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kshitiz - 16th April 2003, 07:43 PM

hi dosto kaise ho aap log ......

jinko apna samjhiye vo chor ke chale jate hain
aur jo chor ke chale jate hain vo yad bahut aate hain !

dosto ye koi shayri nahi thi .....ye to bas aise hi socha aap logo ke sath thodi si dil ki bate shair kar li jaanye bura mat maniyega dosto ye dil shayri likhne se pahle bahut kuch sochta hai aur kabhi kabhi likhta bhi hai ..

andaje husn jawan kya hue
unhe aa gaya khoob bijli girana
isharo ..isharo me dil cheen lena
nigah se unhe aa gaya muskurana
magar kho gai vo jo masumiyat thi
dafan ho gai meri chahat bhi usme
ki milte hue is jawani se usne
sikha hume ek klhilauna banana


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17th April 2003, 09:06 AM

waah mere dost...
kya tareef karu iski...
mere to bus ye maanna hai ki shayri likhne ke liye kisi rule ko follow kiya jaaye ye jaroori nahi...
jab dil ki baatein alfaz banker kaagaz pe utar aatii hai to wo khud ba khud shayri ban jaati hai...

magar kho gai vo jo masumiyat thi
dafan ho gai meri chahat bhi usme


bohat khoob dost...
aapke jazbaat padhke khushi hua..
aur aapka bohat bohat shukriya jo aapne inhe hamare saath share kiya...

aise hi likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye dost...


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18th April 2003, 02:00 PM

shukriya bedil sahab mera hausla badhane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya main to soch raha tha is kalam pe koi bhi view nahi aayega ............... aapka alfaj mere liye likhe gaye padh kar bahut hi khushi hui ..aapne such kaha dost shayri ko kisi rule follow karne ki jarorat nahi hoti hai .... ye to dil ko bayan karne ka ek tarika hai !
ummid hai aap sath isi tarah se milta rahegga aage bhi ..
well ek sher yad aa raha hai urz karta hu .

hal e dil sabhi ko samjhaya nahi jata
ye raz har kisi ko batlaya nahi jata
agar ehsas ho to kar lo mahsoos
ye vo juzba hai jo lafjo me samjhaya nahi jata ...

aapka dost


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18th April 2003, 06:57 PM

Kshitiz sahab aap dost bhi kehte hai aur shukriya bhi...
dosto se shukriya nahi kaha kerte...
rahi saath ki baat to janaab aap mujhe hamesha saath hi payenge...
mai dosto ka peecha nahi chodta...
aapne apne sher me bohat khoob kaha hai aur is per mai kuch arz kerna chahunga...

ye haal-e-dil hai… zubaan se bayaN hota nahi
nazroN se padha jaata hai…nigaahoN me likha hota hai


khuda hafiz


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18th April 2003, 09:04 PM

musafir sahab wah wah kya bat kahi hai ..

ye haal-e-dil hai… zubaan se bayaN hota nahi
nazroN se padha jaata hai…nigaahoN me likha hota hai

bahut khoo likha hai aapne par musafir sahab kya batye aapko kuch log sab jan kar bhi kuch samjhne ki koshish nahi karte ya sab kuch jante hue bhi anjan ban jate hain .. aur ye dil ...... offh.. kya bataye ye to bolna janta hi nahi bas dhadakna janta hai , mahsoos karna janta hai , aansu bahan janta hai , ......

well aapne bahut achha likha aur hausla afjai ke liye ek bar phir bahut bahut shukriya ..

aapka dost


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18th April 2003, 10:21 PM

wah wah wahh .... dost kya likha hai

aaj aap ne mere dil ko jeet liya aap ne to bahut hi aache tarah mere dil ki bat likh dee kya bataoo aap jo bhi likhte hai woh zada tar mere liye hi likhte hai mujhe aasa kyo legta hai ...
kshitiz bhai aap aur likhe aur apane is bhai ki tanhai door kare
kuch world hi nahin mil rahe hai aap ke sher ke liye .....

par aap ne bahut accha likha hai aur accha likhe mere dost


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18th April 2003, 10:34 PM

thx amrit ji
khushi hai ki mere lahje me aapne apne aapko find kiya tareef ke liye bahut shukriya !
aapka dost ..


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18th April 2003, 10:59 PM

wah wah wah,
mujhe aap ke sher aur jazbaat dono pasand aaye.

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18th April 2003, 11:12 PM

maaf kerna dost dil ki baatein mai kya jaanu...
mai thehra bedil...
ha dost kai baar log khud se bhi anjaan bane phirte hai...

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19th April 2003, 08:14 PM

thx zeba ji
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ..


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19th April 2003, 08:26 PM

musafir sahab ab to aap apna title badal hi dijiye itna achha dil le kar bhi khud ko bedil kahne ka kya raz hai ..
tareef ke liye ek bar phir shukriya ada karna chahunga

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19th April 2003, 11:06 PM

dost title badalne se agar kuch badal sakta mai jaroor badal deta...
per ab usse shayad kuch bhi nahi badal sakta... kuch bhi nahi...


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20th April 2003, 07:35 PM

husn par naj na kar kyonki rang badal jata hai
ye to vo mehman hai jo aaj aata hai kal chala jata hai
ishk par naj kar to koi bat bhi hai ......
husn par naj kya .....husn to dhal jata hai

musafir sahab sabke sath life me kabhi na kabhi bura jaror hota hai but jaise achhe din chale gaye vaise hi bure din bhi chale jayenge aur i hope ki tab aap apna title jaror badal lenge ..

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