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25th November 2009, 03:58 PM
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Hona nahi khafaa na hona judaa hi mujhse
Mar jaunga main na karna tu jafaa mujhse
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sab samajhte hain dilo k saudagar...
Tum apne dil ki boli to lagao...
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25th November 2009, 04:08 PM
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sab samajhte hain dilo k saudagar...
Tum apne dil ki boli to lagao...
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Uper se kahaN aati hai nazar nafasat kisi kii
Yeh fitrat hai siratoN ki surat se nahi dekhati
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25th November 2009, 04:25 PM
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Uper se kahaN aati hai nazar nafasat kisi kii
Yeh fitrat hai siratoN ki surat se nahi dekhati
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insaan ko bana k khud khuda b hairaan hai...
Ye kaisi bala e sirat bana dii..
Tum kya pehchanoge fitrat kisi ki..
Ye fitrat he meri,ye tumne bana dii...
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25th November 2009, 04:31 PM
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insaan ko bana k khud khuda b hairaan hai...
Ye kaisi bala e sirat bana dii..
Tum kya pehchanoge fitrat kisi ki..
Ye fitrat he meri,ye tumne bana dii...
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Dil ka koyiN raaz kabhi raaz na rakh saka
Zuban ko chup karaya anhon ne keh diyaa
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25th November 2009, 05:11 PM
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Dil ka koyiN raaz kabhi raaz na rakh saka
Zuban ko chup karaya anhon ne keh diyaa
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ye jo adaa hai tumhari Dil lagaane ki...
Chupke se mere dil me utar jaane ki...
Meri jaan, tumne seekhi kaha se....
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25th November 2009, 05:40 PM
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ye jo adaa hai tumhari Dil lagaane ki...
Chupke se mere dil me utar jaane ki...
Meri jaan, tumne seekhi kaha se....
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ko ba ko phelii hai baat shana saai ki
usne khushboo ki tereH merii pazeerai ki
kaise keh doN keh usne choR diya mujhe
baat to sach hai mager baat hai ruswaai ki
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25th November 2009, 06:44 PM
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woww Lamha ji.. Bahut khoob btw hw r u my dear 1st friend of sdc ?? remember me ??
Ye zulfe tumhari, ye chehra tumhara,
yu chup chup k milna, wo karna ishara...
Adaaein tumhari,wo girna hamara...
Sanam na hm bhoole hain...
Na he tum bhoole ho...
Wo aagosh me mere madhosh hona..
Wo Bhula k saari duniya ko milna hamara....
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offcourse i remember u dear....how can i forget such precious friend...how r u been doing dear ?? i hope everything is fine at u....missed all my friends and missed sdc a lot....
Ya rab! nazar lage naa kisi badd-nigah ki
Ashkoo say arzoo ka chaman bo rahay hay hum...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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25th November 2009, 07:33 PM
yup dear.. Evrythng is fine
marzi e khuda hai.. Na kuch karta hu mai...
Ye fasal khud b khud aasmaan chu rahi hai...
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25th November 2009, 07:39 PM
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yup dear.. Evrythng is fine
marzi e khuda hai.. Na kuch karta hu mai...
Ye fasal khud b khud aasmaan chu rahi hai...
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bahut khoob ... as usual...
Aye boott-taraash ishq ko heirat mein daal de
pathar ki aankh se koi aansu nikaal de
nm
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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25th November 2009, 09:30 PM
daaG duniya ne diye, zaKhm zamaane se miley
ham ko ye tohfe, tumheN dost banane se miley..nm
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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25th November 2009, 10:56 PM
Lo aa gayi un ki yaad, woh nahi aaye,
ik aas reh gayi hai woh bhi na toot jaye...
(Geet:Lata Jii)
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th November 2009, 02:26 PM
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Lo aa gayi un ki yaad, woh nahi aaye,
ik aas reh gayi hai woh bhi na toot jaye...
