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Love Hamein Foorsat Nahin... - 15th July 2004, 01:47 AM

Hamein Foorsat Nahin...

Ab kissi mehfil main jaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
Aur na hi kissi se dil lagane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Oussi ke sajdhe main ab sar apna humne jhuka liya hai
Kissi aur ke aage sar jhukaane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Be-kadar douniya eh”Amanush”pouchti waha kaun hai
Hum yehi to kehte hein,batane ki hamein foorsat nahin…

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I will come back & reply... - 15th July 2004, 06:11 AM

Haan, samajh aarahi hain...aaj kal bohot jiyada hi busy ho tum. Yes I know, busy hona bohot achha hota hain...Waise aaj kal main bhi bohot busy rehti houn... Pata hi nahin chalta ke keya horaha hain. Tumhara likhha hua khub tha...ek gana jo pehle se hi yaad aa raha tha woh likhdeti houn: Jhilmil sitaron ka angan hoga Rimjhim baarasta sawan hoga Aisa sundar sapna aapna Jeevan hoga.......duet song. Sapna, a beautiful word. Now the thing is that...I don't know much at this very moment & I want to go & sleep...look at my face...do you know what happens to me when I...Spacially when I am busy or like now I am...always a problem cause I'm not me I guess! Match nahin karega, issliye. You will understand when you will read...I did try...Dilse nikli houi Daad kubool karon. Younhi likhte rehna. God bless you.

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Re: Hamein Foorsat Nahin... - 15th July 2004, 05:55 PM

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Hamein Foorsat Nahin...

Ab kissi mehfil main jaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
Aur na hi kissi se dil lagane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Oussi ke sajdhe main ab sar apna humne jhuka liya hai
Kissi aur ke aage sar jhukaane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Be-kadar douniya eh”Amanush”pouchti waha kaun hai
Hum yehi to kehte hein,batane ki hamein foorsat nahin…

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Amanush ji,

Bahut achi ghazal likhi hai aapne.. dil ke jazbaat bahut khoobsorti se pesh kiye hain aapne..

Aise hi likhte rahiye..

Khush rahiye..

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Hi Shimul... - 16th July 2004, 01:18 AM

Still waiting for you to come back and reply...toum bhi hamare tarah busy mat houa karna...and thanks for appreciating "Hamein Foorsat nahin"...

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Priya jee... - 16th July 2004, 01:26 AM

Hi Priya jee, Aapko yaha ghazal pasand aayi iss se badkar khoushi ki kya baat ho sakti hai...younhi humko hawsle dete rahiyega...Hamari doua aapke saath hai...

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Cool Main yahan hi tou houn... - 16th July 2004, 03:43 PM

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Still waiting for you to come back and reply...toum bhi hamare tarah busy mat houa karna...and thanks for appreciating "Hamein Foorsat nahin"...

Amanush...

I hope you will understand...you are most welcome. Khush rahon yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat? Do take care of yourself. God bless you.

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16th July 2004, 06:13 PM

Amanush ji...


Wah! Sach.. jise chaaho, gar use paa lo.. to phir kahaan fursat hoti hai zamaane ke liye? Na duniya ke liye fursat hoti hai.. aur naa hi uski zaroorat... wo pyaar hi sabse ehem shay ban jaata hai.. naa daulat na shohratrehti hai phir zehen me.. bas, ek mohabbat!...baRe khushnaseeb hote hain wo jinhe ye khushi milti hai.. aur iski qadar zindagi bhar ki jaati hai.. waqai.. bohat achha likha hai aapne.. yunhi likhte rahiyega..


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17th July 2004, 12:04 AM

waah!~

kyaa khoob kaha jii apne...Hamein Foorsat Nahin...sach mai....kabhii kabhii yuu bhii hota hai...jab insaan ko khud se foorsat nahi hotii..har ek insaan k jindagiim ek ye mod aata hai jab wo sirf khud k bare mai sochta hai....tao kya bura karta hai.....kahii tao jaa kar hume rukna hii hai naa...kahii tao apni talaas ko manzil dena hiii hai naa....dil ko sach bohoot achaa laga ap ka ye kalaam....umid hai aage bhii ap yu hii apne jassbato ko sab se baaten rahenge..apne kalaam k zariiye...shukriya k sath ijaazat...Sanju!~


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Afsan ji... - 18th July 2004, 03:15 AM

Afsan ji...

aap ke aane se iss thread ko char chand lag gaya...younhi humko
hawsla dete rahiyega...

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Sanjoo ji... - 18th July 2004, 03:23 AM

Sanjoo ji...

hum aap ke aabhari hein jo aap ne hamare ghazal ko saraaha .Hum aap ke har baat se sehmat hein.Sachi Mohabat jab ho jaati hai tab insaan khoud ko bhoul jane par vivash ho jaata hai aur kouch bhi karne ki foorsat hi nahin milti…hai na?Pyar ke aage jab Uparwale khoud hi jhouk jaate hein to hum insaan kya cheez hein...Hum younhi apne kalaam ke zariye apne jazbaat pesh kareinge aur umeed hai ki aap padte raheinge…

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Hi Shimu... - 18th July 2004, 03:30 AM

Hi Shimul...

