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8th October 2009, 03:21 PM
Sabhi dostoN ko mera salaam..........
 Is bazam ke kabil to mere ahsaas nahi rahe hai bus youn hi kuch lkha hai ek sher ko point karke puri gazal kahene ki gustaqi kii hai....... ummid hai aapko yeh meri koshish pasand aayengi..... Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haaq hoga Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa Kuch Anjaam to hone do dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do Sirf justajuu hai meri Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki Kwahish Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe bamaqaam to hone do 
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8th October 2009, 03:50 PM
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Sameer.... peshkash waqyi damdaar hai.....sabhi sher meiN yeh mujhe accha laga... Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa Kuch Anjaam to hone do Yunhi likhte raho khush raho tumhari dii  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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8th October 2009, 04:10 PM
Bahut he lajawaab hai... Thanx for sharing
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8th October 2009, 04:41 PM
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khwaish sahab.........aadaab apki ghazal bahut pasand aayi............. matla sabse khobsurat tha..........( iska matlab ye nahi ki baki kam the) har misra bahut saaf adaa hua hai.......bilkul natural flow me........ girah bhi bahut acchi lagai hai apne....... nayapan hai bahut hadd tak........ dil se nikli daad kabool ho sahab......... yun hi sunate rahiye aur mahfil ki raunaq bane rahiya........ regards |
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8th October 2009, 05:58 PM
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tahe dil se daad....kabul kare.... aise hi likhtey jaaiye....khush rahiye... aur apna khayal rakhiyega.... duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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8th October 2009, 07:33 PM
Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do Sameer Bhai, Lajawab kar dia aap nay, Boht hi zaberdast composition rahi aap ki, Hur shair dil ko chu gaya... Boht acha laga aap ki yeh ghazal phar kar.... Aisay hi likhtay rahiye, Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga, GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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8th October 2009, 08:32 PM
Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do
Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do This one was excellent Khwahish..... |
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8th October 2009, 09:41 PM
[quote=kwahish;368814]Sabhi dostoN ko mera salaam..........
Is bazam ke kabil to mere ahsaas nahi rahe hai bus youn hi kuch lkha hai ek sher ko point karke puri gazal kahene ki gustaqi kii hai....... ummid hai aapko yeh meri koshish pasand aayengi..... Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do waha kya khoob keha hai Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haaq hoga Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do bhout achcha likha hai aapnay Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa Kuch Anjaam to hone do kya baat hai janaab dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do waha waha Sirf justajuu hai meri Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki Kwahish Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe bamaqaam to hone do waha janaab kya likha hai aapnay ....badi hi sanjidgi say bahout hi umda likha hai aaghay bhi aisa hi kuch padnay ko milayga aise hi ...............Aasha karta hoon aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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8th October 2009, 09:46 PM
Sabhi dostoN ko mera salaam..........
salam kabul kiya Is bazam ke kabil to mere ahsaas nahi rahe hai kyoN ehesaas ko bech diye kya  bus youn hi kuch lkha hai ek sher ko point karke puri gazal kahene ki gustaqi kii hai Gustakhi to bar bar karte ho yeh koi new baat ....... ummid hai aapko yeh meri koshish pasand aayengi..... hum kisike umiid pe pani nahi ferte  Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do hmm Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haaq hoga haq* Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do bahot khub Na Lagaunga dil kabhi Phir itni deewangii ki hadh tak Mairi Iftadayi Mohobbat Kaa Kuch Anjaam to hone do achha hai dekhlo ek nazar chahe khak bhi na dalo tum mujh per Dard Basar is Dil Ko Sanam Zarra Aaraam to hone do soch mein nayapan nahi  Sirf justajuu hai meri Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki Kwahish Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe bamaqaam to hone do iska matlab samjh mein nahi aaya sher achha hai apna khayal rakhiye khus rahiye Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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9th October 2009, 05:01 PM
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Thanks for appriciate, aapne jis sher ko choose kiya hai mera bhi pasandida hai woh...... Aur sach mein har insaan ki zinagii mein aisa mod aata hi hai...... Aaghaaz to sabhi karte hai per anjaam aane tak uske ahsaas badal jaate hai Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe aur nawazish hoti rahe Insha Allah zarur likhate rahenge.. Aap bhi khush rahiye.. Apna khayal rakhiye.. Khuda hafez...... Your Bro..... sameer
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10th October 2009, 04:12 PM
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Bahut khushi hui tumhe wapas yahan dekhker........ Bhai aate rahiye, aisi sharings hum karte rahenge........ But we are also missing your poetry, come with your cool poetry..... Khush raho.. Take care.. May God Bless you dear.
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11th October 2009, 07:59 PM
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Aap humare gazal ke fan hai aaj pata chala.........  Bahut afsos ho raha hai garmiyoN ke khatam hone ke baad pata chala  .......Aage bhi aapka saath milta rahe hum likhate rahenge.... Take care... Khuda Hafez...
