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pyar ek khed -
22nd May 2009, 08:37 PM
mere bai deep ne mainu ek comment likhya see meri pehli kavita baare
os da jawab likhde likhe kuj lina zehan which aaian jo aap sab nal sanjian karan lagga aan bai ji ne khusi wandan nu keha see te kuj alag likhan nu khair khushi taan nahi wand rea par fer we kuj alag likhan di koshish hai pyaar pyaar paye loki karde pyar di kadr na koi pehchane ranje bande majnu bande pyar nu khedan paye neane pyar da jazba aaj kitaban ch band pyar da mul na koi koi pechane mirze tur gaye ranjhe tur gaye aaj aj pyar da weopar karan karan sab jaane roohan da mel banyan jisma da da khed waris shah kide baare likhe ajj rab he jaane |
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23rd May 2009, 04:53 AM
Hello jassi ji,
bahoot chaanga likha aah tussi. last two lines are so true! bahoot khoob janaab. edha di likhde raho.. Tuvadaa dost Manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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23rd May 2009, 07:28 AM
aap warge dostan de sadke he likhya hai
je aap warge dost na hunde taan sayad pehli koshish te he ruk janda and i thank all of the ppl who read wat i write |
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