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14th November 2014, 08:30 PM
हमें ना मिली जाने किधर गयी होगी
ज़िंदगी कहीं दूर से गुज़र गयी होगी
हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी
चाँद तो निकला चांदनी नहीं आई
वो तेरी छत पर उतर गयी होगी
लो निकल चली आज आखरी धडकन
की दिल-ए-वीरां में ये डर गयी होगी
है होने लगा "मायूस" जश्न जहाँ में
आपके मरने की खबर गयी होगी
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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15th November 2014, 11:39 AM
हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी
Waah waah...bahut achcha likha hai...mayoos ji.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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16th November 2014, 08:54 PM
bahut achchha likha hai aapne Mayoos ji...
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
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17th November 2014, 06:00 AM
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Madhu 14
हम ही न चले ये हमारा है कसूर
मंज़िल तक तो राहगुज़र गयी होगी
Waah waah...bahut achcha likha hai...mayoos ji.
Thanks Madhu, as always......................
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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17th November 2014, 06:05 AM
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bahut achchha likha hai aapne Mayoos ji...
Thanks Chaand, much appreciated..................
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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17th November 2014, 06:37 PM
Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
dil se likha gayaa kalaam hai mere bhai..... tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad pesh hain aapko.....
likhte rahiye aur apne jazbaat hamaare saath baanTte rahiye
Shukriyaa
Shaad.....
Shaad...
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17th November 2014, 09:14 PM
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bahut achchha likha hai aapne Mayoos ji...
Thanks Chaand.......................
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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17th November 2014, 09:42 PM
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Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh
dil se likha gayaa kalaam hai mere bhai..... tahe dil se daad aur mubaarakbad pesh hain aapko.....
likhte rahiye aur apne jazbaat hamaare saath baanTte rahiye
Shukriyaa
Shaad.....
Thanks Shaad, greatly appreciated...............
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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