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7th August 2005, 04:38 PM
Doston..
Ek arse se mehfil tham gayi thi... Shukr guzaar hoon Aman bhai ka jinhone meri na majudgi mein is mehfil ki shama ko salamat rakha..aur garima ka jinhone ek arse baad meri nazar yaha wapas laa khadi kar di Baat un dino ki hai jab aab-o-hawa kuch aur thi zindigiyaan aur thi aur shariyaan aur thi Jee haan...mehfil puraani hi sahi par waqt ka taqazaa kisi cheez ko rukne ki ijaazat nahi deta is tarah mehfil ki khoobsurti ko barqaraar rakhte hue aage badhte hai aitebaar se aage badhte hai par is baar hum naye lafz ki Intakhaabi ka haq yaha ke sabse Baa-qaaedah Sukhanwar ko dete hai <b> AMAN BHAI <b> guzaarish hai ki is mehfil ko aab ek sunheraa lafz de.. intezaar mein -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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8th August 2005, 11:18 AM
Mere veer Anu..........
shukriya bhai........lekin itni izzat.....mann bhar aaya ye pyar dekh kar....... Mehfil ko aage badate hain....naye lafz se ....jo hai ULFAT Jald hi is lafz ko le kar likhoonga........aur aap sabse bhi gujarish hai ki is mehfil ko naye lafz se aage badayin.... aapka apna......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th August 2005, 02:39 PM
eitbaar par hi to jeete marate hai log
tootte hai is kadar ki aahe bharate hai log tika hai yeh jahaan eitbaar par yaaron warna to toote waade roz karte hai log Wah ...Meri Sweet Pagal Sis.... sher bahut hi badiya likha hai......dahar ki haqeeqat...... aage bhi saath deti rehna.......... tumhara bhai......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th August 2005, 02:40 PM
Mere Aziz doston....aur pyare Veer Anu.............
Shukriya....ye sab tumhara pyar hai.....varna main is kaabil kahan.... apne Veer ki mehfil ko ULFAT lafz se aage badaane ki koshish ki hai..... lijiye pesh-e-nazar hai.......... Bezaar aakhon se lahoo tapka kyun hai…… Bejaan sa ye dil aaj dhadhka kyun hai….. Zafa ke sholon mein tapak uth.Ti hai….. Mere ghar hi ye aatish-kadaa kyun hai…… Kya Judaai aur khudaai kya hoti hai…… Mujhe hi ye haasil-e-mazaa kyun hai….. Khoon karte hain bechain armaaon ka…. Qatl-e-Ulfat ka nazaara, saja kyun hai…. Teri duniya mein aur log bhi the khuda….. ^AMAN^ ko hi ye rog laga kyun hai….. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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18th August 2005, 05:47 PM
Kya Judaai aur khudaai kya hoti hai……
Mujhe hi ye haasil-e-mazaa kyun hai….. Khoon karte hain bechain armaaon ka…. Qatl-e-Ulfat ka nazaara, saja kyun hai…. Pur asar aman veer ji...mehfil ki bulandi ke aap us maqaam tak hai jaha par yeh nacheez nazar andosh ho chuka hai..isi tarah aap aapne dil ki baat buland karte rahiYeGaa jald hi aapki is ulfat ka jawaab lekar haazir hungaa... -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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20th October 2005, 08:53 AM
Aman bhai..aur baaki mere azeezo..Mehfil ko aage badhaate hue ulfat par yeh kuch sher aapki nazar..
Dilnasheen kya kahen kaha ulfat nazar aayi Tu aaya nahiN bas ek din teri khabhar aaYi HuMNe socha ek umr dillagi mein kya paaya hai phir bhi kismat thi tera dil mujhpar aaya hai Woh jo guzar gaya usme bhi tera chehra tha Band nazron mein meri jaan tu nazar aaYi Tu aaya nahiN bas ek din teri khabhar aaYi Chod di humne jab duniya to tu nazar aaYi Agli nazm ki intezaar mein -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st October 2005, 08:13 PM
ulfat pe likha hai Anu...arz hai...
yeh kehkahe, ye shaad lehja mera haal nahin *raanaaiion mein aariz ki dil ka wabaal nahin beauty tujhko yeh dil hatheli pe rakh de aaye thhe tere agosh ke *taqaddus mein ik umr jii aaye thhe purity rahi thee kab teri ulfat mein ikhtiyaari meri tujhpe hi ruuh numaayaan na ho saki meri raahaton ke rangeen aaiwaan sajaata hai barbaad dil khud ko kuch yoon behlaata hai mera zabt mere gunahon ki saza hai jaanaa har saans pe tere liye dast-e-dua hai jaanaa ab mere paas *azeeyaton ke siwa kuch bhi nahin seene mein dabi aahon ke siwa kuch bhi nahin pain teri yaadon ke chand lamhon ke siwa kuch bhi nahin lab-e-shirrin ki bisri baaton ke siwa kuch bhi nahin gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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9th April 2015, 09:02 AM
bahot khoob silsilaa merii nazar me aayaa hai Anu bhai.........
