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miltee nahiN he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN per taab-e-sukhan |
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miltee nahiN he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN per taab-e-sukhan -
1st November 2004, 10:51 PM
aadab arz he
apnee ek naee ghazal ke saath haazir huN-ajee kanjoosy choRie,manaa ke aap mujh se ache shayyer heN-likhye battaye ke kaisee lagee-yaad rakhiye"artist shouldn't b miser" kaisa aashiq he tu a shah ke jahaaN meN khuvaar nahiN us galee se guzra he or graibaaN taar taar nahiN sahl he tujh ko paana magar us ke liye dushvaar nahiN shikast kha kr jo baarha maanta kabhee haar nahiN miltee nahin he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN pr taab-e-sukhan dil meN jo sher uter jaaye , daad ka talabgaar nahiN motee khayaalon ke heN pinhaaN in alfaaz ki seepiyoN meN shairee ye tukbandee nahiN laffazee ye ashaar nahiN |
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Re: miltee nahiN he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN per taab-e-sukhan -
2nd November 2004, 11:37 AM
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wakai main aapne bohat accha likha hai .... par ye kya aap to taliyan bajwa rahe hai jabardasti ...lolllzzzzzz ... aap wakai mainn acche shayar hai ... kabhi aaiyega khaksar ko padne shayri-e-dard main ... hum bhi kuch khak alfaz likh jate hai kabhi kabhi Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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