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Ghazal: Kisi pe mar ke dekho... - 25th March 2013, 05:05 PM

aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

Jo chaho tum nazar meiN
Usi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


Pradhyuman - Bismil


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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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25th March 2013, 05:38 PM

Pradhyuman bhaii:

namaste!

janaab aapko kal sunne kaa mauqaa milaa... kyaa Khoob liKhte hoN aap aur aap kaa Sher kehne kaa andaaz bhee Khoob thaa... ChhoTi beHr meiN aik achChhi koShiSh..dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh rahiye.... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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25th March 2013, 06:35 PM

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aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

Jo chaho tum nazar meiN
Usi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


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Bohat khoob Pradhyuman ji....................




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25th March 2013, 07:38 PM

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Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

Jo chaho tum nazar meiN
Usi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


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WaaH ! Bahut Khoob !!

ChhoTi Beh'r MeN Asar Andaaz Ghazal

BehtareeN

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

aUsi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


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Wah ! kya baat hai !! bahut khoob Pradhyuman Bismil sb.!! chhoti behr meiN achchhi GHAZAL.
   
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aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

Jo chaho tum nazar meiN
Usi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


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good one .......... very well writen


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aadaab dosto,

ek choti behR ki ghazal pesh kar raha hun..yeh maiN kal padhna chahta tha SDC ke mushaire mein..magar adhuri reh gayi thi so nahi padh paaya..umeed hai pasand aayegi..

Ise bhi kar ke dekho
Kisi pe mar ke dekho

Fuzool dil hai saalim
Kabhi bikhar ke dekho

Wo pyaar dekhtaa hai
Magar saNwar ke dekho

Jo chaho tum nazar meiN
Usi ko bhar ke dekho

O arsh ke safiiroeN
Zaraa utar ke dekho

Ji haan kahi hai tumne
Lo ab mukar ke dekho

Ye shayri hai bismil
Yahaan ubhar ke dekho


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janaab bismil ko shaad ka aadaab.... sach kahun to aaapki behr chotii zaroor hai magar behad badee hai.... masha allah yaq ba yak nikal aaya zubaan se....

chaliye khair is baar nahi padh paae to koi baat nahi.. ab ye program to hote rahenge insha allaah.. next time aap apni pasand ki ghazlen zaroor padheN...

shukriyaa...


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1st May 2013, 01:06 PM

bahot shukriya aap sabhi dosto ka...aapki daad aur hounslafzai ka asar ta-umr rahega mujh par.

aur hatim sahaab..yeh bhi khushi hai ki kisi naye insaan tak pahunchi meri baat..shukriya bahot shukriya

god bless u all!

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musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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