(Geet:Lata Jii)
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YouN toH jo falak uper hai wohi niche bhi
ZameeN ki hadho pe nazar ghuma ke dekho
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27th November 2009, 12:00 AM
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YouN toH jo falak uper hai wohi niche bhi
ZameeN ki hadho pe nazar ghuma ke dekho
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Khiza Kya, fasale-gul kehte haiN kisko, koi mausam ho
Wahi ham haiN, qafas hai aur maatam baalo-par ka hai
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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27th November 2009, 03:29 PM
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Khiza Kya, fasale-gul kehte haiN kisko, koi mausam ho
Wahi ham haiN, qafas hai aur maatam baalo-par ka hai
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HonthoN mein shikayat ke lafz daba baithe
AnkhoN mein faryaad ke ashk chupa bathe
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27th November 2009, 10:09 PM
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HonthoN mein shikayat ke lafz daba baithe
AnkhoN mein faryaad ke ashk chupa bathe
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Thug tha qafir woh sanam faqat jo bait-baaz nikla
Duhaaie ashqoN ki jo deta hai woh kambakhat chaal-baaz nikla
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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28th November 2009, 10:16 AM
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Thug tha qafir woh sanam faqat jo bait-baaz nikla
Duhaaie ashqoN ki jo deta hai woh kambakhat chaal-baaz nikla
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waaaah waaaah vikram ji.. Bahut khoob....
labrez mohabbat se jb dil ka aalam hota hai...
Chaalbaaz sanam bhi wafadaar dikhta hai....
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28th November 2009, 05:28 PM
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waaaah waaaah vikram ji.. Bahut khoob....
labrez mohabbat se jb dil ka aalam hota hai...
Chaalbaaz sanam bhi wafadaar dikhta hai....
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Janaab Buland shayar saheb bahut bahut Shukriya!
Arz kiya hai...
Hai baski har ik unke ishaare meiN nishaaN aur
Karte haiN muhobbat to guzarta hai GumaaN aur
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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28th November 2009, 06:07 PM
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Janaab Buland shayar saheb bahut bahut Shukriya!
Arz kiya hai...
Hai baski har ik unke ishaare meiN nishaaN aur
Karte haiN muhobbat to guzarta hai GumaaN aur
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RanJ O Dard ki basti ka washindaa hun main
Itne dard sahe hai dek fir bhi zindaa hun main
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28th November 2009, 06:45 PM
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Janaab Buland shayar saheb bahut bahut Shukriya!
Arz kiya hai...
Hai baski har ik unke ishaare meiN nishaaN aur Karte haiN muhobbat to guzarta hai GumaaN aur
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vikram ji... Muaaf kijiyega par Aapka ye sher meri samajh ni aaya.. actuly isme kuch khaas urdu b ni hai, par fir b meri samajh se bahar he raha ye... Sorry
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RanJ O Dard ki basti ka washindaa hun main
Itne dard sahe hai dek fir bhi zindaa hun main
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WAAH sameer bhai waah.. Jiyo mere bhai...
Mai zinda hu,ye khayal jhoota hai dosto...
Ye buut kisi khwaish me chal raha hai dosto...
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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28th November 2009, 06:52 PM
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vikram ji... Muaaf kijiyega par Aapka ye sher meri samajh ni aaya.. actuly isme kuch khaas urdu b ni hai, par fir b meri samajh se bahar he raha ye... Sorry
WAAH sameer bhai waah.. Jiyo mere bhai...
Mai zinda hu,ye khayal jhoota hai dosto...
Ye buut kisi khwaish me chal raha hai dosto...
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Shukriyaa Bhai...........
TukdoN mein baant rahi hai teri yaadeN mere dil ko
Jis tukde mein dekhuN tera naya pahelu nazar aaye
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28th November 2009, 07:05 PM
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Shukriyaa Bhai...........
TukdoN mein baant rahi hai teri yaadeN mere dil ko
Jis tukde mein dekhuN tera naya pahelu nazar aaye
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behan ko bhai bana re ho sameer bhai
yu tera reh reh k ye pyaar ka ehsaas dilana...
Is buut me koi doosri khwaish na jaga de...
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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28th November 2009, 07:10 PM
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behan ko bhai bana re ho sameer bhai
yu tera reh reh k ye pyaar ka ehsaas dilana...
Is buut me koi doosri khwaish na jaga de...
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You are much tombish so Bhai bhi kaha to kuch galat nahi hoga, Ok Sis........
DuriyaaN woh is qadar mujhse badate chale gaye
Nikale the tahha aur karwaaN banate chale gaye
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28th November 2009, 07:17 PM
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RanJ O Dard ki basti ka washindaa hun main
Itne dard sahe hai dek fir bhi zindaa hun main
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Marne ki 'e dil ! Aur hi tasveer kar ki maiN shaayane-dasto-bazu-e-qatil nahi raha
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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28th November 2009, 07:17 PM
ok bro....
yu rokar kisi se pyaar ki ummeed na karo...
K ye wo nagma hai jo har saaz pe gaya nahi jaata...
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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28th November 2009, 07:24 PM
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ok bro....
yu rokar kisi se pyaar ki ummeed na karo...
