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Love kouyi tum saa kahan dekhaa hum ne - 22nd October 2015, 03:58 PM

Mahfil e ish,q ke liye aik koshish
ghazal 2

yun to saaraa jahaa dekhaa hum ne
kouyi tum saa kahaa dekhaa hum ne

zindagee jee uuthee tum joh aaye
pya,r kaa ik samaa dekhaa hum ne

dil men chehraa basaayaa jub teiiraa
phir kisee koh kahaa dekhaa hum ne

khud ko dhoondha jo teri aankhon men
akk,s apnaa wahaa dekhaa hum ne

hai mohabbat ko jaanaa tum se our
pya,r kaa jahaa dekhaa hum ne


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22nd October 2015, 10:49 PM

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Mahfil e ish,q ke liye aik koshish
ghazal 2

yun to saaraa jahaa dekhaa hum ne
kouyi tum saa kahaa dekhaa hum ne

zindagee jee uuthee tum joh aaye
pya,r kaa ik samaa dekhaa hum ne

dil men chehraa basaayaa jub teiiraa
phir kisee koh kahaa dekhaa hum ne

khud ko dhoondha jo teri aankhon men
akk,s apnaa wahaa dekhaa hum ne

hai mohabbat ko jaanaa tum se our
pya,r kaa jahaa dekhaa hum ne
Bahut khoob ehsaas...muhabbat me dooba ye qalaam khoob..pasand aaya hame saba ji. ..

Likhte rahiye.....
Aati rahiye....



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23rd October 2015, 07:53 PM

hamen bhi a,ap ki taree,f pasand aa,yi hai madhu g shukria,a

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26th October 2015, 10:11 AM

waahh haseen khayaalon se saji hui ghazal pesh ki hai aapne saba......

salaammat rahiye..... aati rahiye au apne kalaam se rubaroo karaati rahiye......

shukriyaa

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28th October 2015, 01:34 PM

buhat shukri,aa aa,p ka,a shaa,d ji


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waahh haseen khayaalon se saji hui ghazal pesh ki hai aapne saba......

salaammat rahiye..... aati rahiye au apne kalaam se rubaroo karaati rahiye......

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Shaad.....


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29th October 2015, 10:54 PM

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Mahfil e ish,q ke liye aik koshish
ghazal 2

yun to saaraa jahaa dekhaa hum ne
kouyi tum saa kahaa dekhaa hum ne

zindagee jee uuthee tum joh aaye
pya,r kaa ik samaa dekhaa hum ne

dil men chehraa basaayaa jub teiiraa
phir kisee koh kahaa dekhaa hum ne

khud ko dhoondha jo teri aankhon men
akk,s apnaa wahaa dekhaa hum ne

hai mohabbat ko jaanaa tum se our
pya,r kaa jahaa dekhaa hum ne
Bahut khoob meri jaanib se aapko behad mubaakbaad...ye ek sher dil mein ghar kar gaya...

khud ko dhoondha jo teri aankhon men
akk,s apnaa wahaa dekhaa hum ne


Bahut khoob



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30th October 2015, 03:32 PM

dil men chehraa basaayaa jub teiiraa
phir kisee koh kahaa dekhaa hum ne


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh mohtarma waaaaah!!

maan gaye aap ki musawwari ko ..
aap ne mehfil ko behad dilkash alfaazoN se nawaza hy...

teh-e-dil se beshumar daad haazir hy!


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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31st October 2015, 04:57 PM

shukri,aa mast ji aa,p ka,a
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31st October 2015, 04:58 PM

shukri,aa mohteram hasan saheb aa,p ka,a


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dil men chehraa basaayaa jub teiiraa
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh mohtarma waaaaah!!

maan gaye aap ki musawwari ko ..
aap ne mehfil ko behad dilkash alfaazoN se nawaza hy...

teh-e-dil se beshumar daad haazir hy!


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