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Thumbs up "राजनीति"../.."Raajneeti"...! - 10th February 2010, 09:50 AM

मेरे प्यारे दोस्तों:

नमस्कार और आदाब!

महफ़िल में ऐक बार फिर से हाज़िर हूँ ऐक अलग से मुद्दे को लेकर, ऐक आज़ाद ख़याल की कोशिश.. "राजनीति" ..मैं और आप सभी ईस के बारे में थोड़ा बहुत कुछ जानते है .. हर चीज़ की अच्छी और बूरी दोनों बातें होती है..जब कोई अपने फायदे के लिए "राजनीति" करता है तब लोगों के साथ बड़ी ना-इंसाफी होती है... जिनका भरोसा जीत कर जो लोग नेता बनते है... मेरा मुद्दा भी यही है ऐक ऐसे नेता की सोच.. जो सिर्फ़ अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही "राजनीति" मे आया है.. उम्मीद करता हूँ आपको मेरी यह कोशिश पसंद आएँगी.. आपका प्यार और साथ मुझे ज़रूर मिलेँगा..!

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"राजनीति"
ना यहाँ कोइ मेरा पिता है
ना भाई, बहन, दोस्त ना रिश्तेदार कोई
यहाँ मैं अपने लिए ही जीता हू
अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही कुछ करता हू
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ जीता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ मरता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ क्या करता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है कौन देश के लिए मरता है
क्यूंकी हम तो कुर्सी से चिपके हुए नेता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे मुझे कौन यहाँ बिना छत,ठंड में
खुले आसमाँ के नीचे सोता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड़ता है मुझे जब कोई बच्चा भूख से
अपनी माँ के सामने रोता-तडपता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किसी मज़हब से
बस कुर्सी बचाने को हम लोगों को मिलाते भी है
बाद में जब चाहे आपस मे सब को लडाते भी है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किस गाँव में बिजली या पानी नही
हम जाते ही नही वहाँ..
जहां पैसो की होती बरसाते नही
जीतने के लिए हम झुठे वादे भी करते है
वरना आम आदमी बिना वादों के
कहाँ हमारी बातों मे आते है
चुनाव आते ही वादों की काली पट्टी
लोगों की आँखों पर बाँध देते है
ईस तरहा भरोसा जीत के लोगों का
हम अपनी कुर्सी को बचा लेते है
हम तो बस वोट के लिए पहले नोट खिलाते है
फिर आराम से कुर्सी पे बैठ के
लोगों की जेब खाली करवाते है
काम करते हे गंदे पर हम बातें करते है सीधी
एक कुर्सी के लिए हम खेल खेलते हैं लोगों से
जिसे कहते है
"राजनीति"



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

mehfil meiN aik baar fir se haaZir huuN aik alag se mudde ko lekar, aik aazaad Khayaal ki koShiSh.. "Raajneeti" ..maiN aur aap sabhee ees ke baare meN thoDaa bahot kuch jaante hai.n .. har chiz ki achhi aur booree donoN baateN hotee haii.. jab ko'ii apne faa'iide ke liye "Raajneeti" kartaa hai tab logoN ke saath baRii naa-iNsaafii hotee haii ,, jiNkaa bharosaa jeet kar jo log Netaa bante hai.n.. meraa mudda bhee yahee hai aik aise netaa ki soch 1 jo sirf apne faa'iide ke liye hi "Raajneetii" meiN aaya haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapkaa pyaar aur saath mujhe zaruur milengaa..!

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"Raajneeti"
naa yahaaN koii meraa pitaa haii
naa bhaai, behan, dost naa riShtedaar ko'ii
yahaaN maiN apne liye hi jeetaa huuN
apne faa'iide ke liye hi kuch kartaa huuN
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kauN yahaaN jeetaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hau kauN yahaaN martaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN yahaaN kyaa kartaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN deSh ke liye martaa haii
kyuuNki hum tou Kursi se chipkaa hue netaa hai.n
kyaa farq paDtaa haii mujhe kauN yahaaN binaa Chhat,ThaND meiN
Khule aasmaa.N ke niche sotaa haii
kyaa farq padtaa hai mujhe jab ko'ii bachchaa bhooKh se
apni maa,N ke saamne rotaa-taDaptaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kisii mazhab se
bas Kursi bachaane ko hum logoN ko milaate bhee haii
baad meN jab chaahe aapas me sab ko laDaate bhee hai
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kis gaaNv meN bijli yaa paani nahiiN
hum jaate hi nahiiN wahaaN..
jahaaN paiso ki hotee barsaate nahiiN
jeetne ke liye hum JhuuThe waade bhee karte hai.n
warnaa aam aadami binaa waadoN ke
kahaaN hamaari baatoN me aate hai.n
chunaav aate hi waadoN ki kaali paTTi
logoN ki aaNKhoN par baaNdh dete hai.n
ees taraH bharosa jeet ke logoN kaa
hum apni Kursi ko bachaa lete hai.n
hum to bas voTe ke liye pehle noTe Khilaate hai.n
fir aaraam se Kursi pe baiTh ke
logoN ki jeb Khaali karwaate hai.n
kaam karte hai.n gaNde par hum baateN karte hai.n seedhee
ek Kursi ke liye hum Khel Khelte hai.n logoN se
jise kehte hai.n
"Raajneeti"


