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Tanhaa - 8th June 2014, 04:11 PM

Ik muddat baad bazm me'n kuch kahane jaa raha hu'n.......

Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

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Shajar = Tree
Ishtiyaaq = Fondness

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8th June 2014, 04:27 PM

WWWWAAAAAHHHHH !!! LAAJAWAAB !!!!

bas kamaal hi kamaal hai ye ghazal

meri jaanib se dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad aap ko Ufaq sahab.

har ek sher behtareen hai aur qaabil e daad hai

aur ye aashaar to mujhe had se zyada pasand aaye

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

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8th June 2014, 04:39 PM

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

Wah wah!

Ek bohat hi khoobsurat aur purasar ghazal ke liye...tah e dil se dheron daad qubool farmaiye. .ufaq sahab...

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain. .per aakhri sher aur maqta behad pasand aaye mujhe...matla bhi kamaal hai..

Yuhi likhte rahiye. ...




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Ik muddat baad bazm me'n kuch kahane jaa raha hu'n.......

Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

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Sadaa = Sound
Shajar = Tree
Ishtiyaaq = Fondness
bahot hi khubsurat ghazal hai, Uffaqsaab.....
behad pasand aayee hameN.......

yuN hi likhte rahiye......



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9th June 2014, 02:39 PM

Uffaq saahab aadaab..... aaj arse baad aapki kalaam ko padhne kii khushnaseebi hasil huii...

main bayaan nahi kar saktaa kis kadar main iski rangeenniiyat me kho gayaa.... alfaazon ke saagar me doob jaana har baar nahii hota , magar is baar aapki kalam ne wo sahar paidaa kiyaa hai ke merii bayaani ke baahar hai...


Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.


ye saare aashar itne ummdahh hain ke kyaa kahun........ bas waahhh hi waahhh aapki khidmat me daad ke phool nazraana e aqeedat pesh karta hoon... aur ummeed karta hoon ke aage bhi hame in kalaamon se aap mahroom na rakkhenge.....

Sach kahun to ye kalaam bahot apnaa sa lagaa mujhe, kyonki kuch aisaa hi nacheeez ne bhii likhne ki koshish kii thii, shayad ke is meyaar kaa na ho magar aap ek baar dekh lenge to mujhe khushi hogii... tohfa samajhiyega saahab...

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Lajawaab ghzal se nawaaza hai aapne ehle bazm ko tamaam aashaar bhut khoob rhe par khass karke aakhri dono aasharo ke kya kehne daad hazir e khidmat hai qubool farmaaiye


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Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

Wah wah!

Ek bohat hi khoobsurat aur purasar ghazal ke liye...tah e dil se dheron daad qubool farmaiye. .ufaq sahab...

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain. .per aakhri sher aur maqta behad pasand aaye mujhe...matla bhi kamaal hai..

Yuhi likhte rahiye. ...
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Ik muddat baad bazm me'n kuch kahane jaa raha hu'n.......

Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

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Sadaa = Sound
Shajar = Tree
Ishtiyaaq = Fondness
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Ik muddat baad bazm me'n kuch kahane jaa raha hu'n.......

Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

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Sadaa = Sound
Shajar = Tree
Ishtiyaaq = Fondness
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Uffaq saahab aadaab..... aaj arse baad aapki kalaam ko padhne kii khushnaseebi hasil huii...

main bayaan nahi kar saktaa kis kadar main iski rangeenniiyat me kho gayaa.... alfaazon ke saagar me doob jaana har baar nahii hota , magar is baar aapki kalam ne wo sahar paidaa kiyaa hai ke merii bayaani ke baahar hai...


Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.


ye saare aashar itne ummdahh hain ke kyaa kahun........ bas waahhh hi waahhh aapki khidmat me daad ke phool nazraana e aqeedat pesh karta hoon... aur ummeed karta hoon ke aage bhi hame in kalaamon se aap mahroom na rakkhenge.....

Sach kahun to ye kalaam bahot apnaa sa lagaa mujhe, kyonki kuch aisaa hi nacheeez ne bhii likhne ki koshish kii thii, shayad ke is meyaar kaa na ho magar aap ek baar dekh lenge to mujhe khushi hogii... tohfa samajhiyega saahab...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=73759

aate rahiyega..

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Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Bohat Khoob kaha Ufaq! Daad pesh hai!

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5th July 2014, 12:29 AM

Bohot hi khubsurat ghazal huee hai janaab mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiyegaa..

YuuN tau mehfil bhari hai logoN se,
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5th July 2014, 01:09 AM

Congratulations for this awesome ghazal, ufaq ji...!

2nd sher is my favourite...!

Keep it up, ok...?



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Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

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Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

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Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

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Ufaq sahab ....waah kya baat hai.....behtareen ahsaasoN se saji aapki ye peshkash ....... ”,ik sadaa se hua shazar tanha" ......dili daad....qabool farmaaoyega.
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Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Wahh... kia kehne...

daad hi daad,

DuaooN k saath,



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Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.


Wahhh.. Ufaq saheb...

kia kehne janab... boht khoob...

DuaooN k saath,,,


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bahut hee badiya ghazal hui ufaq jee....saare sher dil ke kareeb rahe.......daad kubul karein.....



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bahot khoob. yeh sher haasil-e-ghazal rahaa..dil se daad


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Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

is ek sher pe qurbaan jaaun ufaq saahab... waah kya andaaze bayaan hai, kyaa soze dil hai.... bahot khoob... majboor kar diyaaa ek baar fir se iski shaan me kaseede padhne ke liye.... nayaab shaayri ka namuuna hai ye kalaam..... daad tahe dil se pesh hain....


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Mai'n bhii tanhaa huu'n , hamsafar tanhaa.
Saath chalte to hai'n magar tanhaa.

Sab parinde to udh gaye'n dar Ke,
Ik sadaa* se huyaa shajar* tanhaa.

Qaafile manzilo pe jaa pahu'nche'n,
Phir se lo ho gayii dagar tanhaa.

Tanhaa aaye the'n , tanhaa jaaye'nge,
Us pe jiina hai umr bhar tanhaa.

Laash sadhane kii gandh aatii hai,
Maut kiskii hai is qadar tanhaa.

Dekhe , aatii hai aur abhii kyaa - kyaa,
Aaafat aayii hai kab idhar tanhaa.

Bebasii ab to ishtiyaaq* huyi,
Achchhaa lagne lagaa hai ghar tanhaa.

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