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Wink hamara saath~ - 13th April 2002, 10:33 AM

Chor gay hamara saath sabhi bheer mein,
nah jain hameh chor chor keh aap...
ji rahe hain bin chorneh waloon keh,
zinda mareh howe hi sahi,
yea saasein nah ruk jain hamari,
keh joh chor jain hameh aap...
nah kijiyea gah yea zulm,
hai yea iltejah hamari,
aap nah sub jaiseh hoon yea umeed hamari..
chor gay bheer mein sub,
aap hi aap hain sirb ab!!

ji kaisa lagah! aap k liyea nahi hai.. bas yoon hi likha..yea bhi nahi maloom kis k liyea hai..


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Talking ek baath! - 13th April 2002, 10:36 AM

mein bura shura nahi maanti logoon keh batoon ka..kyun keh bura mannay ki koi cheez hi nahi hia..zindgi hai sub k apneh khayalaat hai..unh kahyalatoon ko badal toh nahi saqteh nah..hamara kia haq hai unh peh..toh janab mein bura nahi maanti..par iss ka yea matlab nahi hia k loog faida uthain..


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uzmaji - 15th April 2002, 05:41 PM

jise jo samajna ho woh samje.....

aapko likhna hai aur aap zarror likhiye.....

aapki hosla afzaai karne ke liye hum yahan hai....

aapne bahot hi accha likha hai....aur koshish karne pe zyada accha likh payengi.....

dil ki baat zubaan pe naa aaya to "shayri.com" pe zarror aa jaati hai.....



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