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हमें ना मिली जाने किधर गयी होगी - 14th November 2014, 08:30 PM

हमें ना मिली जाने किधर गयी होगी
ज़िंदगी कहीं दूर से गुज़र गयी होगी

हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी

चाँद तो निकला चांदनी नहीं आई
वो तेरी छत पर उतर गयी होगी

लो निकल चली आज आखरी धडकन
की दिल-ए-वीरां में ये डर गयी होगी

है होने लगा "मायूस" जश्न जहाँ में
आपके मरने की खबर गयी होगी


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15th November 2014, 11:39 AM

हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी

Waah waah...bahut achcha likha hai...mayoos ji.



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16th November 2014, 08:54 PM

bahut achchha likha hai aapne Mayoos ji...


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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17th November 2014, 06:00 AM

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हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी

Waah waah...bahut achcha likha hai...mayoos ji.
Thanks Madhu, as always......................


ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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17th November 2014, 06:05 AM

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bahut achchha likha hai aapne Mayoos ji...


Thanks Chaand, much appreciated..................


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17th November 2014, 06:37 PM

Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

dil se likha gayaa kalaam hai mere bhai..... tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad pesh hain aapko.....

likhte rahiye aur apne jazbaat hamaare saath baanTte rahiye

Shukriyaa

Shaad.....


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17th November 2014, 09:14 PM

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ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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17th November 2014, 09:42 PM

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Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

dil se likha gayaa kalaam hai mere bhai..... tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad pesh hain aapko.....

likhte rahiye aur apne jazbaat hamaare saath baanTte rahiye

Shukriyaa

Shaad.....


Thanks Shaad, greatly appreciated...............


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