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10th February 2010, 10:19 AM

Dhaval Ji...Namaste ! vikreet soch rakhne waale aaj ki raajeeti ke netaao par karaa praahar karti ....aapki rachna......pur asar lagi mujhe....jaha in baaton par gaur karne ki zarurat hai.....waha iska asar ho......yahi duaa hai....bahut acha laga padhkar.....kalam ki awaaz kaafi buland rahi....dastak ka asar hona hi chaahiye....bharashth netaaon par....

rachna ki sabhi panktiya .....taarif ke kaabil hai....vishesh daad...! is vishesh subject ke liye....yuhi likhte rahen....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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10th February 2010, 11:45 AM

Bahut khoob Dhaval bhai....

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10th February 2010, 03:42 PM

Dhaval Bhaii,,,

Kia khoob mudda uthaaya hai aap nay...

Aur jis tarah apne ehsaasooN ko aap nay
lafzooN ki shakal meiN biyaaN kiya.....

Nihaayat khamooshi se hur lafz chupkay
se kahiN dil k aar paar hotaa gayaa....

Teh-e-dil se daad haazir hai,
qabool kijiye.....

Younhi likhtay rahiye,,,

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12th February 2010, 02:18 AM

Dhaval jii,

Namastee!

Bahut khoob.... likha hai aapney ....kuch alag padh kar aacha laga ... ek saachiye pad kar aacha laga ....waise "Raajneetii" ... har jagah chalney lagii ... (jk)

likhtey rahye

hamesha khush rahye

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SUPERB!!..SUPERB!!!!.......................




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Dhaval Ji...Namaste ! vikreet soch rakhne waale aaj ki raajeeti ke netaao par karaa praahar karti ....aapki rachna......pur asar lagi mujhe....jaha in baaton par gaur karne ki zarurat hai.....waha iska asar ho......yahi duaa hai....bahut acha laga padhkar.....kalam ki awaaz kaafi buland rahi....dastak ka asar hona hi chaahiye....bharashth netaaon par....

rachna ki sabhi panktiya .....taarif ke kaabil hai....vishesh daad...! is vishesh subject ke liye....yuhi likhte rahen....

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
Naresh bhaa'ii:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? aapne merii ees koShiSh ko dil se samjhaa mujhe bahot hi sukooN milaa.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN aage bhee! maiN aapka be-had ShuKraGuzaar huuN!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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wah dhaval ji kya baat kahi hai aapne to "राजनीति" ki sari paul kholdi hai aaj ke zamane ki sacchai bayan ki hai ...muje to bahut archa laga.....
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vatavaran raajniti pe ek sashakt rachna kahi hai dhaval jee aapne. daad.



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22nd February 2010, 06:58 PM

Dhaval,

Bade dino baad apko parha hai...vo bhi kavita...achha laga..waise kai baar apko samaaj ke alag-alag pehaluo.N pe likhte dekha hai...RAJNEETI bhi ek rang hai samaaj ka...jise shayad koi samajh hi nahi pata...sidhe shabdo me sacchaai kahi hai apne..lekin bechare RAJNETA bhi kya kare...jab Bharat ke log hi unke galat kaamo ko badhaava dete hain to vo to ye sab karenge hi...

Meri daad kabool kijiye....

yunhi likhte rahiyega..

Ijaazat chaahungi...

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Dhaval ji, bahut accha subject uthaya h aapne..
accha laga padh ke..
daad kubul keejiye........
   
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Bahut khoob Dhaval bhai....

