wah ji wah ...aap ki ye lines tau kamaal ki lagi...ek karvi sachchayee batan ker di aapne .

Sunita ji bahut achcha laga aap ko padh ke.

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