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Piche bada kuch chadd aya..... - 14th July 2014, 05:24 PM

Tere ghar val nu jandiyan,
hun menu sadkaan toh darr lagda,
ene mod laye qismmat ne hun,
esdiyan maddakan toh darr lagda......
antt himmat mai haar betha,
menu har ik ne ena azmaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd aayaa.....!!!

Ena luk luk mai roya han,
parshawan mera bhijj janda c,
ena koseya mai qismatt nu,
lekhan da likhaari khijj janda c.....
jindagi di rabba lakeer kyon chaddi,
esnu kyon nahi tu mitaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaa...!!!

Duniyaadar ik pakke nu duniya,
begairat da khitaab de gayi,
neend khawaban nu siddaq menu,
kayi waari jawaab de gayi......
kandhan wich vajjde nu menu,
kise naa hath fadayaaa,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaaaaa.....!!!!
   
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Ena luk luk mai roya han,
parshawan mera bhijj janda c,


waah waah....prawa badi vadiya shayeri kitti hai tussi....eddaa.n hi likde Rao


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9th September 2014, 11:41 PM

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Ena luk luk mai roya han,
parshawan mera bhijj janda c,


waah waah....prawa badi vadiya shayeri kitti hai tussi....eddaa.n hi likde Rao
Oh ho ..hanjuan naal parchaveim da bhijjana ....hanjuan naal daaman da bijhna tan suniya si , per eh taan kamaal da khayal hai ....sari nazm.vich ashiq da dard bhooban
maar maar ke ro riya hai ..

Bhai sadke javan .Benam ji tere abdaaz te , eini dungi kavita panjabi vich likhan layi



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2nd November 2014, 10:47 PM

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Tere ghar val nu jandiyan,
hun menu sadkaan toh darr lagda,
ene mod laye qismmat ne hun,
esdiyan maddakan toh darr lagda......
antt himmat mai haar betha,
menu har ik ne ena azmaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd aayaa.....!!!

Ena luk luk mai roya han,
parshawan mera bhijj janda c,
ena koseya mai qismatt nu,
lekhan da likhaari khijj janda c.....
jindagi di rabba lakeer kyon chaddi,
esnu kyon nahi tu mitaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaa...!!!

Duniyaadar ik pakke nu duniya,
begairat da khitaab de gayi,
neend khawaban nu siddaq menu,
kayi waari jawaab de gayi......
kandhan wich vajjde nu menu,
kise naa hath fadayaaa,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaaaaa.....!!!!
benaam ji thuaade ehsaas nikke jaye dil vich bada masoom jey'a swaal lehraa gaye ne...

edda hi hameshaa apne dil di zubaan geetan vich likhde rehnaa

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2nd November 2014, 11:27 PM

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Tere ghar val nu jandiyan,
hun menu sadkaan toh darr lagda,
ene mod laye qismmat ne hun,
esdiyan maddakan toh darr lagda......
antt himmat mai haar betha,
menu har ik ne ena azmaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd aayaa.....!!!

Ena luk luk mai roya han,
parshawan mera bhijj janda c,
ena koseya mai qismatt nu,
lekhan da likhaari khijj janda c.....
jindagi di rabba lakeer kyon chaddi,
esnu kyon nahi tu mitaya,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaa...!!!

Duniyaadar ik pakke nu duniya,
begairat da khitaab de gayi,
neend khawaban nu siddaq menu,
kayi waari jawaab de gayi......
kandhan wich vajjde nu menu,
kise naa hath fadayaaa,
pyaar tere wal kaddam puttdeyan,
mai piche bada kuch chadd ayaaaaa.....!!!!
Benaam Ji, bahut hi vadiya likhiya hai tusi, ehsaas dil nu chu gye......likhde rho.

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