K ye wo nagma hai jo har saaz pe gaya nahi jaata...
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Tum youN mujhe wafaa ki duhaai naa do Kwahish
Main janta huN woh jafaa karne se baaz nahi aata
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28th November 2009, 07:33 PM
Teri har jafa ka jawab ham wafa se denge...
Tum jhoot he sahi, aazma k dekh lo...
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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28th November 2009, 07:45 PM
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Teri har jafa ka jawab ham wafa se denge...
Tum jhoot he sahi, aazma k dekh lo...
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Likhe hai kayiN khawab meri nigahoN mein
Hai yeh bhi ek khawaab tum ho bahoN mein
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28th November 2009, 07:57 PM
Mar jaau jo vasl ho jaye ek baar...
Waise b ye buut kab zinda hai visaal me....
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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28th November 2009, 08:05 PM
Jaane kab Qudaa mujh pe meharbaan hua tha
Shayad jab maiN bismil ban qurbaan hua tha
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28th November 2009, 08:20 PM
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vikram ji... Muaaf kijiyega par Aapka ye sher meri samajh ni aaya.. actuly isme kuch khaas urdu b ni hai, par fir b meri samajh se bahar he raha ye... Sorry
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Janaab Katil Shayar saheb urdu ek zubaan hai, aur kisi bhi zubaan ka istemaal apne ehsaasoN ki byani ke liye kiya jaata hai...to aapki urdu waali baat meri taraf se to kharij hi samjheN, baaki qam-aqal hooN uspe zyada shour bhi na hai mujhme, to nadaaN samjh iss ashuftasar ki gustaakhi muaf kijiyega....
Rahi baat na samjh aane ki to Janaab, yeh uss kalam se nikla hua qatil sheyr hai jis kalam ke saamne hazaaroN shayaroN ne ghutne teke haiN.... Toh aap ya maiN bhala kahaN khade hone ka dum bhareN... Janaab ye sheyr Mirza Ghalib saheb ka hai.... Toh maufi bhi aapki unhi se jayaz rahegi...
Ek adna si koshish hai aapko iss sheyr ka matlab samjhane ki, lekin phir bhi na aaye toh ma'zrat saheb, abhi abhi hi shyari ki duniya me ibtada hua hai
Hai baski har ik unke ishaare meiN nishaaN aur
(Because of uniqueness in her every style/ chunki unke har andaaz meiN anokhapan hota hai)
Karte haiN muhobbat to guzarta hai GumaaN aur
(I am always suspicious because I love her/ toh mujhe har dam ek shaq laga rehta hai, maiN unse pyar jo Karta hooN)
Umm'eed hai ki aapko samajh aa gaya hoga...
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WAAH sameer bhai waah.. Jiyo mere bhai...
Mai zinda hu,ye khayal jhoota hai dosto...
Ye buut kisi khwaish me chal raha hai dosto...
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Janaab aapke liye urdu se bharpoor ek sheyr arz karne ki himaqat kar raha hooN, Umm'eed hai ke Janaab ko pasand aayega...
Tum ho buut ho phir tumhe pindaar-e-khudaai KyoN hai?
Tum khudawand hi kehlao Khuda aur sahi....
Koi baat Janaab pe nasaaz guzri ho to yeh khatawaar sharamsaar hai....
Mehfil ki raunak bar kraar rakhiye aur Khush rahiye....
Vikram
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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28th November 2009, 09:37 PM
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ok bro....
yu rokar kisi se pyaar ki ummeed na karo...
K ye wo nagma hai jo har saaz pe gaya nahi jaata...
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Katil shayara jii,
Jin saheb ne yeh uppar wala sheyr kaha hai unke alfaaz shayad kuch iss tarha se haiN:
Ishq ke liye kuch khaas dil makhsuus hua karte haiN
Ye woh nagma hai jo har saaz pe gaya nahi jaata
Meri gustaakhi muaf kareN, yeh meri yaadasht ki binah par likh diya hai..agar galat ho to kharij kar dijiyega
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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29th November 2009, 11:24 AM
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Janaab Katil Shayar saheb urdu ek zubaan hai, aur kisi bhi zubaan ka istemaal apne ehsaasoN ki byani ke liye kiya jaata hai...to aapki urdu waali baat meri taraf se to kharij hi samjheN,
Vikram ji.. Aapki is baat se thoda muktalif vichaar rakhte hain ham... Muaaf kijiyega par agar koi malyaali aadmi kisi punjabi k bachhe ko 'pilla' bulaye to zahir c baat hai k punjabi ko gussa aayega, jabki malyaali me bachhe ko 'pilla' bolte hain...
