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3rd August 2013, 09:58 AM
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Bhoot pyaari lines h bhaiya.. dil ko chu gayi..
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3rd August 2013, 11:02 AM
Dil Ko Tumhari Yad K Aansoo Aziz The
Duniya K Koi Gham Samone Nahi Diya Puneet..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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3rd August 2013, 05:46 PM
Meraa aaj ka sher...
Kyaa jaane kyaa yaad rahaa kyaa bhool gayaa,
Kalam uThee par Naam Tumhaaraa bhool gayaa..
Shaad....
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4th August 2013, 08:55 AM
ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN,
vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai...
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4th August 2013, 06:14 PM
ye dil bura hi sahi sare bazaar ise yu badnaam to na kar,
Ke kuch din tu bhi raha hai isme mehmaan banke not mine..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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5th August 2013, 09:01 AM
Guroor Baichay Gein Na Iltajaa Khareedain Ge
Na Sar Jhukaayein Gein Na Sar Jhuka Khareedain Ge
--Qais(poora nama pata na hone ke liye maafi chaahunga...)
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5th August 2013, 12:43 PM
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ye dil bura hi sahi sare bazaar ise yu badnaam to na kar,
Ke kuch din tu bhi raha hai isme mehmaan banke not mine..
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Wah waahhhh.......... subhaan Allaah mere bhai.
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5th August 2013, 12:55 PM
Aaj kaa sher..
Wo to acchaa hai ke jhumkaa teraaa bejaan hai sanam,
Choom letaa tere gaalon ko, gar isme jaan hotee........!!
Shaad....
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6th August 2013, 09:54 AM
Apne haq me mughey maang le,
Umr bhar chahunga maiN tughey...
--Taish
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6th August 2013, 11:41 AM
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Apne haq me mughey maang le,
Umr bhar chahunga maiN tughey...
--Taish
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mughey aur Tughey bahot confuse kar rahe hain yaar .......... sher ka lutf nahi mil paa raha hai.
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6th August 2013, 12:34 PM
Aaj kaa sher.....
ye jo rehte hain mere dil mein Azaabon ki tarah,
Seena chalnee kiye dete haiN SharaaboN ki tarah...
Shaad.............
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6th August 2013, 05:21 PM
aazmaaya hai dostoN ko jab,
dushmanoN se mohabbat hui...
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6th August 2013, 06:22 PM
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Wah waahhhh.......... subhaan Allaah mere bhai.
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Aapka bhoot bhoot sukriya bhaiya..
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6th August 2013, 06:24 PM
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aazmaaya hai dostoN ko jab,
dushmanoN se mohabbat hui...
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bhoot kum lafzo m bhoot umda likh diya aapne bhaiya..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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6th August 2013, 06:31 PM
use shant samunndar ne duboyaa,
Jise tufaano ka bhoot andaaz tha..
Not mine
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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6th August 2013, 06:47 PM
Khuda Tere Naam Me Itni Rubayat Nahi..
Jitni Majnu Ke Liye.. Laila Ko Pukarne Me Thi..
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7th August 2013, 01:58 PM
Aaj ka sher...
Haal ab bhi jo mera Poochte ho,
Gham mujhe dekh kar nahi hotaa..???
Shaad...
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7th August 2013, 06:17 PM
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Aaj ka sher...
Haal ab bhi jo mera Poochte ho,
Gham mujhe dekh kar nahi hotaa..???
Shaad...
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Bhoot pyaari lines hai bhaiya.. maja aa gaya padh kar
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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7th August 2013, 06:22 PM
gujar to jayegi ye zindgi uske bina bhi lekin,
Dil aksar tadpa karega pyaar karne walo ko dekh kar..
Puneet..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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8th August 2013, 09:31 AM
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gujar to jayegi ye zindgi uske bina bhi lekin,
Dil aksar tadpa karega pyaar karne walo ko dekh kar..
Puneet..
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waah waaahhh kya baat hai puneet....... bahot khoob
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8th August 2013, 09:31 AM
Aaj kaa sher..
Abhi tak to koi aaya na milne tanhaai ke sivaa,
kisi ko kehte sunaa thaa, Eid ka din hai...........
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8th August 2013, 10:59 AM
baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai.. not mine..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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8th August 2013, 01:52 PM
Meri Aankhon Ko Soojhta Hee Nahi
Ya Muqaddar Mein Raasta Hee Nahi...
--Noshi Gilani
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8th August 2013, 11:39 PM
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baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai.. not mine..
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Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......
Shaad.....
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9th August 2013, 12:32 AM
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Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......
Shaad.....
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Haa bhaiya mehjabeeN hi hai.. wo sorry muje itni ache. Se urdu ke words nahi aate to.. isi karan mujse gazal Na Ban pati bhaiya.. choti moti maamuli shaayri to ban jaati hai but gazal.. aage se mai words ko or ache se dekh ke likhunga..
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9th August 2013, 12:40 AM
aap sabhi Dosto, bhaiyo or bheno ko meri taraf se EID ki bhoot bhoot mubarakbaad
Aaj ka sher..
Tamannna tere jism ki hoti to duniya se cheen leta mai,
Ishq teri rooh se h isliye khuda se maangte hain
Not mine..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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9th August 2013, 04:33 PM
muskuraa de kabhi vo yahi sochte,
jab bhi humse mile berukhi se mile...
--Taish
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10th August 2013, 11:01 AM
Aaj ka sher...
Mere Maulaa use tu door kar Fikr o khayaaloN se,
Wo sheereeN naam labb pe ho to Rozaa TooT jaata hai...
Shaad....
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11th August 2013, 09:54 AM
Jo aakhon ki tajoriyon main chupaya tha daulat-e-sakoon.....
Apni nigahee sharafat se loot kar le gaya sari.... Vikas...
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11th August 2013, 11:02 AM
jaha ke juba ka yki.N kiya "bhul gaye wo"..
par kal raat chand to phir niklega..
~@ :SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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11th August 2013, 12:10 PM
kabr pe aaye wo meri apne hamsafar ke sath,
kon kehta h"DAFNANE"k baad"JALAYA"nahi jata..
Not mine..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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11th August 2013, 02:31 PM
bahot acche acche sher post kiye hain aapne.................doston
Bahot Khuub......
Shaad.......
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12th August 2013, 09:16 AM
Aaj ka sher..
Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.
Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj
~Shaad~
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12th August 2013, 11:23 AM
aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti
~@ :SYLTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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12th August 2013, 11:26 AM
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Aaj ka sher..
Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.
Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj
~Shaad~
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dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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12th August 2013, 06:21 PM
Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai
Puneet..
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13th August 2013, 10:59 AM
chod ke aana hi to tha...
sajaya bhi use "jis dil maine kiraye pe tha"
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
~@ :SULTAAN
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13th August 2013, 04:17 PM
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Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai
Puneet..
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhh................................
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13th August 2013, 04:19 PM
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dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub
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behad shukriyaa aapka Sultaan bhai.....................
aapka ye sher hame accha lagaa..
aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti
likhte rahiye...........
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13th August 2013, 04:30 PM
Aaj ka sher...
phool aaye hain aise Gulshan mein,
tere Sehre ko jaise aaye haiN....
Shaad.....
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