kaash use bi mere "pyar" se "pyar" ho jaye

[ADHURI HEER]

Chale do kadam jo saath mere,
to uske saath se pyar ho jaye.
Thame jo pyar se hath mera,
to apne hi hath se pyar ho jaye.
Jis raat aaye khwabo mein wo,
us suhani raat se pyar ho jaye.
Jis baat mein aaye zikar uska,
usi baat se pyar ho jaye.
Jab pukare pyar se mera naam lekar,
to apne hi naam se pyar ho jaye.
Hota hai itna khoobsurat ye pyar agar,
to kaash use bi mere "pyar" se "pyar" ho jaye

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[A-DEEP]

HELLO PUNJABAN HEER JI

Barre time baad shayri.com te vapis aaye ho,kithe chale gaye si???tuhade varge good poet naal hi eh mehfil sajdi hai,

eh wali poem bahut hi sohni hai, iss da ehsaas eda lagda hai jive kise ne pehle pyar time likhi hove, sachmuch bahut hi jiada sohni hai, ek ek line sohni hai,

[LOVEDEEP]

HELLO HEER JI

Ki haal hai tuhada? sachi hi tusi ene dina baad vapis aaye ho, lagda hai ke tusi ta holiday te chale gaye si ???

Ha ji, HEER ji, mainu vi eh poem bahut hi jiada sohni lagi, sachi bahut hi strong lines han, kise nu pyar karan liye

[ABABBU]

[quote=ADHURI HEER;239530]Chale do kadam jo saath mere,
to uske saath se pyar ho jaye.
Thame jo pyar se hath mera,
to apne hi hath se pyar ho jaye.
Jis raat aaye khwabo mein wo,
us suhani raat se pyar ho jaye.
Jis baat mein aaye zikar uska,
usi baat se pyar ho jaye.
Jab pukare pyar se mera naam lekar,
to apne hi naam se pyar ho jaye.
Hota hai itna khoobsurat ye pyar agar,
to kaash use bi mere "pyar" se "pyar" ho jaye..


shukriya HEER itni pyari poem post karne ke liye

[ADHURI HEER]

Originally Posted by A-DEEP

HELLO PUNJABAN HEER JI

Barre time baad shayri.com te vapis aaye ho,kithe chale gaye si???tuhade varge good poet naal hi eh mehfil sajdi hai,

eh wali poem bahut hi sohni hai, iss da ehsaas eda lagda hai jive kise ne pehle pyar time likhi hove, sachmuch bahut hi jiada sohni hai, ek ek line sohni hai,

Sukariya deep ji

[ADHURI HEER]

Originally Posted by LOVEDEEP

HELLO HEER JI

Ki haal hai tuhada? sachi hi tusi ene dina baad vapis aaye ho, lagda hai ke tusi ta holiday te chale gaye si ???

Ha ji, HEER ji, mainu vi eh poem bahut hi jiada sohni lagi, sachi bahut hi strong lines han, kise nu pyar karan liye

thanks love deep

[ADHURI HEER]

Originally Posted by A-BABBU

shukriya HEER itni pyari poem post karne ke liye

thanks babbu ji eh reply den layi

[sagar_vishvaraj]

u better post this in urdu forum or normal poaetry ...... its not for hindi forum .... u better check some hindi writers first