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11th October 2009, 08:46 PM
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ye kya tha... mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa araha hai kya kahun...  sameer jii aapki is koshish ne mujhe pasand nahi aayi balki bahut hi jyada achi lagi darey to nahi na.... is ghazal ke ehsaas bahut hi khoobsurat the... itne achi soch or gehre khayaal ke sath aapko dekhke sach me acha laga.. or aap naakam nahi hue to aap lautoge bhi nahi... aise hi mehfil ki roanak banaye rakhiye... vicky |
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12th October 2009, 10:12 AM
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12th October 2009, 02:29 PM
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Aapke reply dilchasp laga aur likhane ki urjaa bhi pradan kar gaya issay jyada kisi shayari writter ko daad mile yeh mumkeen nahi....... Aapne itni gehrai se padha hai to mere ahsaas aap tak pahunche hi hoge shukriyaa....... Aapki daad sir ankhoN per sahab aage bhi aapka sahyog milta rahe hum likhate rahenge..... Koshish jaari hai sahab, aage bhi saath banaye rakhiye... Khush rahiye.. Ap bhi apna khayal rakhiye Khuda Hafez..
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16th October 2009, 04:28 PM
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Aapko meri peshkash achchi lagi iska mamnoon huN, Daad wa hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya.... Aage bhi aapna saath banaye rakhiye, Apna kahayal rakhiey Khush rakhiey Khuda hafez..
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20th October 2009, 04:27 PM
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Koshish ko sarahane ka.... aur hounsla afzai karne ka... Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez..
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20th October 2009, 04:30 PM
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Kaise hai janab? Bhai koshish to ki hai... per aapne jis tarha meri koshish ko saraha hai dil khush ho gaya... Aap jaise shayar jab daad deN to daad khaas lagti hai... Aage bhi aapki hounsla aafzai milti rahe yehi ummid karunga... Khush rahiye.. Apna khayal rakhiye Khuda hafez..
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6th November 2009, 03:53 PM
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Kaisi haiN aap....... ? Aapne hamara likha pasand kiya, aur hounsla afzai ki uska tahe dil se shukriya.... Shayad aapko maqta samjh mein nahi aaya jo aapne kaha bhi haiN to main uska tafsira de raha huN..... Sirf justajuu hai meri Manzil -E- Mohobbat ki Kwahish Khanabadosh huN is rah mujhe bamaqaam to hone do Meri sirf yehi last koshish hai ke main apni mohobbat ki manzil ko paa luN... Abhi main is mohobbat ki raah per musafir huN mera is raah mein koi ghar nahi means meri abhi koi mohobbat nahi jab mujhe apni mohobbat mil jayengi to main bhi mohobbat ki is raah per bamakhaam ho jayuNga.... Khanabadosh means...( Jiska koi ghar nahiN ) Aati rahiye, Khush rahiye.. Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.. Khuda Hafez...
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10th November 2009, 10:31 AM
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Bohat khoob sameer saheb.... aapki yeh ghazal acchi lagi mujhe...bohat hi sachhe ehsaas maluum padhte haiN......yuhi likhte rahiye........... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th November 2009, 04:54 PM
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Main kuch pal ke liye soch mein pad gaya tha..... .... Phir dobara apni hi post padha aur sochne laga kya wakai maine itna bhada likha haiNAray bhai daraoge aur darunga nahi.... main bhi InsaaN hi huN yaar Haan Nakaam hoker lautne se behtar haiN na hi lautuN.... Aapne jis tarha housla afzai ki hai uska tahe dil se shukriyaa... Aage bhi aap ka saath bana rahe yehi dua... Aate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. Khuda hafez..
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11th November 2009, 05:10 PM
Sameer...............bahut accha likha hai aapne har baar ki tarah hi, sabhi sher bahut khoobsurat bane haiN aur ahsaas bhi umda haiN, hume yeh 2 sher bahut hi khaas lage.
Meri ummid ka suraj duba nahi abhi shaam to hone do Main Khud Hii Laut JauNGa Mujhe NaKaam to hone do Karna mujhe badnaam phir tumhe mujh per haaq hoga Pahele mere naam se judaa Tumhara Naam to hone do aapki diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th November 2009, 04:49 PM
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Meri gazal ko pasand karne aur reply karne ke liye aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa.... Daad kabool hai... Aage bhi saath banaye rakhiye.. Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez,..
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20th November 2009, 04:15 PM
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Humari gazal aapko pasand aayi aur aapne gazal ke ahsaas ko samjh main aapka tahe dil se shukra guzar huN........ Koshish jari hai......... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye....... Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez...
