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Love Tere Husn Pe Karte Hain Shayari....!! - 23rd August 2014, 02:15 PM

Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,

alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)

Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-


tujhe chaand kaheN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari

bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi

phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali

gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i

Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi

sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi

sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi

jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi

‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari



*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")

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Love 23rd August 2014, 02:33 PM

‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari

mindblowing PS keep it up reps pending


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23rd August 2014, 02:44 PM

Hasan bhai ek bahut hi pyar ke jazbe sw bhara ahsaas.....

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23rd August 2014, 03:44 PM

wah hassan sb.
Bohut khoob.

Just avoid syntactical mistakes pl.

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‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari

mindblowing PS keep it up reps pending
Pari,

I am obliged that you like my composition!

Stay happy,

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*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Love 23rd August 2014, 05:10 PM

HSN bhai.....kya baat hai, bahut romantic hue ja rhe ho bahut pyare se ahsaas hai....khush rhiye.

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23rd August 2014, 11:49 PM

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Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,
alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)
Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-
tumheN chaand kahoN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari
bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi
phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali
gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i
Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi
sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi
sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi
jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi
‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari

Kya baat hai ..
.hassan bhai par junoon-e-ishq sawaar hai
Sare k saare lajawaab aashaar hai

..bohat umda...excellent lines





Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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24th August 2014, 09:03 AM

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Hasan bhai ek bahut hi pyar ke jazbe sw bhara ahsaas.....

sanjay sehgal
Sanjay jii,,

Pazeeraayi ke liye be-had manooN hooN!

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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Boht Umda - 25th August 2014, 07:38 PM

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Adaab hazireen-e-meHfil-e-ishQ,

alfaazoN ki tehmeed mujh se baandhi nahi jaati...
seedhi si baat hai mujhe tum se mohabbat hai...(nm)

Pesh-e-khidmat hai ik taaza ishQ 'koshish':-


tujhe chaand kaheN ya chaandni
tere husn pe karte haiN shayari

bikhray gi jab lafz lafz teri khusbu!
ghazal meiN bhi aa jaye gi dilkashi

phool bhi hairaaN haiN chaman meiN
baagh meiN khili jab se haseeN kali

gul-e-gulaab bhi zameeN boos hua
gulaabi aankhoN per jab nazar pad’i

Qurbat-e-yaar is jahaN toH la-haasil!
hai yaQeen us jahaN wohi apni zindagi

sir-ba-sajoood hue kayi baar din meiN!
Rab se maangi ussi ki hansi-khushi

sar-e-raaH mil jao kisi roZ hum se!
piyaase sehraa ki bhuja doH tishnagi

jamal-e-yaar pe nazar aise thehri!
dheere dheere karne lagay aashiQi

‘hSn’ kyuN madhoosh ho chala hai!
wajaH shayed ‘parStaar’ ki naazuk Pari

Boht umda ghazal qalam band ki aapne....Yun hi likhte raheey
Doyaon ke saath...!!!
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I am speechless.....agar engaged nahin hoti to i wud've fallen in luv wid u this ghazal is just beyond excellence, its soooooooooooo romantic.............now am ur fan PS
ohhh really! chalo koi baat nahi,
agle janam meiN try kareN ge!

and I'm glad that you liked my composition!

Take care,

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wah hassan sb.
Bohut khoob.

Just avoid syntactical mistakes pl.

The correct stanza is

tujhe chand kahen ya chandi
tere husn pe karte hain shayeri
Mujib saheb,

Bohat bohat shukriyaaH pasandeedgi ke liye!

And I corrected that stanza as suggested by you!

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,


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HSN bhai.....kya baat hai, bahut romantic hue ja rhe ho bahut pyare se ahsaas hai....khush rhiye.

god bless u
Sunita baaji,

Aap aayiN bahar aayi...

Adna si koshish aap ko acchi lagi, meri khush-naseebi hai..

Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gii,

DuaooN ke saath,


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Kya baat hai ..
.hassan bhai par junoon-e-ishq sawaar hai
Sare k saare lajawaab aashaar hai

..bohat umda...excellent lines
Ananth sir,

That's indeed my pleasure to have you on my thread,
I'm, really, obliged, sir!

Take care,

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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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Bahut khoobsurat hasan ji ishq me doobi nazm.....dil se daad. ..
Madhu jii,

Khaak lafzooN ki izzat-afzaai ke liye be-had manooN hooN!

Aagay bhi aise hi saath ki umeed rahe gi,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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Bohat khoob Hassan sahab. ....
Zainy saheba,

Hausla afzaai ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH!

Take care,

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Aap ko yahaN dekh kar bohat acha laga!
Koshish ko pasand karne ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaaH!

Milte rahiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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Truly Romantic.

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Truly Romantic.

Loved it.

Bohut bohut pasand aaya.


Sarika jee,

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Apna khiyal rakhyie ga,

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