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16th April 2008, 08:23 AM
hello dosto,
aaj main pehli baar punjabi de vich kuch likhya aah. aah poem mere dil de bahut najdeek aah. jo b likhya aah, bilkul sach likhya aah. aaj bahut yaad aayi desh punjab di...te likh deta jo dil ne keha. umeed karda haa k tuvanu pasand ayegi: peda.N diyaan taaliyan chad aaye zameen te ghire bher chad aaye chade chade aishi kangaal ho gaye vatan ki chadya, lahgda jivein rooh chad aaye vaade kithe si yaaran naal chote honde nein yaaraN naal layina yaarian chad aaye hun waqt nahi beh ke maa nu sataaN da bachpan che kitiyaan sharaataan chad aaye mee tha ethe be bahut penda aah par mee che peejan de andaaz chad aaye dost kehnde si "aapa saare naal ravange" dostan naal kithe aah vaade chad aaye hasde tha aishi aaj b hain dosto par hasyaan de hinju aishi chad aaye bibi hun haak ni mardi raat jhad hondi aah aishi apni raatan tha suraj chad aaye reh gayian yaada mere kaul haur khak ni yaadein che vasse bande chad aaye miti di yaad bahut aundi aah, par ki kariye vatan ki chadya, lahgda jivein rooh chad aaye,,,, dosto please dasiyon k tuvanu sadi ah pesh-kash kidha di lagi? teh yeh koi tuvade kaul koi sujaav hove..tha meherbaani kar auh b dasdiyo. tuvada dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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16th April 2008, 08:59 AM
SSA Manish ji, bahut hi pyara likhiya hai, vese ta mai kai vaar tuhadiya poems read kitiya han, par mainu pata nahi si ke tusi punjabi ch vi ena sohna likh lainde ho,
eh lines ta dil nu chuu gayiya.. hun waqt nahi beh ke maa nu sataaN da bachpan che kitiyaan sharaataan chad aaye mee tha ethe be bahut penda aah par mee che peejan de andaaz chad aaye NAHI LABHANI MOUJ PUNJAB VARGI  GOD IS GREAT
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Waahhhh -
16th April 2008, 02:34 PM
Manish ji bahut shaandaar likhiyaa hai. MaiN apney pyaarey Punjab wich hi renhdaaN haaN, par ajj tuhaadi eh rachnaa padh ke meraa es mitti naal moh hor vi gehraa ho gaya. Taahliaan, ber, bibi di haak vargey shabdaaN da bahut pyaaraa istemaal kitaa. Bahut vadhiyaa laggaa. Specially eh lines
bibi hun haak ni mardi raat jhad hondi aah aishi apni raatan tha suraj chad aaye Main kadi kadi eh vi sochdaaN ke saadey bachey shaayad eh sab kadi vi enjoy nahi kar sakangey. Hun taan Taahliaan punjab wich vi nahi rehiaaN. Beri dekhey shayad mainu vi 15-20 saal ho gaye. Bachey raat nu khedan hun bahar hi nahi jaandey taan mummy ji nu haak maaran di lod hi nahi rahi. bahut kujh badal gaya. Eh vi sab theek hai par oh shayad zyaadaa theek si. Ik Rachnaa essey hi parivaar de ik pyaarey jihey shayar Shaminder ji di yaad gayi. ਓਹ ਦਿਨ ਜਿੰਦਗੀ ਦੇ ਗਏ... ਦਿਨ ਬਚਪਨ ਦੇ ਗਏ ! ਨਿੱਕੇ-ਨਿੱਕੇ ਹੱਥ ਗਿੱਲੀ ਮਿੱਟੀ ਚ ਲਬੇੜਨੇ... ਕੱਚੇ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਉੱਤੇ ਟਾਇਰ ਸਾਇਕਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਰੋੜਨੇ! ਭੱਜਕੇ ਟਰਾਲੀਆਂ ਦੇ ਪਿਛੋਂ ਗੱਨੇ ਖਿਚਨੇ... ਨਿੱਕੀ ਉਮਰੇ ਨਜਾਰੇ ਬੜੇ ਲਏ ! ਆਟੇ ਦੀ ਪਕਾਉਣੀ ਚਿੱੜੀ ਮਾਂ ਤੌਂ ਜਿੱਦ ਕਰਕੇ.. ਜਹਾਜ਼ ਉਡਾਉਣੇ ਕਾਗਜ਼ਾਂ ਦੇ ਪਾੜ ਵਰਕੇ ! ਬਾਰਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੇ ਪਾਣੀ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੋਲਾ ਪਾ-ਪਾਅ ਭਿਜਨਾ.. ਤਾਇਆਂ-ਚਾਚਿਆਂ ਦੇ ਘਰੋਂ ਰੋਟੀ ਖ਼ਾਣ ਗਿਜਣਾ ! ਓਹ ਨਾ ਸਾਂਝਾਂ ਦੇ ਸਮੇਂ ਨਾਂ ਹੁਣ ਰਹੇ ??? ਉਮਰਾਂ ਦੇ ਲੰਬੇ ਪੈਂਡੇ ਝੱਟ ਵਿੱਚ ਮੁਕਗਏ... (Shaminder ji) Wasdey raho tilak |
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17th April 2008, 11:05 AM
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mere pyarey pyarey bahut pyarey munna.....ki kaha tenu...kuj samaj nahi aa reha....bas aina hi kahangi ki tere yeh ahsaas maiN dil to mahsoos kite, te meri akha.n bhar aayea.n  Tilak jee ne jo keha sahi keha hai, ki hun oh sab badal geya hai....jo asi chotte hundiya maujja maniya c, hun de bachiya.n nu oh naseeb nahi....hun oh pyariya.n khela.n v nahi rahiya.n ona di jagah Television ne lai laye hai, aaj de bachiya.n nu Taaliya.n da hi pata nahi te oh usdi cha.n bare ki samjange, ona nu lukan-meeti khelan da majja v pata nahi, te pitthu garam khelna da v anand aaj de bacchiya.n de naseeb vich nahi.......! munna teri eh poetry ne menu mera bachpan yaad dilla ditta.....  munna kitte v rahna par apne punjab nu na bhoolna es da maan hamesha banaye rakhna......saanu maan hai punjabi hon da eh gal kade na bhoolna.bahut saare pyar naal teri diiiiiiiiiiiiiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Tusan kinna sach aakheya... ki vatann nu chadeya lagda rooh chad ditti.. boht hi vadiya likhya tussi... agge vi udeek raegi... Jiyonde Vasde raho! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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20th June 2008, 05:41 AM
SSA heer ji, tuvanu ethe dekh-ke bahut changa lagya. te tuvanu saadhi poem changi lagi, saanu eh jank-kar bahut khushi hui. jedian lines tuvanu changiyaan lagyian... bilkul sachiyaan ne. hun nah mee che peeje hue b kaafi dher ho gayi!!! te jo tussi end che likhya bilkul sahi likhya. nahi lababni mauj punjab wargi..chahe kithe marji chale jayo. umeed karde haa k aage n tuvada saath milega. raab tuvanu humesha khush rakeh. tuvada dost manish [/quote] Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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26th September 2008, 03:18 AM
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tuvada dost Manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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