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Ritu jee:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap? koShish kii pasaNdagee ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaaH!

paRhte rahiyeNgaa aage bhee!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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2nd March 2010, 10:33 PM

mere chottu.....muje maloom hai tuje mere reply ka intzaar bahut dino se tha, par main bahut busy thi reply nahi kar paaye, par maine teri es poetry ko kum se kum 25-30 baar pada hai, muje behad accha lagta hai jab main tuje har baar kisi naye topic par likhtey hue dekhti hoon aur us se bhi accha tab lagta hai jab tu us topic mein doob hi jata hai !
chottu dua karti hoon ki bahgwaan teri kalam mein aur nikhaar deN.

teri poetry ki shuru ki chand lines padkar ek joke yaad aa gaya, yahan share kar rahi hoon.


neta ka beta apne baap se kahta hai ki, maiN bhi neta ban.na chahta hoon aap muje neta ban.ne ke kuch sabak seekha dijiye, neta kahta theek hai.
Neta: beta aisa kar chatt par ja aur neeche jump kar.
Beta: papa mere fracture ho jayega main mar jauNga...
Neta: beta main hoon na, jab tu jump karega main tuje girne se phele hi pakad loonga.
Beta: theek hai, main jump karta hoon aap muje sambhaal lena.
Neta: theek hai beta.
Beta chatt par jata hai aur neeche jump karta hai, par baap ne usko pakda nahi aage badkar, neeche girne se uske fracture ho jata hai,
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Dhaval Bhaii,,,

Kia khoob mudda uthaaya hai aap nay...

Aur jis tarah apne ehsaasooN ko aap nay
lafzooN ki shakal meiN biyaaN kiya.....

Nihaayat khamooshi se hur lafz chupkay
se kahiN dil k aar paar hotaa gayaa....

Teh-e-dil se daad haazir hai,
qabool kijiye.....

Younhi likhtay rahiye,,,

Regardzz
Hassan bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye bahot bahot SHuKriyaaH.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN.. aapki daad sar'aaNKhoN par...!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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main sirf itana kahuga ki aaj koi bhi sach sun'na pasNd nahi karta hai
lekin aap ne kosish ki ye sach samne laane ki, main sdc ke sabhi dostoN se gujarish karuga ki wo bhi aesa sach samane layeN
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Dhaval Bhai Adaab

Bhai aapke ahsaas ki kadar karta hun...... aur aapne jo bayan kiya shayad sahin bayan kiya....... per yeh bahes ka bekaar hissa hai jis per kuch kah ker bhi koi fayda nahi.... kuch sochker bhi kuch kaam ka nahi...... humare desh ki rajneeti ka aaj aisa haal hai shayad hi duniyaa ke kisi desh ki rajneeti aisi hogi..... Aur na ho.......

Khair aapki kalam bahut khoob kah gayi kayin baaten agar koi aisi fitrat wala neta padh le to yakeenan uspar kuch to asar kar hi jayengi...

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Namastee!

Bahut khoob.... likha hai aapney ....kuch alag padh kar aacha laga ... ek saachiye pad kar aacha laga ....waise "Raajneetii" ... har jagah chalney lagii ... (jk)

likhtey rahye

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Duaoon ke saath

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Mandeep jee:

namaste!

koShiSh ko pasaNd karne ke liye bahot bahot ShukriyaaH.. aise hi saath dete raheN..!

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मेरे प्यारे दोस्तों:

नमस्कार और आदाब!

महफ़िल में ऐक बार फिर से हाज़िर हूँ ऐक अलग से मुद्दे को लेकर, ऐक आज़ाद ख़याल की कोशिश.. "राजनीति" ..मैं और आप सभी ईस के बारे में थोड़ा बहुत कुछ जानते है .. हर चीज़ की अच्छी और बूरी दोनों बातें होती है..जब कोई अपने फायदे के लिए "राजनीति" करता है तब लोगों के साथ बड़ी ना-इंसाफी होती है... जिनका भरोसा जीत कर जो लोग नेता बनते है... मेरा मुद्दा भी यही है ऐक ऐसे नेता की सोच.. जो सिर्फ़ अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही "राजनीति" मे आया है.. उम्मीद करता हूँ आपको मेरी यह कोशिश पसंद आएँगी.. आपका प्यार और साथ मुझे ज़रूर मिलेँगा..!

