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18th December 2005, 08:56 PM
dosto aaj mein wo kavita post kar raha hu jo maine us mod par likhi thi jab yeh dil toota tha magar aaj wo lamha yaad nahi karte magar ye kavita mera saath nahi chod rahi hai umeed hai pasand aayegi
Rok lo Qadam Jee bhar ke dekhlo Hamara tumhara saath bas yahin tak tha Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha Uttho aur naye Hamraahi talash karo Ke yeh khuwaab Suhana bas yahin tak tha wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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18th December 2005, 09:20 PM
mehul....it is very nice...wonderful words...but the pain is evident
u take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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19th December 2005, 12:11 AM
bahaut aacha likkha hai mehul.....dard hi dard....,meri taraf se daad kubool karo....apna aur apni daadiji ka khayal rakhna....bye..
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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19th December 2005, 11:29 PM
Rok lo Qadam Jee bhar ke dekhlo
Hamara tumhara saath bas yahin tak tha Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha Kya baat kahi hai....! too good...! Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha Waaaaahhh...! Uttho aur naye Hamraahi talash karo Ke yeh khuwaab Suhana bas yahin tak tha hmmmm.....! Dear Mehul, Bahutb hi pyaara likha hai tumne... Very beautifulll...gehraai hai bayaani me...accha laga padhke...yun hi likhte raho...! Tc...  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th December 2005, 09:07 AM
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20th December 2005, 09:08 AM
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20th December 2005, 09:10 AM
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4th July 2010, 07:41 PM
Aage aarahe hain gham mujh se milne gale
Ke apni khushiyon ka thikana bas yahin tak tha Bohat khoob Mehul saheb... Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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6th July 2010, 12:38 PM
hi mehul aapki rachna bhot hi kabil-e-tarif hai padhkar beetey hue kuch behtarin or dard bhre lamhe yaad aa gye
bhot hi khub likha hai aapne do sher jo dil main utar gye Manzil mile na mile ab hamari Kismat Ke Zindagi ke saath safar bas yahin tak tha Tum chal nahi sakte is se aage ek qadam Ruk jao ke Phoolon ka Chaman yahin tak tha bhot hi lazawaab to lijiye ek sher hazir karta hu faraz sahab ka din gujar jata hai khud ko chunne main faraz, sham ko hawa chalti hai phir bikhar jata hu, ji to cahata hu muft main jaan de dena faraz, fir sochta hu is mosam-e-kharidaar se kya lena kya dena pawan(shayari) |
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6th July 2010, 12:44 PM
bahut khoob.. Dil se daad hazir hai ...
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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