Kehne ka matlab sirf itna hai k beshak zubaan apne ehsaaso ko pesh karne ka maadhyam hai,magar kiske saamne pesh kar rahe hain aur usko samajh aa raha hai ya nahi, ye bhi ek laazim mudda hai.. Muaaf kijiyega agar kuch galat kaha ho to...
baaki qam-aqal hooN uspe zyada shour bhi na hai mujhme, to nadaaN samjh iss ashuftasar ki gustaakhi muaf kijiyega....
Rahi baat na samjh aane ki to Janaab, yeh uss kalam se nikla hua qatil sheyr hai jis kalam ke saamne hazaaroN shayaroN ne ghutne teke haiN.... Toh aap ya maiN bhala kahaN khade hone ka dum bhareN... Janaab ye sheyr Mirza Ghalib saheb ka hai.... Toh maufi bhi aapki unhi se jayaz rahegi...
arey arey Vikram ji... Aap baat ko kaha se kaha le gaye... Mere kehne ka matlab sirf itna tha ki mujhe zyada urdu nahi aati aur aapke .. Sorry, mirza ghalib g k is sher me zyada urdu b na thi par mujh nasamajh ki samajh se parey raha wo sher... Aur aapne theek kaha k mirza sahab ek aise shayar they jinki koi misaal nahi...
Ek adna si koshish hai aapko iss sheyr ka matlab samjhane ki, lekin phir bhi na aaye toh ma'zrat saheb, abhi abhi hi shyari ki duniya me ibtada hua hai
Hai baski har ik unke ishaare meiN nishaaN aur
(Because of uniqueness in her every style/ chunki unke har andaaz meiN anokhapan hota hai)
Karte haiN muhobbat to guzarta hai GumaaN aur
(I am always suspicious because I love her/ toh mujhe har dam ek shaq laga rehta hai, maiN unse pyar jo Karta hooN)
Umm'eed hai ki aapko samajh aa gaya hoga...
mazrat vikram ji... Jaisa k maine bataya k mujhe zyada urdu nahi aati par kya 'gumaan' ka matlab 'shak' se hai... Kahi aisa to nahi k last wali line ka matlab yeh ho k 'mai unse pyaar karta hu to gumaan badhta jata hai'
muaaf kijiyega par is kamakal ko itna he samajh aaya, hope k aap bura nahi maanegnge
Janaab aapke liye urdu se bharpoor ek sheyr arz karne ki himaqat kar raha hooN, Umm'eed hai ke Janaab ko pasand aayega...
Tum ho buut ho phir tumhe pindaar-e-khudaai KyoN hai?
Tum khudawand hi kehlao Khuda aur sahi....
Koi baat Janaab pe nasaaz guzri ho to yeh khatawaar sharamsaar hai....
Mehfil ki raunak bar kraar rakhiye aur Khush rahiye....
Vikram
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aapka tahe dil se dhanyawaad k aapne is khaaksaar k liye sher likhne ki zehmat uthaayi.. Par jaisa ki aap jaante hain, mera haath urdu me tang hai to aapka sher ek baar fir rocket ban k upar se nikal gaya muaaf kijiyega...
aap bhi hamesha khush rahe aur is budhhu ko urdu ki samajh se navaazte rahe... Ummeed hai k aapke beshkeemti saath se hamesha meri akal ki banjar bhoomi ko khaad paani milta rahega
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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29th November 2009, 11:32 AM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
Katil shayara jii,
Jin saheb ne yeh uppar wala sheyr kaha hai unke alfaaz shayad kuch iss tarha se haiN:
Ishq ke liye kuch khaas dil makhsuus hua karte haiN
Ye woh nagma hai jo har saaz pe gaya nahi jaata
Meri gustaakhi muaf kareN, yeh meri yaadasht ki binah par likh diya hai..agar galat ho to kharij kar dijiyega
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aapki jaankaari ekdam durust hai Vikram ji... Par maine sirf 'bait-baazi' k lihaaz se kuch modifications ki thi.. Aur jaha tak meri jaankaari hai , k aap aisa kar sakte hain... dhanywaad aapka ..
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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29th November 2009, 11:48 AM
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Tum ho buut ho phir tumhe pindaar-e-khudaai KyoN hai?
Tum khudawand hi kehlao Khuda aur sahi....
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baitbaazi cntnd ....
Humari pehchaan ko samajhne ki koshish na karo...