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"राजनीति"
ना यहाँ कोइ मेरा पिता है
ना भाई, बहन, दोस्त ना रिश्तेदार कोई
यहाँ मैं अपने लिए ही जीता हू
अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही कुछ करता हू
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ जीता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ मरता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ क्या करता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है कौन देश के लिए मरता है
क्यूंकी हम तो कुर्सी से चिपके हुए नेता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे मुझे कौन यहाँ बिना छत,ठंड में
खुले आसमाँ के नीचे सोता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड़ता है मुझे जब कोई बच्चा भूख से
अपनी माँ के सामने रोता-तडपता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किसी मज़हब से
बस कुर्सी बचाने को हम लोगों को मिलाते भी है
बाद में जब चाहे आपस मे सब को लडाते भी है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किस गाँव में बिजली या पानी नही
हम जाते ही नही वहाँ..
जहां पैसो की होती बरसाते नही
जीतने के लिए हम झुठे वादे भी करते है
वरना आम आदमी बिना वादों के
कहाँ हमारी बातों मे आते है
चुनाव आते ही वादों की काली पट्टी
लोगों की आँखों पर बाँध देते है
ईस तरहा भरोसा जीत के लोगों का
हम अपनी कुर्सी को बचा लेते है
हम तो बस वोट के लिए पहले नोट खिलाते है
फिर आराम से कुर्सी पे बैठ के
लोगों की जेब खाली करवाते है
काम करते हे गंदे पर हम बातें करते है सीधी
एक कुर्सी के लिए हम खेल खेलते हैं लोगों से
जिसे कहते है
"राजनीति"



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

mehfil meiN aik baar fir se haaZir huuN aik alag se mudde ko lekar, aik aazaad Khayaal ki koShiSh.. "Raajneeti" ..maiN aur aap sabhee ees ke baare meN thoDaa bahot kuch jaante hai.n .. har chiz ki achhi aur booree donoN baateN hotee haii.. jab ko'ii apne faa'iide ke liye "Raajneeti" kartaa hai tab logoN ke saath baRii naa-iNsaafii hotee haii ,, jiNkaa bharosaa jeet kar jo log Netaa bante hai.n.. meraa mudda bhee yahee hai aik aise netaa ki soch 1 jo sirf apne faa'iide ke liye hi "Raajneetii" meiN aaya haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapkaa pyaar aur saath mujhe zaruur milengaa..!

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"Raajneeti"
naa yahaaN koii meraa pitaa haii
naa bhaai, behan, dost naa riShtedaar ko'ii
yahaaN maiN apne liye hi jeetaa huuN
apne faa'iide ke liye hi kuch kartaa huuN
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kauN yahaaN jeetaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hau kauN yahaaN martaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN yahaaN kyaa kartaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN deSh ke liye martaa haii
kyuuNki hum tou Kursi se chipkaa hue netaa hai.n
kyaa farq paDtaa haii mujhe kauN yahaaN binaa Chhat,ThaND meiN
Khule aasmaa.N ke niche sotaa haii
kyaa farq padtaa hai mujhe jab ko'ii bachchaa bhooKh se
apni maa,N ke saamne rotaa-taDaptaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kisii mazhab se
bas Kursi bachaane ko hum logoN ko milaate bhee haii
baad meN jab chaahe aapas me sab ko laDaate bhee hai
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kis gaaNv meN bijli yaa paani nahiiN
hum jaate hi nahiiN wahaaN..
jahaaN paiso ki hotee barsaate nahiiN
jeetne ke liye hum JhuuThe waade bhee karte hai.n
warnaa aam aadami binaa waadoN ke
kahaaN hamaari baatoN me aate hai.n
chunaav aate hi waadoN ki kaali paTTi
logoN ki aaNKhoN par baaNdh dete hai.n
ees taraH bharosa jeet ke logoN kaa
hum apni Kursi ko bachaa lete hai.n
hum to bas voTe ke liye pehle noTe Khilaate hai.n
fir aaraam se Kursi pe baiTh ke
logoN ki jeb Khaali karwaate hai.n
kaam karte hai.n gaNde par hum baateN karte hai.n seedhee
ek Kursi ke liye hum Khel Khelte hai.n logoN se
jise kehte hai.n
"Raajneeti"


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AAdab dhaval ji,
kaise hai aap?



ji shukriya haME yaad rakhne ke liye.
ji hum or hamare HASSAN dono hi thik hai,

wah janab aap to pehle se bhi zyada kamal kar gaye,,kaash aapki yeh nazam raajniti me chhap jaaye..shayad unhe kuch to samajh aayegi.
dhaval ji isi tarah apne kalam ke jaadu bikherte rahiye,kamiyaabi apne aap chali aayegi.

Allah aapko tarakki de.AAMIN

KHUSH RAHIYE.
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aapne apna qeemtee waqt diyaa mujhe baRii hi KhuShi hu'ii...! yuuNhi paRhte rahiye aage bhee!