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23rd November 2009, 10:45 AM
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Har ek khwaish hi khwaish ko dhundti hai.... or meri najre ek khwaish(Sameer) ko dhundti hai........  hope u dont mind but its true........... me jab bhi online aati hu to apke or naresh Jee ke threads jarur search karti hu... abhi SDC ke jyada members se rubaru nahi hui hu but fir bhi i like ur all threads (๏̯͡๏) (๏̯͡๏) Hasratein dilo ki chupaye nahi chupti hai, dard juba par bankar bayan sab karti hai..... ***************************** Dard ki mehfil me ek sher hum bhi aarz kiya karte hai.. Na kisi se marham Na duaon ki Ummed kiya karte hai.. kayi chehre lekar log yaha jiya karte hai....... hum in aasunao ko ek chehre ke liye peeya karte hai.... |
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23rd November 2009, 04:10 PM
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Aapko mere likhe do sher pasand aaye mere liye behad khushi ki baat hai aage koshish karunga ke aapko meri puri gazal pasand aaye.... aisa likhane kii.......Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Khush rahiye.. DuaoN ke saath Khuda Hafez.... Your Brother......
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Aapne kuch nahi behad jyada tarif kardi jis ke kabil yeh banda nahi... Main yahan aaker hi shayari sikha hun aur yahan aaye huye mujhe ek saal bhi nahi hua... Ek Kwahish nahi hai mohtarma hazaron kwahisheN hai........ Main jab shayari ki web site per apna ID bana raha tha to janab Mirza Galib sahab ka sher mere nazaron ke samne tha... HazaroN kwahishen aisi har kwahish pe dam nikale Nikale mere armaan phir bhi bahut kam nikale........ Jiski wajah se mera ID Kwahish ban gaya... as a taqallus pahele to log mujhe ladki hi samjhte Jisse mujhe koi shikayat nahi, but aap is tarha se itni tarif karengii to mujhe to koi shikayat nahi hogi but shayad auroN ko Itraaz ho jayenga...Aapne itni izzat o afzai bakhshi main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta huN... Waqt ke saath saath aap bhi yahan ki achchi member ban jayengi yehi ummid hai..... Apna saath banaye rakhiey, Khush rahiye. Khuda Hafez..
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28th November 2009, 11:00 PM
bahut acha likha hai ... kafi pasand aya ... grt likhte rahiye
hasrat hoti hai kuch likhne ki jab aati hai kisi ki yaad .. lagti hai chot dil pe ya jab hoti hai kisi se baat .. |
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28th November 2009, 11:10 PM
zabardast ..................
katl .... har sher repss aDDEDDDDDDDDD |
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28th November 2009, 11:30 PM
sameerji,
bahut hi umda alfaazo se nawaza hai aapne apne ehsasso ko..... acchi lagi aapki ye aada bhi...azeeb sa aaram hai aapki is rachna me hamari subhkamnaye izzazut aur likhe aur dil ko sakoon de Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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29th November 2009, 03:12 AM
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bas aap jaisay doston ka pyaar jo aaj yahaan mojood hoon .....bhagwaan ise terha aapki koshisho ko sawaarta rahay ....main apnay aap ko sach main shayar nahin maanta ...........par aapsay say kuch na kuch sikhnay ko to milta hi hai Khush rahiye.. Apna khayal rakhiye Khuda hafez.. aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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Aage bhi ana sath banaye rakhiye.......
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An Incomplite Dream
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13th December 2009, 04:37 PM
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21st December 2009, 05:26 PM
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Aage bhi apna saath banaye rahana................. Khush raho, Apna khayal rakho, Khuda Hafez.............
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अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
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5th January 2010, 03:15 PM
SubhaaaN allahhhhhhhhh...
Kya kahu yaar.... tumhare pehale sher ne hi kayaL bana dala.. bahut hii umdaaH hai janab... kyaa baat... diL khus kar diya aapNe.. Ek sahi maynO meiN.. aapne flow ko barkaar rakhte huyee..aapne use anzzaam tak phuchayaa.... Daal QabooL kare janaB... Omi Quote:
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21st February 2010, 04:26 PM
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Amit Bhai Hounsla Afzai ka bahut bahut shukriyaa, Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye, Apna khayal rakhiye, Khuda hafez......
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21st February 2010, 06:41 PM
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sameer bhai radhe radhe peshkash bahut umda hai...har ashar bada saaf aur dil ko choone wala hai..aise hi likhte rahe aur mehfil ki raunak badhaate rahen (rep+++) Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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21st March 2010, 02:28 PM
[quote=vichiter;375556]
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Yeh mehfil hi aisi hia ke yahan sabko ek dusre se kuch sikhane milta hia...... Bus dil mein sikhane ki justajoo chahiye, aur sabke liye dil mein khulus chahiye.. Mehfil mein aate rahiye, Apna khayal rakhiye, Khush rhaiye, Khuda Hafez.....
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