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inspired frm danny bhai's "i will giv u my dreams" -
16th September 2006, 08:09 PM
rivulets of the eye bearing the unexpressible emotions
emotions that often take the shape of tears... flow through the eyes and take shelter on the lips that have been silenced for eternity... words have vanished in to the world of silence filling the empty spaces with the pain of seperation she went away taking all her memories with her... leaving the incarnadine heart that still craves for her love... me and my dreams are all that im left with... awaiting the dark nights and the healing rain i look up to share my dreams with her,but in vain as she left me and my dreams... all broken... Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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16th September 2006, 08:48 PM
me and my dreams are all that im left with...
awaiting the dark nights and the healing rain i look up to share my dreams with her,but in vain as she left me and my dreams... all broken... very true feelings kartik beautiful expression awesome poem thnx to danny ji who has inspired you 
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18th September 2006, 05:56 PM
thanks for the reply...shrdh...
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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29th September 2006, 08:51 PM
rivulets of the eye bearing the unexpressible emotions
emotions that often take the shape of tears... flow through the eyes and take shelter on the lips that have been silenced for eternity... words have vanished in to the world of silence filling the empty spaces with the pain of seperation she went away taking all her memories with her... leaving the incarnadine heart that still craves for her love... me and my dreams are all that im left with... awaiting the dark nights and the healing rain i look up to share my dreams with her,but in vain as she left me and my dreams... all broken... Beautifull... Dear Karthik, As always, a beautiful expression... touched the heart... Firtly you urslef write so well and above thaty its inspired by danny bhaiya's creation... outta be goood  Keep writing like this and keep coming... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: inspired frm danny bhai's "i will giv u my dreams" |
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Re: inspired frm danny bhai's "i will giv u my dreams" -
7th October 2006, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by karthik
rivulets of the eye bearing the unexpressible emotions emotions that often take the shape of tears... flow through the eyes and take shelter on the lips that have been silenced for eternity... words have vanished in to the world of silence filling the empty spaces with the pain of seperation she went away taking all her memories with her... leaving the incarnadine heart that still craves for her love... me and my dreams are all that im left with... awaiting the dark nights and the healing rain i look up to share my dreams with her,but in vain as she left me and my dreams... all broken... Hmmm...! Karthik Bhai...!Nice to see that you have been inspired by one of my poems...! I am really pleased...! Your poem is awesome,sacch ! Please, do keep flowing your thoughts, ok...? Take good care of yourself Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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