ShuKriyaa'h

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Radhikaa jee:

namaste!

aapki daad sar'aanKhoN par.. yuuNhi paRhte rahiye aage bhee... bahot bahot SHuKriyaa'h

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dhaval ji namaste,

rajneeti ek essa vishaya hai jis par jitna likha jaye utna kam hai aur yeh mera pasandida vishaya bhi hai apne jo bhi likha hai bahut hi accha likha hai meri ek prarthana hai apse ke is vishaya par kuch aur bhi likhiye...........mujhe intezar rahega

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"राजनीति"
ना यहाँ कोइ मेरा पिता है
ना भाई, बहन, दोस्त ना रिश्तेदार कोई
यहाँ मैं अपने लिए ही जीता हू
अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही कुछ करता हू
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ जीता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ मरता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ क्या करता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है कौन देश के लिए मरता है
क्यूंकी हम तो कुर्सी से चिपके हुए नेता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे मुझे कौन यहाँ बिना छत,ठंड में
खुले आसमाँ के नीचे सोता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड़ता है मुझे जब कोई बच्चा भूख से
अपनी माँ के सामने रोता-तडपता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किसी मज़हब से
बस कुर्सी बचाने को हम लोगों को मिलाते भी है
बाद में जब चाहे आपस मे सब को लडाते भी है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किस गाँव में बिजली या पानी नही
हम जाते ही नही वहाँ..
जहां पैसो की होती बरसाते नही
जीतने के लिए हम झुठे वादे भी करते है
वरना आम आदमी बिना वादों के
कहाँ हमारी बातों मे आते है
चुनाव आते ही वादों की काली पट्टी
लोगों की आँखों पर बाँध देते है
ईस तरहा भरोसा जीत के लोगों का
हम अपनी कुर्सी को बचा लेते है
हम तो बस वोट के लिए पहले नोट खिलाते है
फिर आराम से कुर्सी पे बैठ के
लोगों की जेब खाली करवाते है
काम करते हे गंदे पर हम बातें करते है सीधी
एक कुर्सी के लिए हम खेल खेलते हैं लोगों से
जिसे कहते है
"राजनीति"


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namaskaar aur Aadaab!

mehfil meiN aik baar fir se haaZir huuN aik alag se mudde ko lekar, aik aazaad Khayaal ki koShiSh.. "Raajneeti" ..maiN aur aap sabhee ees ke baare meN thoDaa bahot kuch jaante hai.n .. har chiz ki achhi aur booree donoN baateN hotee haii.. jab ko'ii apne faa'iide ke liye "Raajneeti" kartaa hai tab logoN ke saath baRii naa-iNsaafii hotee haii ,, jiNkaa bharosaa jeet kar jo log Netaa bante hai.n.. meraa mudda bhee yahee hai aik aise netaa ki soch 1 jo sirf apne faa'iide ke liye hi "Raajneetii" meiN aaya haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapkaa pyaar aur saath mujhe zaruur milengaa..!

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"Raajneeti"
naa yahaaN koii meraa pitaa haii
naa bhaai, behan, dost naa riShtedaar ko'ii
yahaaN maiN apne liye hi jeetaa huuN
apne faa'iide ke liye hi kuch kartaa huuN
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kauN yahaaN jeetaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hau kauN yahaaN martaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN yahaaN kyaa kartaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN deSh ke liye martaa haii
kyuuNki hum tou Kursi se chipkaa hue netaa hai.n
kyaa farq paDtaa haii mujhe kauN yahaaN binaa Chhat,ThaND meiN
Khule aasmaa.N ke niche sotaa haii
kyaa farq padtaa hai mujhe jab ko'ii bachchaa bhooKh se
apni maa,N ke saamne rotaa-taDaptaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kisii mazhab se
bas Kursi bachaane ko hum logoN ko milaate bhee haii
baad meN jab chaahe aapas me sab ko laDaate bhee hai
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kis gaaNv meN bijli yaa paani nahiiN
hum jaate hi nahiiN wahaaN..
jahaaN paiso ki hotee barsaate nahiiN
jeetne ke liye hum JhuuThe waade bhee karte hai.n
warnaa aam aadami binaa waadoN ke
kahaaN hamaari baatoN me aate hai.n
chunaav aate hi waadoN ki kaali paTTi
logoN ki aaNKhoN par baaNdh dete hai.n
ees taraH bharosa jeet ke logoN kaa
hum apni Kursi ko bachaa lete hai.n
hum to bas voTe ke liye pehle noTe Khilaate hai.n
fir aaraam se Kursi pe baiTh ke
logoN ki jeb Khaali karwaate hai.n
kaam karte hai.n gaNde par hum baateN karte hai.n seedhee
ek Kursi ke liye hum Khel Khelte hai.n logoN se
jise kehte hai.n
"Raajneeti"


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Dhaval ji,

Namaskaar,,,,,,,behtareen soch.....aur behad hi sanjida mudda hai ye.....jiske liye kuch b kaho kam hi padega.......Aapki koshish ke liye dil se daad qubool kijiyega..... yun hi likhte rahiye,,,,,aur hume apne vichaaro se avgat karaate rahiye.....


