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Thank you bhaiya.. meri puri kosish rehti hai ki achi se achi shayariya dhoond k laau or aapke samne pesh karu..
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14th August 2013, 10:48 AM
Aaj kal har shaks hume zindgi kaise jiye ye sikha jata hai,
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bite rat ke khayalo me subkhuch badl chuka tha..,
subah hui "or sub ek khawb hi to tha"
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14th August 2013, 09:11 PM
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Aaj kal har shaks hume zindgi kaise jiye ye sikha jata hai,
Unhe kon samjhaye
Ek khwab adhura h humara warna humse behtar jina kise aata hai.. Puneet..
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bite rat ke khayalo me subkhuch badl chuka tha..,
subah hui "or sub ek khawb hi to tha"
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waaahhh Accha likhaa hai Sultaan ji............................. likhte raheN,....
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14th August 2013, 09:38 PM
kaliyo.n ke ang ang me.n miThaa saa dard hai
biimaar nikahato.n ko zaraa gud_gudaayiye
[nikahat = fragrance]
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waaahhh Accha likhaa hai Sultaan ji............................. likhte raheN,....
Shaad............
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15th August 2013, 07:47 AM
milte fareb muskuraht.. kuch ko benaam kuch ka naam rakhunga..!!
gar raha salamt to.. "SULTAAN" tujhape kuch alfaz likhunga..!!
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15th August 2013, 10:42 AM
Ranjishe to hoti hai mohobbat mein magar,
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Aaj ka sher...
Tumhaare saath chalte hain hazaaroN qaafile waale,
Main apnaa jism haanthoN meiN liye, tanhaa BhaTaktaa hoon.....
shaad....
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koi bhi wakyat aaine layak nahi tha..!!
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16th August 2013, 09:49 PM
aap ko bhuul jaaye.n ham itane to bevafaa nahii.n
aap se kyaa gilaa kare.n aap se kuchh gilaa nahii.n
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zindgi yu hue basar tanha, kafilla saath magar safar tanha,
apne saaye se chonk jaate hai, umr guzari hai es kadar tanha...nm
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17th August 2013, 11:08 AM
Uthti nahi nigaah KISI or ki taraf,
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17th August 2013, 11:10 AM
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Aaj ka sher...
Tumhaare saath chalte hain hazaaroN qaafile waale,
Main apnaa jism haanthoN meiN liye, tanhaa BhaTaktaa hoon.....
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Bahut jayada pyaari lines likhi hai aapne bhaiya.. dil ko ander tak chu gayi.. kaha se laate h aap aise jajbat dil mein.. too good..
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koi bhi wakyat aaine layak nahi tha..!!
phir bhi har ek sawal chubhta raha haqiqt ban ban ke..!!
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Or khus bhi..
Taki aapke pasand ka likh ska
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karta raha tarif kabse.. anjane khata ho hi gai..
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Tere Payar ke siwa Kuch aur baki nahi is dil main ........
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mout kisi dusman ka chehara nahi hoti..
kisi ki paband bhi nahi hoti..
tabhi to aaj ek or betajbadshah "a.M.r" ho gya..
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19th August 2013, 11:19 AM
raat badi mushkil se sulaya hai maine kud ko
In aankho ko tere sapno ka laalch de ke..
..Puneet
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raat badi mushkil se sulaya hai maine kud ko
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..Puneet
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bahot hi accha sher share kiyaa hai mere bhai Puneet... mehfil sajaate raho, khush raho, aabaad raho...........
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mout kisi dusman ka chehara nahi hoti..
kisi ki paband bhi nahi hoti..
tabhi to aaj ek or betajbadshah "a.M.r" ho gya..
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Acchey ehsaas hain aapke Sultan bhai.......... bahot acchey..
likhte rahiye
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Aaj ka sher...
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Acchey ehsaas hain aapke Sultan bhai.......... bahot acchey..
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Shaad..........
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Sukriya janab ... Hosla hafjai ke liye bahut bahut sukragujar hu..
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20th August 2013, 09:07 AM
dosto se na mile to taklif hoti hai..
par fayda hai pith maine khanjar nahi lagta..
~: NM
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20th August 2013, 01:36 PM
Ustaadon ki is mehfil ko armaan ka salam sabse pahle to shaad bhai bahut he badhiya silsila shuru kiya hai aapne uske liye shukriya...to ye banda bhi is silsiley me judtey hue 2 lines pesh karta hai
Tera un zindagi me aana ajeeb lagta hai,kuch to baat hai tujhme jo tu dil ke kareeb lagta hai,
Pahle to barbaad ho chuke mohbbat me 'armaan',is baar dafn hongey aisa naseeb lagta hai.
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Humen to unse mohbbat hai mout se bhi pyar hai,Unper pura yaqeen or mout per pura etbaar hai,
Dekhtey hain pahle koun aata hai,"Armaan" ko dono ka intezaar hai(nm)
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20th August 2013, 09:37 PM
Mere khayaal mein duniya ujad gayi meri,
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Aaj ka sher meri ik pichlii ghazal se....
Qaatil terii AdaaeN haiN, aur Zulf hain kaale baadal,
Chehraa Teraa ik CHaanD ho Jaise Pahney hue Naqaab....
Shaad...
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22nd August 2013, 08:21 AM
zindagi ka ek padao gujar jane pe..
ek sant se sawal ka., ek sant sa jawab mila..
maine akhari nind tak sath hu., maine bus ek khawb hu..
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
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22nd August 2013, 07:28 PM
Harf-e-Maula Teri Khudai Ko Kya Dosh Doo
Unse Meri Judaai Ko Kyaa Dosh Doo...
Yeh Tay Tha.. Mujhe Behna Hoga Uske Gham Me..
Uski Meri Ladaai Ko Kyaa Dosh Doo...
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Mera aaj ka sher....
Jise bhi dekh lo tum wo huaa ik pal me deewaanaa,
Tilismii hai bahot jaanaa, tumharii Aankh kaa kaajal...
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itna bahra bhi na hua hu ki
"tere ruthe pairo ka aahat na pa saku"
ab mujhe mout ke kadam bhi saf saf sunai parte hai..
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
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itna bahra bhi na hua hu ki
"tere ruthe pairo ka aahat na pa saku"
ab mujhe mout ke kadam bhi saf saf sunai parte hai..
~@ :SULTAAN
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
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Naazuk mizaaj dekhiye meraa yaar hai is qadar,
Pehni jo paayal paaoN me cham cham se Darr gaye.........
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palko ki jhapkiya.. ankho ki ye sararte..
badi katil hai tere sar ka resmi dupatta..
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hume bhi...
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