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dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye -
2nd April 2007, 03:17 AM
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha bewaafai se darta hai dil gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha hum kal rahen jha na rahen tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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2nd April 2007, 10:23 AM
kese ho dost?
aapko Merul ka sadar pranam bahut hi pyaari koshish hai aapki, badi hi khubsurati se aapne apne dil ke ehsason ko sabdo mein utara hai, khas karke dost aapki rachna ki aakhri panktiya hamein bahut hi pasand aayi, bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha hum kal rahen jha na rahen tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha dost ese hi mehfil mein ujala karte rehna aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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4th April 2007, 04:25 AM
namaste merul g,
apko humara likha pasand aya, isshe humein bahut kushi hui hai, hum is ehsaas aur age badane ki koshish mein hai, asha hai vo b apko pasand ayegi. thanku for ur kind words Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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Hello Manish ji....aapka kaalam hume bahot pasand aaya ....kuchh kaheta huaa aapka yeh kalaam ....kuchh gum aur kuchh ...paane ki chaah ke saath kuchh khone ka dar bayaan karta huaa sidha dil ko chhu gaya .....bhagwaan ji kare aapko har khushi mile aur aapka har sapanaa pura ho. Keep writing. Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe, Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe. Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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Kya baat kafi samay baad apne kuch likha hai chaliye koi baat nahi der aye mager doorost aye...............ab apke kalam ki baat janb bahut umda ehsaas likha hai apne dil ko chulene wala raha apka likha mubarakbaad ke saath dilidaad de raha hoon khaaksar kubool ho...........khush rahiye aapka bhai kashif Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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frnd 4 ever -
7th October 2007, 05:22 PM
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kaise hai aap? wah janab ,aap ne dil hi chu liya. apke yeh derd bhare,magar pyar se purr ehsaas. MASHA ALLAH.ghar kar gaye, aapki is mukammal koshish k liye dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye, apna khayal rakhiye, khush rahiye, ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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