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bahot khoob janaab......................... likhte rahiye
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ishq ek fasaanaa hai barbaadiyoN ka sanam,
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Shaad......
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.US SHAKS SA FAQAT ITNA TALUK HAI FARAZ
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.US SHAKS SA FAQAT ITNA TALUK HAI FARAZ
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waaah kyaa kahne ....................
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तुझसे ज्यादा तेरी याद को है मुझसे हमदर्दी,
देखती है मुझे तन्हा तो बिन पूछे चली आती है...(nm)
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तुझसे ज्यादा तेरी याद को है मुझसे हमदर्दी,
देखती है मुझे तन्हा तो बिन पूछे चली आती है...(nm)
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Waaahh bahot khoob..................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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28th March 2017, 04:41 PM
बस तुम कोई उम्मीद दिला दो मुलाकात की..
फिर इन्तजार तो हम सारी उमर कर लेंगें....(nm)
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बस तुम कोई उम्मीद दिला दो मुलाकात की..
फिर इन्तजार तो हम सारी उमर कर लेंगें....(nm)
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Waah!!!
Bahot khoob ishq hi...Radhe radhe
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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ख्वाहिश तो न थी किसी से दिल लगाने की…
पर किस्मत में दर्द लिखा था…तो मोहब्बत कैसे न होती...
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. Tumhare sath ko tarse to ham bahot tarse
Jo abki mil bhi Gaye tum to baat kya hogi..
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. Tumhare sath ko tarse to ham bahot tarse
Jo abki mil bhi Gaye tum to baat kya hogi..
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waaaahhhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat hai..........................
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waaaahhhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat hai..........................
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Shukriya sahab................................
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jo gham tuune diye hain bhulaaun bhi to kaise
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Kya baat hai........Bahot khoob !!!!!!!!!
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Kya baat hai........Bahot khoob !!!!!!!!!
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28th April 2017, 06:04 PM
waqt-e-rukhsat woh haath pakad nazar jukaye baithe rhe,
dheere dheere meri aankhoN se behta raha kaajal.....!!
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waqt-e-rukhsat woh haath pakad nazar jukaye baithe rhe,
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Waah Di bahot khoob............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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.Khara hota hai sona bhi agar kuch der tap jaye
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.Khara hota hai sona bhi agar kuch der tap jaye
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kyaa khoob khayaal hai waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh................................ ......
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kyaa khoob khayaal hai waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh................................ ......
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Bahot shukriya Shaad sahab.............
Aapka koi Sher ghazal nazm padhe kafi vaqt ho Gaya...
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18th July 2017, 07:29 AM
Jo mera dil tod bhi doge tou awaz nahi hogi
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meri ooper wali reply baraber nahi hai. Isko istarah hona chahiye:
Jo mera dil tod bhi doge to awaz nahi hogi
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Thahro to aye dildaar abhi raat bahot hai
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jo ho sake ruk jaao zaraa der sitamgar
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Thahro to aye dildaar abhi raat bahot hai
rukte nahii hain ashq ke barsaat bahot hai .
jo ho sake ruk jaao zaraa der sitamgar
kahne ko abhii dil me mere baat bahot hai.
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Waah waah!!!! kya baat shaad sahab..
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shukriyaa janaabe aali..............................
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Aaye haye.......kya kahne........
Waah!!
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. Samjh kar khat jise tumne rakha hai taaq par jaana
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wah wah wah wah waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............................. .
bas aur kuch mat pooch bas waaah hi waahhhhhhhhh kamaal sher huaa madhu ji din bana diyaa aapne......
superb...........................
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wah wah wah wah waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............................. .
bas aur kuch mat pooch bas waaah hi waahhhhhhhhh kamaal sher huaa madhu ji din bana diyaa aapne......
superb...........................
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Waah!!!! Apki daad par dil baagh baagh ho gaya janaab dher sari duayein...
Bahot shukriya
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maine kahaa ke , ISHQ pareshaan kiye hai,
usne kahaa kambakht ko mar jaanaa chaahiye...!!!
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maine kahaa ke , ISHQ pareshaan kiye hai,
usne kahaa kambakht ko mar jaanaa chaahiye...!!!
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usne theek hee kaha....he he...
bahot achcha sher....likhte rahein..
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maine kahaa ke , ISHQ pareshaan kiye hai,
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zindabaad zindabaad mazaa aa gaya bhai
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zindabaad zindabaad mazaa aa gaya bhai
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aapko yahan dekh kar bahot khushi ho rahi hai bhai main bata nahii sakta .....
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usne theek hee kaha....he he...
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acchaa betaa ... theek hai ... yahi sahiii ...
bahrhaal bahot shukriyaa apka Madhu ji sher ko passnd kiya aapne bahot khushi hui...
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5th September 2017, 03:12 AM
Shayaron ki duniya me humne bhi naam likh diye
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उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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bahot khob janaab.................................
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Sukriya Shaad saheb...
Aap ko pasand aya wohi mere liye badi baat hai....
उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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