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dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye -
2nd April 2007, 03:17 AM
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha
muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na
riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain
sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na
dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha
vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha
bewaafai se darta hai dil
gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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2nd April 2007, 10:23 AM
kese ho dost?
aapko Merul ka sadar pranam
bahut hi pyaari koshish hai aapki, badi hi khubsurati se aapne apne dil ke ehsason ko sabdo mein utara hai, khas karke dost aapki rachna ki aakhri panktiya hamein bahut hi pasand aayi,
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
dost ese hi mehfil mein ujala karte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by musafir ek pal
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha
muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na
riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain
sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na
dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha
vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha
bewaafai se darta hai dil
gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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a broken shadow...
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4th April 2007, 04:25 AM
namaste merul g,
apko humara likha pasand aya, isshe humein bahut kushi hui hai, hum is ehsaas aur age badane ki koshish mein hai, asha hai vo b apko pasand ayegi.
thanku for ur kind words
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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3rd October 2007, 06:10 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by musafir ek pal
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha
muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na
riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain
sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na
dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha
vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha
bewaafai se darta hai dil
gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
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Hello Manish ji....aapka kaalam hume bahot pasand aaya ....kuchh kaheta huaa aapka yeh kalaam ....kuchh gum aur kuchh ...paane ki chaah ke saath kuchh khone ka dar bayaan karta huaa sidha dil ko chhu gaya .....bhagwaan ji kare aapko har khushi mile aur aapka har sapanaa pura ho. Keep writing.
Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,
Aapki Dost: Gudia
Jay Ambe.
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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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4th October 2007, 12:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by musafir ek pal
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha
muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na
riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain
sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na
dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha
vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha
bewaafai se darta hai dil
gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
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Adaab Manish Sahab......................
Kya baat kafi samay baad apne kuch likha hai chaliye koi baat nahi der aye mager doorost aye...............ab apke kalam ki baat janb bahut umda ehsaas likha hai apne dil ko chulene wala raha apka likha mubarakbaad ke saath dilidaad de raha hoon khaaksar kubool ho...........khush rahiye aapka bhai kashif
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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frnd 4 ever -
7th October 2007, 05:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by musafir ek pal
pehle likhe ehsaas ko thoda age badate hue..........
faansley bad jayenge ghe dilon mein, aishe kabi sochna nha
muskil me jo haath humara chut jaye, aishe kahbi pakdna na
riste waqt khe saat majboot hote hain
sharm se nah jhuk jayen nigaye humri, aishe kabi dekha na
dil humara shishe ki tarah tut jaye, aishe kabhi rakna nha
vaade jo tum nibha nah payo, vaade aise kabhi karna nha
bewaafai se darta hai dil
gum jayen hum ishq ki galiyon mein, aishe kabhi chodna nha
bewaahi hai aankhon mein, humein aishe kabhi padna nha
joo baat hai dil mein tumhari, ushe kehne mein kabhi darna nha
hum kal rahen jha na rahen
tuhari zindagi ki hum zarrurat ban jayen, aishe halat kabhi palna nha
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Aadab manish ji,
kaise hai aap?
wah janab ,aap ne dil hi chu liya.
apke yeh derd bhare,magar pyar se purr ehsaas.
MASHA ALLAH.ghar kar gaye,
aapki is mukammal koshish k liye dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,
apna khayal rakhiye,
khush rahiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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