tanhaa sa rehta hooN

[Qasid]

Har roz uthta hooN har roz kehta hooN
Main beedh mein lekin tanhaa sa rehta hooN

Kabhi uske qisson mein kabhi uski yaadon mein
dafn yun dil mein har lamhaa sa rehta hooN

pukaarun unko to kaise ya phir chasm-e-nam karduN
inhi baatil* si baaton mein uljhaa sa rehta hooN

*useless

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


हर रोज़ उठता हूँ हर रोज़ कहता हूँ
मैं बीड़ में लेकिन तनहा सा रहता हूँ

कभी उसके क़िस्सों में कभी उसकी यादों में
दफन यूँ दिल में हर लम्हा सा रहता हूँ

पुकारूं उनको तो कैसे या फिर चस्म-ए-नम करदूं
इन्ही बातिल* सी बातों में उलझा सा रहता हूँ

शब-ए-फ़ुर्क़त नहीं कटती अब उनके तस्सवूर में
उन नरगिसी आँखों में बन रांझा सा रहता हूँ

[Hamdam]

Bahut ache Anubhav bheer mein tanha...kya khayal hai..

Sanjay Sehgal

[sameer'shaad']

pukaarun unko to kaise ya phir chasm-e-nam karduN
inhi baatil* si baaton mein uljhaa sa rehta hooN

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


waahhhh janaab kyaa kahne......... bahot hi alag andaaz nazar aaya aapkaa.... likhte rahie.....

Shaad.....

[Sagar Aashna]

Originally Posted by mast

Har roz uthta hooN har roz kehta hooN
Main beedh mein lekin tanhaa sa rehta hooN

Kabhi uske qisson mein kabhi uski yaadon mein
dafn yun dil mein har lamhaa sa rehta hooN


pukaarun unko to kaise ya phir chasm-e-nam karduN
inhi baatil* si baaton mein uljhaa sa rehta hooN

*useless

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


हर रोज़ उठता हूँ हर रोज़ कहता हूँ
मैं बीड़ में लेकिन तनहा सा रहता हूँ

कभी उसके क़िस्सों में कभी उसकी यादों में
दफन यूँ दिल में हर लम्हा सा रहता हूँ

पुकारूं उनको तो कैसे या फिर चस्म-ए-नम करदूं
इन्ही बातिल* सी बातों में उलझा सा रहता हूँ

शब-ए-फ़ुर्क़त नहीं कटती अब उनके तस्सवूर में
उन नरगिसी आँखों में बन रांझा सा रहता हूँ

Bohot khoob jenab.
Mehfil mein rounaq bakhshte rahiye apni aamad ke saath.
Khair andesh

[Taish]

kya bhaiya raaNjha bhi bane aur nargisi aaNkhoN meiN qaid bhi ho gaye... :P waise ahchi peshkash hui hai, bas yuNhi bazm sajaate rahiye....

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Hamdam

Bahut ache Anubhav bheer mein tanha...kya khayal hai..

Sanjay Sehgal

Shukriyaa Sanjay ji saath aur daad ka, aage bhi aapse saath ki umeed rakhta hooN

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'

pukaarun unko to kaise ya phir chasm-e-nam karduN
inhi baatil* si baaton mein uljhaa sa rehta hooN

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


waahhhh janaab kyaa kahne......... bahot hi alag andaaz nazar aaya aapkaa.... likhte rahie.....

Shaad.....

Shaad bhai,

aapko yeh adaaz-e-bayaan pasand aaya, mamnoon hooN sahab yunhi haunslaa badhaate rahiYeGaa

[masti]

Bohut khoob........but ek baat bataiye Ki aap chashma geela Kai se karenge? Aap to pehente hi nahi

Jokes apart bohut pasand aaya.

[Madhu 14]

Originally Posted by mast

Har roz uthta hooN har roz kehta hooN
Main beedh mein lekin tanhaa sa rehta hooN

Kabhi uske qisson mein kabhi uski yaadon mein
dafn yun dil mein har lamhaa sa rehta hooN

pukaarun unko to kaise ya phir chasm-e-nam karduN
inhi baatil* si baaton mein uljhaa sa rehta hooN

*useless

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


हर रोज़ उठता हूँ हर रोज़ कहता हूँ
मैं बीड़ में लेकिन तनहा सा रहता हूँ

कभी उसके क़िस्सों में कभी उसकी यादों में
दफन यूँ दिल में हर लम्हा सा रहता हूँ

पुकारूं उनको तो कैसे या फिर चस्म-ए-नम करदूं
इन्ही बातिल* सी बातों में उलझा सा रहता हूँ

शब-ए-फ़ुर्क़त नहीं कटती अब उनके तस्सवूर में
उन नरगिसी आँखों में बन रांझा सा रहता हूँ

Waaaaah...
Bahut khoob.....mast jee
dil se daad...

