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इन राहों पर चलते चलते बस ये मंज़र देखा है
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इन राहों पर चलते चलते बस ये मंज़र देखा है - 12th August 2014, 05:30 PM

इन राहों पर चलते चलते बस ये मंज़र देखा है

मीलों तक तन्हाई है जब जब भी मुड़कर देखा है

ये भी तेरे जैसा बनकर ,हाथ छुड़ा कर चल देगा

अपनी ही परछाईं को हमने डर डर कर देखा है

सबके होटों पर झूटे लफ़्ज़ों की इक हरियाली है

लेकिन सबका दिल हमने सहरा सा बंज़र देखा है

sahaab..


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19th August 2014, 04:38 PM

सबके होटों पर झूटे लफ़्ज़ों की इक हरियाली है

लेकिन सबका दिल हमने सहरा सा बंज़र देखा है

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24th August 2014, 12:14 AM

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इन राहों पर चलते चलते बस ये मंज़र देखा है

मीलों तक तन्हाई है जब जब भी मुड़कर देखा है

ये भी तेरे जैसा बनकर ,हाथ छुड़ा कर चल देगा

अपनी ही परछाईं को हमने डर डर कर देखा है

सबके होटों पर झूटे लफ़्ज़ों की इक हरियाली है

लेकिन सबका दिल हमने सहरा सा बंज़र देखा है

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25th August 2014, 11:20 AM

kyaa baat hai Ashwani saahab...... bahot khoob kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.... likhte rahiye

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