merii koshsih rahegii aur baaki members se guzaarish rahegii ke ise fir se active kiyaa jaae...... aap sab apni ghazals is par posr kijiye aur 'ębaarat-e-aSHqiya' ko fir se ek baar wo mukaam dijiye jiskii wo haqdaar hai..... Shaad...... |
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Aapka bataur-e-khaas shukriyaa adaa karna chahunga ki aapne wapas is dehleez par lakar khada kiya hai mujhe. Chaliye ek nayi shuruaat karte hai is mehfil mein, ek naye lafz se shuruaat karte hai. Jo log yahan pehli baar shirkat kar rahe hai, iltejaa hai ki pehli post kar likhe rules ko ek baar padh le. Aasaan se lafz se shuruaat kar raha hoon aur jaise jaise bazm mein raunak badhegi lafz ka wazn bhi badhtaa jaayega Naya lafz hai 'jaan' Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th April 2015, 12:39 PM
Anu bhai chaliye jab aaghaaz ho hi chukaa hai to main pesh karnaa chahungaaa wo kalaam jisko maine JAAN nahii JAANA ko devote kiyaa thaa..... hope you all will like that....
yoo.n to koii na thaa meraa tere pahle jaanaa, phir huaa yoo.n ke mere pyaar ko tuune maanaa. jaantaa hoo.n nahii mumkin hai tere bin jeenaa, ye bhii maaloom hai aasaa.n nahii tujh ko paanaa. maine ab tak jalaa rakkhaa hai charaag-e-ulfat, bhoole bhaTke sahii ek baar tum zaroor aanaa. khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa, khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa. khwaahishe.n aur bhii hai.n shaad tere dil me magar, kyun faqat kar rahaa hai dil teraa Jaanaa jaanaa. Shaad..... |
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khat unhe de ke aye qaasid suno itnaa karnaa, khaak us shahr kii do muTThiyaa.n liye aanaa. Umeed hai aur log bhi is bazm ko aage muqarrar karenge. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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aapki inaayat hai janaab jo aapne hame is qaabil samjhaa ke ghazal aapko pasand aa sakii.... main guzaaris karungaa baaki ke members se ke is silsile ko aaage badhaane me apna keemtii waqt den....... agar poora kalaam na likh saken to chand sher hi likh den... magar ye silsilaa chalne den...... shukriyaa Shaad..... |
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12th April 2015, 09:05 AM
Jaan lafz ko lekar likhne ko koshish ki hai, aap sab ki nazar
jaan nikal gayi jo meri jaan chale gaye qaid dil ke mere armaan chale gaye qusoor tha mera kabhi zikr to kiya hota khamoshi se bandh kar samaan chale gaye subah subah jaha hota tha hasna rona kar ke soona mera makaan chale gaye 'mast' rehte hai gumnaam in deewaron mein maikashi mein hote yun badnaam chale gaye जान निकल गयी जो मेरी जान चले गए क़ैद दिल के मेरे अरमान चले गए क़ुसूर था मेरा कभी ज़िक्र तो किया होता ख़ामोशी से बांध कर सामान चले गए सुबह सुबह जहा होता था हसना रोना कर के सूना मेरा मकान चले गए 'मस्त' रहते है गुमनाम इन दीवारों में मैकशी में होते यूँ बदनाम चले गए Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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12th April 2015, 09:16 AM
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waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat hai merii jaan, aapne to nikaal dii merii jaan.....   bahot ummdah pesh kash hai bhai.... daad pesh hain aapko... likhte rahen... Shaad....... |
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12th April 2015, 06:15 PM
Adaab shaad jii..,anu jii...
Bahut hee achcha silsila hai ye aur sach kahoon aise kisi silsile ki khwahish bhi thi dil me..jjisse likhne ka ek naya bahana mile..aap dono ne bahut hee achche kalaam pesh kiye...koshish karoongi ki mai bhi apni koi koshish aap sab se share kar paun..... filhaal to aap logon ne interwiev me busy kar rakha hai mujhe..... ..jaldi hee shirkat karoongi... Shukriya... madhu.. |
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13th April 2015, 03:01 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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13th April 2015, 05:13 PM
wow........... a big woowwwwwwwwwwwwww...
kia hii zaberdast qism ka "silsila" hy Mast bhai .... muaafi ka talab-gaar hooN ky is haseen safhe ko aaj tak na dekh paya ... chaleN lafz "jaaN" per meri aik mukhtasar si nazm... :- mohabbat ki daastaaN zarra sun toH meri jaaN ishQ karna nahi asaaN kabhi karta hai hairaaN to kabhi karta pashemaaN rakhta hai ik alag shaaN nahi is ka koi baaghbaaN agar ho jaye kisi ko yahaaN nazroN se haal hota bayaaN lagta to hai be-zubaaN per leta hai kayi imtehaaN hewaaN ko banaye insaaN yeHi hai ishQ ki shaaN gar kar le koi iss jahaN saath rehta hai daaemaaN teri doori se dil hai pareshaaN jaaN! maiN yahaN tu kahaN? daaemaaN : forever tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th April 2015, 10:25 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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14th April 2015, 11:31 AM
Lafz jaan par ek koshish. ...umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayegi.....