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Dhaval,

Bade dino baad apko parha hai...vo bhi kavita...achha laga..waise kai baar apko samaaj ke alag-alag pehaluo.N pe likhte dekha hai...RAJNEETI bhi ek rang hai samaaj ka...jise shayad koi samajh hi nahi pata...sidhe shabdo me sacchaai kahi hai apne..lekin bechare RAJNETA bhi kya kare...jab Bharat ke log hi unke galat kaamo ko badhaava dete hain to vo to ye sab karenge hi...

Meri daad kabool kijiye....

yunhi likhte rahiyega..

Ijaazat chaahungi...

Grazie

Pooja
Pooja :

namaste!

aapki daad sar'aanKhoN par... koShiSh ko apnaa qeemtee waqt diyaa bahot hi KhuShii hu'i.. aage bhee saath dete rahe.n..

KhuSh rahe.n.... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

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मेरे प्यारे दोस्तों:

नमस्कार और आदाब!

महफ़िल में ऐक बार फिर से हाज़िर हूँ ऐक अलग से मुद्दे को लेकर, ऐक आज़ाद ख़याल की कोशिश.. "राजनीति" ..मैं और आप सभी ईस के बारे में थोड़ा बहुत कुछ जानते है .. हर चीज़ की अच्छी और बूरी दोनों बातें होती है..जब कोई अपने फायदे के लिए "राजनीति" करता है तब लोगों के साथ बड़ी ना-इंसाफी होती है... जिनका भरोसा जीत कर जो लोग नेता बनते है... मेरा मुद्दा भी यही है ऐक ऐसे नेता की सोच.. जो सिर्फ़ अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही "राजनीति" मे आया है.. उम्मीद करता हूँ आपको मेरी यह कोशिश पसंद आएँगी.. आपका प्यार और साथ मुझे ज़रूर मिलेँगा..!

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"राजनीति"
ना यहाँ कोइ मेरा पिता है
ना भाई, बहन, दोस्त ना रिश्तेदार कोई
यहाँ मैं अपने लिए ही जीता हू
अपने फ़ायदे के लिए ही कुछ करता हू
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ जीता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ मरता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे कौन यहाँ क्या करता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है कौन देश के लिए मरता है
क्यूंकी हम तो कुर्सी से चिपके हुए नेता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड्ता हे मुझे कौन यहाँ बिना छत,ठंड में
खुले आसमाँ के नीचे सोता है
क्या फ़र्क़ पड़ता है मुझे जब कोई बच्चा भूख से
अपनी माँ के सामने रोता-तडपता है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किसी मज़हब से
बस कुर्सी बचाने को हम लोगों को मिलाते भी है
बाद में जब चाहे आपस मे सब को लडाते भी है
ना मुझे फ़र्क़ पड्ता है किस गाँव में बिजली या पानी नही
हम जाते ही नही वहाँ..
जहां पैसो की होती बरसाते नही
जीतने के लिए हम झुठे वादे भी करते है
वरना आम आदमी बिना वादों के
कहाँ हमारी बातों मे आते है
चुनाव आते ही वादों की काली पट्टी
लोगों की आँखों पर बाँध देते है
ईस तरहा भरोसा जीत के लोगों का
हम अपनी कुर्सी को बचा लेते है
हम तो बस वोट के लिए पहले नोट खिलाते है
फिर आराम से कुर्सी पे बैठ के
लोगों की जेब खाली करवाते है
काम करते हे गंदे पर हम बातें करते है सीधी
एक कुर्सी के लिए हम खेल खेलते हैं लोगों से
जिसे कहते है
"राजनीति"



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

namaskaar aur Aadaab!

mehfil meiN aik baar fir se haaZir huuN aik alag se mudde ko lekar, aik aazaad Khayaal ki koShiSh.. "Raajneeti" ..maiN aur aap sabhee ees ke baare meN thoDaa bahot kuch jaante hai.n .. har chiz ki achhi aur booree donoN baateN hotee haii.. jab ko'ii apne faa'iide ke liye "Raajneeti" kartaa hai tab logoN ke saath baRii naa-iNsaafii hotee haii ,, jiNkaa bharosaa jeet kar jo log Netaa bante hai.n.. meraa mudda bhee yahee hai aik aise netaa ki soch 1 jo sirf apne faa'iide ke liye hi "Raajneetii" meiN aaya haii.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii yeh koShiSh pasaNd aayeNgii.. aapkaa pyaar aur saath mujhe zaruur milengaa..!

