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Sapnon ki Duniya - 23rd January 2006, 08:37 PM

Hi All,

Aaj bas mann kiya ki main apne dil ki awaaz ko aap tak pahunchaoon, Shaayad main mooh se keh na paaoon apne dil ki baath, isi liye shabdon mey utaar diya, bas yeh aasha hain ki maine apni dil ki baath sahi lavzon se izhaar kiya hain.... Aur meri yeh iccha hain ki yeh choti si koshish shayad aapko bhi us duniya ki sair karaayein jis duniya ki mujhe kwaab hain.... Aap is koshish par kuch likhe na likhe magar padiyega zaroor.



Un sapno ki duniya mein,
The hum unke paas,
Chaand tha pada zameen par,
Aur taare the apna paas...

Baraf ki woh naram chatai,
Thee zameen par faili,
Aur na tha ek bhi kaanta,
Bas the phool hi phool...

Na chahe hum ki unko lage,
Is liye bikhera gulab sadko par,
Aur na aaye paseena unhe,
Is liye dheeme sey hawa chalayi...

Thi woh duniya mere haathon mey,
Bana saktha tha usko jaise main chahoon,
Thoda maine taare,
Lagaaye usko zulfon par,
Aur kaha tha maine phool sey,
Bhikero khusboo us par...

Aaye jab woh milne mujhse,
Duniya hi badal doon main uski,
Ley jaoon main usko meri duniya mein,
Jahaan woh bas khushi paaye...

Na koi dard ka saaya,
Na koi nazron ki dekh,
Na koi dushman ka darr,
Aur na koi zamaane ki fikar...

Rakhoonga main khush usey,
Zamaane sey zyaada,
Pyaar karoonga main usko,
Meri zindagi sey zyaada...

Aayegi woh meri zindagi mein,
Hain mujhe woh yakeen,
Aur uta le jaaoonga main usey,
Meri sapnon ki duniya mein hamesha....


Destiny is what you beleive in,
Destiny is what you make off,
Be the creator of your destiny,
For all have the force within....

Regards,
Balaji Nagarajan

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Re: Sapnon ki Duniya - 23rd January 2006, 09:28 PM

Hats....oFFFFF
Beautiful poem....but take care little bit of pattern or rhym...last three para had good rhym...but U HAVE WRITTEN TOO GOOD AS ONE OF UR HINDI POEM...THE SENTIMENTS R MIND BLOWING "SINCE I AM ONLY THE ONE HERE WHO CAN UNDERSTIND THOSE "
GREAT BUDDY KEEP IT UP...
C YA...


Try for perfection n u will attain EXCELENCE...
U for ullas or ullas for U.
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Thank you - 23rd January 2006, 10:12 PM

thanks buddy good to se you reading my poems still.....


Destiny is what you beleive in,
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25th January 2006, 04:28 AM

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Talking hiiii - 25th January 2006, 03:35 PM

Hi Warda,

It's been long sinece i saw any expert comments from you... feels so nice to see your comments for my thoughts.... keep reading....


Destiny is what you beleive in,
Destiny is what you make off,
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For all have the force within....

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