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17th February 2007, 05:40 PM
hello friends...im back to writing after a long time...here is a poem...hope u guys remember me...
Eclipsed by the shades of fury... Fury that has ecstatically overwhelmed the joy within ... Suppressing all my dreams And with all my hopes shattered... I wake up with a sting of pain... In a wake of a nwe start, I hide it all and smile... Who were to know that i go through this every night, Except my soaked pillow, that has tasted the tears of love... Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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19th February 2007, 01:12 AM
hi karhik
aai think ki tum mujhe bul chuke hohe hai na. jahan tak mujhe yaad hai hamne chat bhi ki aur pm se bhi jana ek dusre ko. but us baat ko kaphi waqt hua. par haan ek baat aaj bhi wohi hai.... ye pain jo tab bhi tha aaj bhi hai life mein. pain ful likha hai tumne gahrai tak jata hai jo dard. sakhi urs frnd शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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20th February 2007, 05:00 PM
hello sakhi...thanks so much for the reply...it was really nice of u...take care
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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21st February 2007, 02:56 AM
Hi Karthik jee,
aapne bahut hi bhavuk poem likhi hai....but the best is that you try to turn your tears to pearls....keep it up. Keep writing... it helps heal the soul. Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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22nd February 2007, 11:01 PM
hello arya ji...
thanks so much for reading... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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