Ab maan bhi lo jana tum jaan hamare ho. dil se kahiin na jana mehmaan hamare ho. Tum Rang e muhabbat me dooba sa ek tarana Sun kar labon pe chhaye muskaan hamare ho. Veeraan se raahon par mahki si saba ho tum. Tum Khilte se phoolon ka baagan hamare ho. Haathon ki hina ho tum kajal bhi ho ankhon ka... Har shokh adaa ka tum samaan hamaare ho. Rahbar ho madhu ke tum anjaan se safar me... Bas saath tera chaahun armaan hamare ho. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain... ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai... bahot acchii tarah se nibhaa rahe hain ye silsilaa sab... mujhe bahot khushi ho rahii hai ke sab actively participate kar rahe hain..... Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye.... Shaad.... |
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Allaah ye ek din ke lye mian site se door kyaa huaaaa yahaan to doston ne ghazal ki yoon mahfil jamaaii hai ke bas ham iske ras me doobe hue hain... ek se ek kalam hue hain aap dono ki taraf se hassan bhia ur madhu saahibaa..... beshaq aapne jaan me rang bhar ke jaan me jaan daal dii hai... bahot acchii tarah se nibhaa rahe hain ye silsilaa sab... mujhe bahot khushi ho rahii hai ke sab actively participate kar rahe hain..... Salaamat rahiye .... khush rahiye.... Shaad.... |
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14th April 2015, 11:56 AM
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saath dete rahiye ga... salamat rahen .. Quote:
kia baat hy Madhu jee... ishQ ky rung mein rangi yeh ranga rung tehreer bohat hii lutf de gayi.... aise hii meHfil roshan karte rahiye .. aur humain mehzooz aur mehzoor karte rahiye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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bohat hii mazeedaar silsilay hy.... issy aur aagy le jaana chaiye! tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th April 2015, 12:39 PM
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bas is koshish me hame aap sab doston ki zaruurat padegii... ummeed hai aap sab saath dete rahenge...... Shukriyaa Shaad..... |
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th April 2015, 01:51 PM
iss thread ko sticky hona chaiye ....
kia khayaal hy .. Mast bhai .. Shaad bhai .. ?? tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th April 2015, 02:32 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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14th April 2015, 02:36 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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14th April 2015, 04:10 PM
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Bahut khoob ehsaason ko aapne ghazal ka roop diya ki aaina bhi sharmaa jaaye. Yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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14th April 2015, 04:11 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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15th April 2015, 09:09 AM
Mast saahab aadaab.... bajaa farmaaya aapne ke ye site nahii ek adab hai ek aadaat hai ek lahzaa hai.......
beshaq agar ek din bhi door jaaen to khaaamiyaazaa bhugatnaa hi padtaa hai, ke doston ke aise pyaare pyaare kalaam se nazar chook jaatii hai..... Ek sawaal thaa aapse.... kyaa abhi lafz JAAN par hi ghazal kahnii hai.....?? aglaa lafz kitne dino me pesh kiyaa jaawegaa...... aapke jawaab ka muntazir.... Khaaksaar.. |
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15th April 2015, 10:25 AM
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amooman to hidaayat 5-7 mukarrar ghazalon ki hai aur mashallah 4 nayaab nazraane to aap logon ne padh liye hai. Main ise 1 din ka aur waqt deta hoon aur aapse iltejaa hai ki kal naya alfaaz aap bhi adaa farmaayein is mehfil mein. Tab tak 1 aur ghazal/nazm ke intezaar mein. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th April 2015, 04:09 PM
Shaad bhai - mehfil naye ashaar ke intezaar mein aabshaar baha rahi hai, jaldi aayein aur is mehfil ko aage badhayeiN.
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th April 2015, 04:18 PM
Mast bhai .. shaad bhai to nahi aaye .. maiN aa gaya
 ...‘parStaar’ jaaN se haara ik saraapa-e-husn pe! zindagi meN na uss jesa koi shabaab dekha... saraapa-e-husn : totally beautiful shabaab : prime of life tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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17th April 2015, 09:03 AM
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waahhhhh hassan bhai............... kyaa khoob sher kahaa hai...... |
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17th April 2015, 10:02 AM
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agla lafz dy bhi dejiye .. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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17th April 2015, 11:40 AM
Chaliye bhai yahi sahii....................
hamaari taraf se is baar ka nayaa word hai..... deedaar. |
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17th April 2015, 12:02 PM
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poori ghazal mein to yeh lafz shayed aik hi baar aaye ... ab muamm'a yeh hy ky poori ghazal share karni hy ya sirf couplet ? tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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