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Badi taqleef hoti hai...! - 6th July 2005, 11:35 PM

Chaand sahab ka ek behtareen kalaam padha .. Or uss per naina ka khubsurat jawaab .. iss barasti hui shaam me dil ke kagaz per kuch lafz laraz utthe... To bas likh diya youn he....mera ye kalaam ek daad hai chaand sahab ke uss kalaam ke naam Jisska naam hai:-

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Teri muhobbat Kuch boonden shahad ki,or zindgi samander hai gum ka,gum-e-yaar,gum-e-rozgaar, gum-e-duniya or gum-e-bahaar, Itne gum hain magar meri zindgi phir bhi meeti hai,Kuch qatre teri muhobbat ke hain issme.. ke sara samander amrit ho gaya hai,

‘paaya to Hai magar kya baat hai tujhe pane me,her lamha tujhe khota he ja raha houn’
main tujhko chaahta houn per main tujhtak aa nahi paata… badi taqleef hoti hai…
badi taqleef hoti hai



Jeena hai mujhe tere bin
Magar main jee nahi pata
Mujhe ik zidd si hai teri
Main tujhko he nahi pata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Na he khwabon khayalon me
Na roti ke niwaalon me
Zindgi mujhko milti hai
Teri aankhon ke pyalon me

Unhe main pee nahi paata
Mujhe ik zidd si hai teri
Main tujhko he nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Prinda Aasmaa chaahe
Magar wo udd nahi paaye
Musafir aasmaanon ka
Zamee per he mara jaaye

Lage hain zakhm pankhon per
Zakham wo see nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Use jab bhool jaata houn
Wo mujhko bhool jata hai
Main ussko yaad aata houn
Wo mujhko yaad aata hai

Muhobbat ke samander se
Muhobbat bhi nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Wo milta he nahi mujhse
Magar her roz milta hai
Kabhi wo saans hai mujhko
Kabhi dil me dhadakta hai

Base wo ruuh me meri
Magar main choo nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Khuda gar mujhse milta hai
Shiqayat usse karta houn
Mujhe wo kyu nahi milta
Mai jiss chehre pe marta hu

Karan sab kuch to milta hai
Muraad dil kiii nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai

Badi taqleef hoti hai

Karan.q

Note:- the orignal poerty written on this subject is written by chand sahab and submitted in shayri-e-dard


Fainsle Qayamat taq multavee ho gaye
Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye

Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke.....
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7th July 2005, 07:06 AM

paaya to Hai magar kya baat hai tujhe pane me,her lamha tujhe khota he ja raha houn’
main tujhko chaahta houn per main tujhtak aa nahi paata… badi taqleef hoti hai…

Karan.....

kya kahuun...kuch samajh nahi aa raha, har baar ki tarah bas bahut khuub kehke khaamosh ho jaaoon,ya fir is taqleef ka koii ilaaj karuun....
Mujhe paane ki khwaahish mein,
kahiin khud ko na kho dena....

Mohabbat...
Naina


Ek se musaafir hain, Ek sa muqaddar hai...
Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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hi! - 7th July 2005, 10:31 AM

Wah...Amazing..!
kya taal milaya hai taal se!...

Chaand ji apki racha..ke kya kehne!...apko jaan k khushi hogi..k is mein zasbaat ke moti badhte hi jaa rahe hein!

22 gud karan!
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11th July 2005, 08:49 AM

karan,
Base wo ruuh me meri
Magar main choo nahi paata
Badi taqleef hoti hai


kal komal se pata chala tumhari is rachna k bare mai...
achha laga padhkar....

meena

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Bahut khoob - 11th July 2005, 09:21 PM

Khuda gar mujhse milta hai
Shiqayat usse karta houn
Mujhe wo kyu nahi milta
Mai jiss chehre pe marta hu



Karan saahab.................aapki ye rachna sirf ek daad nahi hai meri us koshish ko..............balki ek Zar.re ki tajposhi hai yooN kahiye...

aapko parhna or seekh paana meri khushkismati hoti hai....so aapka likha ye kalaam bhi sir-aaNkhoN per...

aapki is rachna ne...kuchh nam kiya hai in aaNkhoN ko....sachmuch...yooN laga...ke kisi apne ne kaaNdhe per haath rakh diya ho.




Jeena hai mujhe tere bin
Magar main jee nahi pata
Mujhe ik zidd si hai teri
Main tujhko he nahi pata
Badi taqleef hoti hai



yooN laga koi meri hi dhadkaneiN mujhe sunaata ho.


Kuchh arz karta hooN....

Dekh har ek parhta hai...
Magar tu hi nahi parhti.....
Mere dil ki jo haalat hai.....
Tujhe becheiN nahi karti.....
Mai shab-bhar jaagta hooN or....
Tu subhoN tak bhi soti hai.....
Badi...taqleef hoti hai...
Badi taqleef hoti hai...


Chaand


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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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12th July 2005, 11:06 AM

karan sahab...

aapne bahut khubsurat tareeke se chaand sahab ka kalaam aage badhaya hai...beautiful!...bus dil chuu jaane wala...

aur chaand sahib aapne bhi jo arz kiya jawaab mein dil ka azeez ho gaya...shukriya aap dono ka aise khubsurat khayalon ko hamare saamne rakhne ke liye


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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21st July 2005, 11:03 PM

excellent , super




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