Hum ounhi ke intazaar main baithe hein jinhon ne jaate waqt
phir se aane ka vaada kiya tha...aur saath main ek soundar sa gaana lana na bhoulna...

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18th July 2004, 04:43 AM

I know...I have been very busy...abhi bhi bohot busy houn...My best night comes only once a week...kuch der ke liye bohot achha lagta hain...I am sure you will understand. Gana tou dil ko achha hi lagta hain, hain ke nahin? Khush rahon yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Take care. God bless you.

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18th July 2004, 11:57 AM

A...MANUSH ji,

Ab kissi mehfil main jaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
Aur na hi kissi se dil lagane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Tumne likha hai ki ub tumhe fursut nahin hai per tumhe samjhana jarori ho gaya hai ki subkuch pane ke baad ub bhi tumhe is mehfil ki jaroorat hai. Hum shayar to nahi.n per thoda sa likha hi bahut samjhana dost.


mefil me jaane ki fursut nahi to yaha.n kyo aaye
Dosto se dillagi ki fursut nahi to yaha.n kyo aaye

Jise pa liya hai tumne usi mei.n kho baithe ho tum
Humse milne ki fursut nahi.n to yaha.n kyo aaye

Itna hi fakat kafi hay dost tumko batane ke liye
Is gulshun me tu nahin ho to yaha.n kyo aaye



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Love Toumko batane hum aaye... - 18th July 2004, 12:58 PM

mefil me jaane ki fursut nahi to yaha.n kyo aaye
Dosto se dillagi ki fursut nahi to yaha.n kyo aaye

Jise pa liya hai tumne usi mei.n kho baithe ho tum
Humse milne ki fursut nahi.n to yaha.n kyo aaye

Itna hi fakat kafi hay dost tumko batane ke liye
Is gulshun me tu nahin ho to yaha.n kyo aaye

Hi Nutkhut ji…

I like your style…Jeissa naam weissa hi kaam…lol.Samajhdaaron
Ke liye ishaara hi kaafi hai…hai na?


Dilwalon ki mehfil hai ye, dil ki baat yahan kehne hum aaye
Issi jahaan ki rawnak hai wo (shayad)yehi kehne hum aaye

Wohi meri Shayri hai,mere goul-e-kalaam ki mehek hai wo
Hardam ounhi ki sajhde main sar yahan jhukane hum aaye

Dosti ka naata jora hai toumne, rishte ka kadar karna hi tha
Thori si foorsat mili,issi liye ye raaz tumko batane hum aaye…

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hi - 18th July 2004, 03:03 PM

hello amanush ji
apne sahi likha hai,,jab pa liya apne dilber ko to kisko ab phursat hai?????aur honi bhi nahi chhiye,,,,
apne jo apne khayal hum tak share kiye,,uske liye,,,daad kabool kijiye....
sari hi gazal yun to bahut hi pyari hai,,per kuch panktiyan dil ko choo gayi....

Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Oussi ke sajdhe main ab sar apna humne jhuka liya hai
Kissi aur ke aage sar jhukaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
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Love hello - 19th July 2004, 05:17 AM

Hello Amanush

hi bahote intezare ke bade aje kuach tume hara likha pada hia bahote hi aacha laga tume ne hameshak i tarha bhaote hi aacha likha hia. aisa hi hota hia jabe man caha dil maie basta hia to kise bhi batek i fursat nahi hoti. nice work keep it up. looking fw . to see more.

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hello - 19th July 2004, 01:22 PM

Dear

bahut khubsurat rachana.. dil lagane ki ab hume fursat nahi.. khub pasand aayi... aur aapki yah line to kamal ki hai...

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin


shubhkamnao sahit,

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hi Amanushji.. kya likha hai kya kahen.... dil ko chu gaya hai apki yeh kavita.... thnaks for sharing..
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hello amanush ji
apne sahi likha hai,,jab pa liya apne dilber ko to kisko ab phursat hai?????aur honi bhi nahi chhiye,,,,
apne jo apne khayal hum tak share kiye,,uske liye,,,daad kabool kijiye....
sari hi gazal yun to bahut hi pyari hai,,per kuch panktiyan dil ko choo gayi....

Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Oussi ke sajdhe main ab sar apna humne jhuka liya hai
Kissi aur ke aage sar jhukaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
,,,,nice words..
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Hi Soni... - 20th July 2004, 07:21 PM

Hi Soni...,

Keissi ho?Hamein toumhare tareef bahout ache lage...so many thanks for appreciating...see you soon...

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Dear Akant...

"Hamein Foorsat nahin" ko padkar aap ne apne khoushi ko vyatit kiya hai ...iss ke liye hum dil ki gehraaiyon se aap ko dhanyavaad dete hein...Younhi aap hamein hawsla dete rahiyega...