[sameer'shaad']

Originally Posted by masti

Bohut khoob........but ek baat bataiye Ki aap chashma geela Kai se karenge? Aap to pehente hi nahi

Jokes apart bohut pasand aaya.

hahhahaha..... ye dekho saare raaz sare aam khool rahii hain bhabhi ji...

hansiii nahi rokii ja rahi hai mujhse...... bhabhi ji, Chashme Nam ka matlab hai Bheegii huii aankhen.... ab wo aankhen aslii hon ya chasmaa lagaae hue.... doesnt matter... hahahah


jokes apart magar bhai ne bahot acchii ghazal likhii hai..... clapsss

[Hassan]

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


arry waaaaaaaah... kia keh diya bhai .....
dil ky aar paar ho gaye yeh 2 misry ....

bohat bohat khooob..

dherooN daad qabool kejiye is be-misaal kalaam ky liye!

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by masti

Bohut khoob........but ek baat bataiye Ki aap chashma geela Kai se karenge? Aap to pehente hi nahi

Jokes apart bohut pasand aaya.

HaaN baat sahi hai aur tum aise hi sanjiidgi se padhti rahi to ek din chasma lag hi jaayeGaa

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Madhu 14

Waaaaah...
Bahut khoob.....mast jee
dil se daad...

Shukriyaa Madhu ji aapni daad aur saath banaye rakhiYeGaa

[aru]

kya anu jee kahan chipa rakha ja itna sundar kalaam.....kuch yaad sila diya aapke kalaam ne.....liked it...

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by aru

kya anu jee kahan chipa rakha ja itna sundar kalaam.....kuch yaad sila diya aapke kalaam ne.....liked it...

Aru bhai - shukriyaa aapko is kalaam pasand aaya mamnoon hooN..

Yunhi aate rahiYeGaa

[Sabhat khan]

BAHOT HI ACHCHA kalam pesh kiya hae aapne,, daad khubol karen MAST sahab,,

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Taish

kya bhaiya raaNjha bhi bane aur nargisi aaNkhoN meiN qaid bhi ho gaye... :P waise ahchi peshkash hui hai, bas yuNhi bazm sajaate rahiye....

Yahi to baat hai bhai - seedhi cheezein karne mein mazaa nahi raha ab.

Haunslaa badaane ke liye shukriyaa, aacha lagta hai tumhe apni tooti footi ghazalon par aata dekh.

Yunhi saath dete rehnaa

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Sabhat khan

BAHOT HI ACHCHA kalam pesh kiya hae aapne,, daad khubol karen MAST sahab,,

Shukriyaa Janaab

Inaayat hai aapki to khaaksaar ka haunslaa badhaaya, yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa..

[bhushan]

Waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaah
Bohot hi khoobsurat peshkash hai mast bhai
Lafzo me tareef mumkin nahi ho payegi
Daaad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
Bhushan

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by bhushan

Waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaah
Bohot hi khoobsurat peshkash hai mast bhai
Lafzo me tareef mumkin nahi ho payegi
Daaad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
Bhushan

Are bhai aap to sharmindaa kar rahe haiN, yeh aapka badapan hai khaaksaar ki itni haisiyat nahiN

aapko nacheez ki yeh ghazal pasand aayi mamnoon hooN, aage bhi aapse yunhi saath ki umeed raheGii

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Hassan

shab-e-furqat nahi katti ab unke tassavuur mein
un nargisi aankhon mein ban ranjhaa sa rehta hooN


arry waaaaaaaah... kia keh diya bhai .....
dil ky aar paar ho gaye yeh 2 misry ....

bohat bohat khooob..

dherooN daad qabool kejiye is be-misaal kalaam ky liye!

aapko yeh misre pasand aaye jaan kar behad aacha laga bhai - yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa

[Chaand]

bahut khoob dost.... yooNhi likhte raho...

[Qasid]

Originally Posted by Chaand

bahut khoob dost.... yooNhi likhte raho...

Chaand bhai aate rahiye puraane doston ko dekh kar aacha lagta hai, Shukriyaa