Jis Din Se Huye Tum Juda Humse

[rajinderseep]

SDC par sab dostoN ko slaam,
Dosto meri yeh gazal gtm par teesray number pe rehi or mujhe is k liay bahut khushi hai or maiN un sab dostoN ka shukar guzar hooN jinhoN ne mujhay vote dala or mera hosla vadaya.usi gazal ko forum par is liay daal raha hooN k sab log isay padh sakay or is ka alag se recard rehay.maiN bahut bahut shukar guzar hooN ZAINY ji ka jinho ne meri is kaam mein bharpoor madad ki.


"JIS DIN SE HUYE TUM JUDA HUMSE"

Jis din se huye tum judaa humse
usi din se rootha hai khudaa humse.

kitni mannatein ki, per asarheen rahi
ab tou hoti bhi nahi dua humse.

halay-dil kar diya bayaan maine apna
apni kahani ab na tu chupa humse.

teri chahat mein chhoda tha saara jahaaN
ab apni chahat tou na churaa humse.

teri justaju teri arzoo hi ki maine sadaa
na maloom kyon rehta hai tuu judaa humse

rab hi hota hai aakhri saharaa sabka
uska bhi pataa na chala kab rootha humse.

yun tou chhod di hai saari dunia maine
ik tera nasha hi na chuutaa humse.

rajinderseep

[kabir_shayer]

mujheyeghazal bohot pasandaayi
agar aap chahein tomujheapni aurghazlein peshkar saktehain
main bohot khushi mehsoos karoonga
please
kabir_shayer@yahoo.com
kabir.shayer@gmail.com

[rajinderseep]

kabir_shayer ji thank you very much for briefly reading my gazal and then appreciating it.
aur aap ne jo aur gazleiN pesh karne ki baat kahi hai,woh mein kya aap k e-mail par post karuN ja yehiN sdc par.is k liay ya tou aap mujhay pm kardeiN ya fir e-mail kareiN.e-mail id....rajinderseep@yahoo.com