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Na jee sakoonga tere bina - 11th January 2006, 02:57 AM

Uski un aakhon ki madhoshi,
Uske un hoton ki narmi,
Uski woh sharmili hasin,
Uski woh mastani chaal,

Uska woh pyar se bhara dil,
Uske woh dheemi dheemi baatein,
Paagal bana gayee hain mujhe,
Deewana batak raha hoon mein...

Doondoon kahaan kahaan usey,
Dekhoon yahaan wahaan usey,
Par milti nahi hain woh mujhe,
Karoon mein kya mere yaara...

Bas yeh jaanta hoon,
Aur yeh maanta hoon,
Ki meri zindagi hain uske liye,
Aur meri saans hain uske liye.

Jee na sakoonga uske bina,
Reh na sakoonga uss se mile bina,
Aao meri is sooni zindagi mein,
Aur pyaar ka woh saawan barsao,
Warna taph kar mar jaaonga mein,
Is registaan si zindagi mein...


Destiny is what you beleive in,
Destiny is what you make off,
Be the creator of your destiny,
For all have the force within....

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Balaji Nagarajan
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11th January 2006, 03:52 AM

hi balaji ji!

wowiees!!! this is nice! keep up the gud work!

bye
warda

p.s. eid mubarak!


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Re: Na jee sakoonga tere bina - 11th January 2006, 11:00 AM

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Originally posted by BalajiNagarajan
Uski un aakhon ki madhoshi,
Uske un hoton ki narmi,
Uski woh sharmili hasin,
Uski woh mastani chaal,

Uska woh pyar se bhara dil,
Uske woh dheemi dheemi baatein,
Paagal bana gayee hain mujhe,
Deewana batak raha hoon mein...

Doondoon kahaan kahaan usey,
Dekhoon yahaan wahaan usey,
Par milti nahi hain woh mujhe,
Karoon mein kya mere yaara...

Bas yeh jaanta hoon,
Aur yeh maanta hoon,
Ki meri zindagi hain uske liye,
Aur meri saans hain uske liye.

Jee na sakoonga uske bina,
Reh na sakoonga uss se mile bina,
Aao meri is sooni zindagi mein,
Aur pyaar ka woh saawan barsao,
Warna taph kar mar jaaonga mein,
Is registaan si zindagi mein...
it was wonderful piece of work buddy but want to say u 1 thing "agar uske bina jee nahi sakte to maroge kaise unke bina"


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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Thank you - 11th January 2006, 04:25 PM

Thank you warda for all your support. And eid mubarak.


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Thank you. - 11th January 2006, 04:26 PM

Mehul,

You are right... Agar mein jee nahi saktha uske bina, tho mein mar bhi nahi saktha. Thanks buddy.


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Re: Na jee sakoonga tere bina - 25th January 2006, 04:19 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by BalajiNagarajan
Uski un aakhon ki madhoshi,
Uske un hoton ki narmi,
Uski woh sharmili hasin,
Uski woh mastani chaal,

Uska woh pyar se bhara dil,
Uske woh dheemi dheemi baatein,
Paagal bana gayee hain mujhe,
Deewana batak raha hoon mein...

Doondoon kahaan kahaan usey,
Dekhoon yahaan wahaan usey,
Par milti nahi hain woh mujhe,
Karoon mein kya mere yaara...

Bas yeh jaanta hoon,
Aur yeh maanta hoon,
Ki meri zindagi hain uske liye,
Aur meri saans hain uske liye.

Jee na sakoonga uske bina,
Reh na sakoonga uss se mile bina,
Aao meri is sooni zindagi mein,
Aur pyaar ka woh saawan barsao,
Warna taph kar mar jaaonga mein,
Is registaan si zindagi mein...
hi,
awesomely expressed. ek sher yaad aa gaya issi kalam ko parh kar.

jaan gawa denge lagta hai pyaar mein tere
kyouki dil na raha ab akhtiyaar mein mere!

each n every word seems to be complete in itself. agar sanam tujhse doori na hoti .......pyaar ki kahani adhori na hoti........agar na hoti tujhse milan ki chahat.........to jeena meri bhi majhboori na hoti!lots of thoughts pondering my mind while reading u. its well expressed. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with hyis finnest glitters.
with love
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Thank you - 25th January 2006, 04:25 PM

Thank you Roshni for liking my poem and also giving me a gist of what your mind thinks when reading my poem. Thank a lot


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