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"Raajneeti"
naa yahaaN koii meraa pitaa haii
naa bhaai, behan, dost naa riShtedaar ko'ii
yahaaN maiN apne liye hi jeetaa huuN
apne faa'iide ke liye hi kuch kartaa huuN
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kauN yahaaN jeetaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hau kauN yahaaN martaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN yahaaN kyaa kartaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kauN deSh ke liye martaa haii
kyuuNki hum tou Kursi se chipkaa hue netaa hai.n
kyaa farq paDtaa haii mujhe kauN yahaaN binaa Chhat,ThaND meiN
Khule aasmaa.N ke niche sotaa haii
kyaa farq padtaa hai mujhe jab ko'ii bachchaa bhooKh se
apni maa,N ke saamne rotaa-taDaptaa haii
naa mujhe farq paDtaa haii kisii mazhab se
bas Kursi bachaane ko hum logoN ko milaate bhee haii
baad meN jab chaahe aapas me sab ko laDaate bhee hai
naa mujhe farq paDtaa hai kis gaaNv meN bijli yaa paani nahiiN
hum jaate hi nahiiN wahaaN..
jahaaN paiso ki hotee barsaate nahiiN
jeetne ke liye hum JhuuThe waade bhee karte hai.n
warnaa aam aadami binaa waadoN ke
kahaaN hamaari baatoN me aate hai.n
chunaav aate hi waadoN ki kaali paTTi
logoN ki aaNKhoN par baaNdh dete hai.n
ees taraH bharosa jeet ke logoN kaa
hum apni Kursi ko bachaa lete hai.n
hum to bas voTe ke liye pehle noTe Khilaate hai.n
fir aaraam se Kursi pe baiTh ke
logoN ki jeb Khaali karwaate hai.n
kaam karte hai.n gaNde par hum baateN karte hai.n seedhee
ek Kursi ke liye hum Khel Khelte hai.n logoN se
jise kehte hai.n
"Raajneeti"


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namaste dhaval saheb,
aapka ye qalaam bahut pehle ka likha hai, jaane kaise nazar nahi padi thi ab tak....aapne bahut achha mud'da uthaaya hai...mujhe padh kar achha laga...yuN hi aise qalaam ke saath aate raheN mehfil meiN....
i's qalaam ke liye meri dili daad qubuul kijiyega...

duaoN ke saath ijaazat...
aapka dost,
vikram....


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Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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Dhaval ji, bahut accha subject uthaya h aapne..
accha laga padh ke..
daad kubul keejiye........
Shipra jee:

namaste!

aapki daad sar'aaNKho.n par .. saath dte rahe.n aage bhee!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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mere chottu.....muje maloom hai tuje mere reply ka intzaar bahut dino se tha, par main bahut busy thi reply nahi kar paaye, par maine teri es poetry ko kum se kum 25-30 baar pada hai, muje behad accha lagta hai jab main tuje har baar kisi naye topic par likhtey hue dekhti hoon aur us se bhi accha tab lagta hai jab tu us topic mein doob hi jata hai !
chottu dua karti hoon ki bahgwaan teri kalam mein aur nikhaar deN.

teri poetry ki shuru ki chand lines padkar ek joke yaad aa gaya, yahan share kar rahi hoon.


neta ka beta apne baap se kahta hai ki, maiN bhi neta ban.na chahta hoon aap muje neta ban.ne ke kuch sabak seekha dijiye, neta kahta theek hai.
Neta: beta aisa kar chatt par ja aur neeche jump kar.
Beta: papa mere fracture ho jayega main mar jauNga...
Neta: beta main hoon na, jab tu jump karega main tuje girne se phele hi pakad loonga.
Beta: theek hai, main jump karta hoon aap muje sambhaal lena.
Neta: theek hai beta.
Beta chatt par jata hai aur neeche jump karta hai, par baap ne usko pakda nahi aage badkar, neeche girne se uske fracture ho jata hai,
Beta gusse meiN kahta hai ki "aap kah rahe thy maiN tuje sambhaal loonga, phir aapne pakda kyuN nahi muje"
Neta: raajneeti ka phela sabak yehi hai ki "APNE BAAP PAR BHI YAKEEN NA KARO"



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Pranaam!

aapka saath paa kar hameShaa sukooN miltaa hai ! saath dete rahe.n!

KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

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main sirf itana kahuga ki aaj koi bhi sach sun'na pasNd nahi karta hai
lekin aap ne kosish ki ye sach samne laane ki, main sdc ke sabhi dostoN se gujarish karuga ki wo bhi aesa sach samane layeN
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namaste!

bahot bahot dhanyawaad saath dete ke liye.. yuuNhi saath dete rahe.n aage bhee!

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Dhaval Bhai Adaab

Bhai aapke ahsaas ki kadar karta hun...... aur aapne jo bayan kiya shayad sahin bayan kiya....... per yeh bahes ka bekaar hissa hai jis per kuch kah ker bhi koi fayda nahi.... kuch sochker bhi kuch kaam ka nahi...... humare desh ki rajneeti ka aaj aisa haal hai shayad hi duniyaa ke kisi desh ki rajneeti aisi hogi..... Aur na ho.......

Khair aapki kalam bahut khoob kah gayi kayin baaten agar koi aisi fitrat wala neta padh le to yakeenan uspar kuch to asar kar hi jayengi...

Likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye,
Khuda Hafez........
sameer bhaa'ii:

namaste!

aapne saath diyaa baRii KhuShii hu'ii... koShiSh ko samjhne ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h.. saath dete rahe.n aage bhee!

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bahut achchi koshish... lafz kaafi hadd tak asardaar hai... is mudde ko uthane ke liye dil se daad..... khush rahiye...
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namaste!

merii koShiSh ko apnaa qeemtee waQt dene ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaa'h.. saath dete rahe.n aage bhee !

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rajneeti...........bada gambheer mudda chuna hai aapne, syaar ki khaal ,lomdi ki chalaki aur ullu ki soch lekar aage badhte hain rajneta........kaash ye log seedhe ho sakte!........bhut achha paryaas, Golden dad kabool keejie
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saajid bhaa'ii:

namaste!

aapki daad sar'aaNkho.n par.. saath dete rahe.n aage bhee!

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AAdab dhaval ji,
kaise hai aap?



ji shukriya haME yaad rakhne ke liye.
ji hum or hamare HASSAN dono hi thik hai,

wah janab aap to pehle se bhi zyada kamal kar gaye,,kaash aapki yeh nazam raajniti me chhap jaaye..shayad unhe kuch to samajh aayegi.
dhaval ji isi tarah apne kalam ke jaadu bikherte rahiye,kamiyaabi apne aap chali aayegi.

Allah aapko tarakki de.AAMIN

KHUSH RAHIYE.
ALAH HAFIZ
hassoni jee:

namaste!

main ek dam Theek huuN.. aap yahaaN aayeN merii koShiSh ko apnaa Qeemtee waQt diyaa main aapka aabhaari huuN.. aage bhee yuuNhi paRhte rahe.n.. ShuKriyaah..!

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rajneeti ek essa vishaya hai jis par jitna likha jaye utna kam hai aur yeh mera pasandida vishaya bhi hai apne jo bhi likha hai bahut hi accha likha hai meri ek prarthana hai apse ke is vishaya par kuch aur bhi likhiye...........mujhe intezar rahega

apka.
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mai.n zaruur ees vishay par aage liKhane ki koShiSh karuu.ngaa..! aapne saath diyaa mujhe KhuShii hu'ii... paRhte rahe.n aage bhee.. ShuKriyaa'h

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dhaval bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob.............


Aapka Apna
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Namaskaar,,,,,,,behtareen soch.....aur behad hi sanjida mudda hai ye.....jiske liye kuch b kaho kam hi padega.......Aapki koshish ke liye dil se daad qubool kijiyega..... yun hi likhte rahiye,,,,,aur hume apne vichaaro se avgat karaate rahiye.....


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namaste dhaval saheb,
aapka ye qalaam bahut pehle ka likha hai, jaane kaise nazar nahi padi thi ab tak....aapne bahut achha mud'da uthaaya hai...mujhe padh kar achha laga...yuN hi aise qalaam ke saath aate raheN mehfil meiN....
i's qalaam ke liye meri dili daad qubuul kijiyega...

duaoN ke saath ijaazat...
aapka dost,
vikram....

vikram bhaa'ii:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

aapki daad dil se qabul hay.. saath nibhaate rahe.n aage bhee!

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rajneeti...........bada gambheer mudda chuna hai aapne, syaar ki khaal ,lomdi ki chalaki aur ullu ki soch lekar aage badhte hain rajneta........kaash ye log seedhe ho sakte!........bhut achha paryaas, Golden dad kabool keejie
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saath dene ke liye bahot bahot ShuKriyaah.. aapne samjhaa bahot KhuShii huii.. daad dil se qabUl..!

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