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hi Amanushji.. kya likha hai kya kahen.... dil ko chu gaya hai apki yeh kavita.... thnaks for sharing..
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Aap ne jo do lines likhe hein...in se hamara man khil outha.Bahout khoushi houi ki aap ko bhi "Hamein Foorsat nahin"pasand aaya...
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Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Bahut khuub!

Amanush jee

sach mein dil ke kareeb kee baat keh di aapne...ab dil bas gaya, usko paa liya...ab mehfil mein aane kee bhi fursat kahan...behad pasand aaya yeh kalaam ....yoonhi likhte rahiye...

paras

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Paras ji... - 21st July 2004, 01:52 AM

Paras ji...

Bari bhagya ki baat hai ki aap ne "Hamein Foorsat Nahin"
ko pasand kiya aur ousski itni tareef ki hai...itna sammaan paakar hum phoole na samaye...aap younhi hawsle dete rahiyega...

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Ek gana match karegi shayad lekin dusri, pata nahin. I will try my best & I hope you will like it. Kuch youn hain: Abhi saans lene ki foorsat nahin hain ke tum meri bahon mein ho~Ke kuch dekhne ki zaroorat nahin hain tum hi tum nigahon mein ho~Kitna Pyaara Pyaara hain saamaa*Pyaase dil ki dhadkan hain jawan~jaane keisa chhaaya hain nasha*youn na mujhko chedon dilruba.......it is from film Geet. The whole song is so beautiful. When I am a bit free I will post the whole song. Aur ek: Har taraf tu hi dikhein tu hi tu dil mein rahe Keya kahoun tere bina ek pal bhi na katein Yeh meri saanson mein bhi teri hi khushboun rahe Tu laahoun banke sanam jism mein mere bahein he he he he he Chahata houn itna tujhe~saans leti houn yaara main tera naam lekar Kehdoungi iss jahan se tu hi hain mera dilbar Zindegi milgaayi hain tere dil mein rehkar.......rishtey film ki gana, also this song is nice. last one: Ab tou hain tumse har khushi aapni~tum pe maarna hain Zindegi aapni~jab hogaaya tum pe yeh dil deewana~phir chahe jo bhi kahe humko Zamana Koi banaye baate chahe jitni Ab tou hain tumse har khushi aapni.......Abhiman film. Dil ki gehraion se nikli houi Daad kubool karon. Younhi likhte rehna. Kuch youn bhi hain: Zindegi hain keya Pyaar ke bina aur Pyaar bhi hain keya aji aapke bina.......calcutta mail film. Dilka rishta hain hi kuch special, hain na? Khush rahon yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you.

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Amanushji apko thanks karne ki kya jaroorat hai... huh boliye... haha... juzz kidding... ur thanks is accepted...
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Hi,Shimul... - 25th July 2004, 01:47 AM

Hi Shimul...

Sorry for the delay...Kaam ke silsile main bahout busy the hum...Weisse ek baat kahein? toum bhi Uparwale ke tarah hi ho.We bhi kabhi kabhi dil ke mouraadon ko sounkar kouch der ke baad hi manchaahe cheez dete hein...par jab dete hein to chappar phar ke dete hein.I asked for one song and you gave four items ...how sweet of you...
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Sure you can say Thanks. And allow me to say, Thank you very much. You are most welcome. Khush rahon yeh Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you.

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Re: Hamein Foorsat Nahin... - 9th November 2004, 05:37 AM

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Hamein Foorsat Nahin...

Ab kissi mehfil main jaane ki hamein foorsat nahin
Aur na hi kissi se dil lagane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jissko basna tha,wahi iss dil main aakar bas gayi hai
Ab gairon ko iss main basane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Jisspe sab jaan loutate hein,oussko humne paa liya hai
Koyi aur dousre ko bhi apnane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Oussi ke sajdhe main ab sar apna humne jhuka liya hai
Kissi aur ke aage sar jhukaane ki hamein foorsat nahin

Be-kadar douniya eh”Amanush”pouchti waha kaun hai
Hum yehi to kehte hein,batane ki hamein foorsat nahin…

Amanush…


Har ek sher dil ko chou gaya........please write more.....Amanush ji


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Amrita ji ke liye... - 11th November 2004, 03:25 PM

Hi Amrita ji...

Jaan kar bahout khoushi houi ki aap ne hamari Kavitaaon
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Aaj kal hum bahout hi kam Shayri .com par aate hein aur
shayri bhi likhna ab hamare bas ki baat nahin rahi...phir bhi
vaada raha ki jab bhi likheinge ,aap ki khoushi ke liye yahin par
zaroor post kareinge...

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amanush,

i just joined this site today. yours was the first thread i read. i read through almost all the replies you have got for your "foorsat nahin" poem (i cannot call it ghazal, or nazm).

i did not find it enchanting. i was surprised about the response you have generated for this poem, it is amazing. if people like your poems so much, and since i did not find this one good at all, i was wondering if i am being a little hasty in writing it off. so i am going to try to find your other creations on this site and read them in order to find out if my first impression was right or wrong.

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