Khuda khud hame banakar abhi tak hairaan hai....
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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29th November 2009, 12:36 PM
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baitbaazi cntnd ....
Humari pehchaan ko samajhne ki koshish na karo...
Khuda khud hame banakar abhi tak hairaan hai....
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" Ha agar khuda hairaan hota
Is janha mai phir insaan kahaan hota..."
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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29th November 2009, 01:58 PM
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" Ha agar khuda hairaan hota
Is janha mai phir insaan kahaan hota..."
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ta'umra sajda kiye ja us khuda ko...
Jo tujhe banakar, bhool k baitha hai....
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29th November 2009, 03:07 PM
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ta'umra sajda kiye ja us khuda ko...
Jo tujhe banakar, bhool k baitha hai....
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Ho dekhane ka hosh to duniyaa dikhai dey
Jo tumko dekhata ho use kyaa dikhai dey
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29th November 2009, 04:21 PM
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Ho dekhane ka hosh to duniyaa dikhai dey
Jo tumko dekhata ho use kyaa dikhai dey
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waaaaah sameer bhai... Bahut khoob .....
Darbadar ghoom k ye shauk hamne pala hai...
Khiza k phool ko hamne,
ashko se khila dala hai...
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29th November 2009, 04:39 PM
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waaaaah sameer bhai... Bahut khoob .....
Darbadar ghoom k ye shauk hamne pala hai...
Khiza k phool ko hamne,
ashko se khila dala hai...
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" hasarate.n raakh ho gaii.n lekin
aag ab bhii kahii.n dabii sii hai ..."
--nm--
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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29th November 2009, 06:15 PM
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aapka tahe dil se dhanyawaad k aapne is khaaksaar k liye sher likhne ki zehmat uthaayi.. Par jaisa ki aap jaante hain, mera haath urdu me tang hai to aapka sher ek baar fir rocket ban k upar se nikal gaya muaaf kijiyega...
aap bhi hamesha khush rahe aur is budhhu ko urdu ki samajh se navaazte rahe... Ummeed hai k aapke beshkeemti saath se hamesha meri akal ki banjar bhoomi ko khaad paani milta rahega
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Ji aapki baat bahut hadd tak sahi hai, lekin maiN aapko ek naya pehlu se bhi ru-ba-ru karvana chahta hooN,
Jab aap kisi aisi forum meiN likhte haiN jiska vasta hi ek khaas tabiyat aur tahseer ke khayaloN ki adayagi ya byani se ho to aap ye soch ke chalte haiN ki ho sakta hai aapki byani meiN kami reh jaye lekin saamne wala aadmi to aapki kamzor tehreer ko samajh hi jayega.... Lekin baat iss dayre ke Kuch aur bahar ki bhi hai, woh yeh ki aap kisi maths ki forum meiN agar sheyr likhenge to yeh baat zaroor jayaz hogi jo aapne kahi hai....
Ye batane ka mudda faqat itna hai ki main aapke likhne ke tariqe se yeh keh sakta hooN ki aap ki pakad zubaan par achhi hai lekin interpretation ki kami hai, aap thodi si mehnat se ye kami puri kar sakti haiN, Uske baad inshallah aapki tehreer bahut qatil hongi....ye mera aapko padh ke maan na hai....
Baat mukhtasar si itni hai ke, there is subtle distinction between being romantic and being vulgar. That subtle distinction is known as art. I mean to say that if you learn to interpret things it would not only be good for you as a poet but also helpful in your day to day life, I am really very sorry if you don't approve of what ever I have written....I sincerely apologize.
Rahi baat sheyr ki to lijiye isse samjhte haiN:-
Tum ho buut* to tumhe pindaar-e-khudaai* KyoN hai?
*Buut = sudarta ki murat
*Pindaar-e-khudaai = Khuda hone ki galatfehmi
Yaha'n Ghalib saheb ye farma rahe haiN apne mehboob ko ki hum maante haiN ki tu apsara jaisi khoobsurat hai lekin tujhe ye galatfehmi KyoN hai ki tu Khuda hai....
I know and acknowledg that you are the most beautiful women, but what has made you think that you are God.
Tum khudawand* raho Khuda koi aur sahi
*khudawand = Khuda ka banda
Tum khuda ke bande ho Wahi banke raho, Khuda kisi aur ko hi rehne di...
You are a child of that God, so be a child, let him, who actually is, be God.
Agar koi gustaakhi hui ho to sharamsaar hooN.
Apna khayal rakhiyega
Vikram....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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