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~*awaazon Ko Goonjte Dekha*~ -
15th July 2006, 07:47 PM
Mere aziz doston.....
Ye ghazal uske liye likhi hai jisne is nacheez ko apni jaan se bhi jayada pyar kiya.Aaj ek arse baad armaaon ko phir se lut.e dekha…… shayad kutch apne hi zimmedar hain…… Use sunte hue jo bhi mehsoos kiya use lafzon mein dhaalne ki koshish ki hai……jo bhi tehreer ki hai aapki nazar kar raha hoon…… Armaan-e-dil ko aaj simat.te dekha……. Apne chaman ko phir ujadte dekha….. Hoton ki chuppi , sisak.ti saansein…. Deeda-e-tar ko kutch kehte dekha…… Tha *kirchiyoon mein kafn -e-ishq….. Mukhtarsar se dil ko toot.te dekha….. *Etraaf kar raha tha saara zamana….. Uske wajood ko bant.te dekha….. Jo bacha raha tha kashtioon ko…… Uske safiney ko doobte dekha…. Har ek ki chaahat, bus us.se thi….. Jisko chahaton mein lut.te dekha…. Aankh lage zamana hua ^AMAN^ Uski awaaz ko goonjte dekha….. *Kirchiyoon=small peices *Etraaf= acclaim **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: ~*awaazon Ko Goonjte Dekha*~ -
15th July 2006, 08:04 PM
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dear aman saahab aadaab ,aap ko kaafi samay baad yaha dekha sab kheriyat ho yahi ummid karta hoon waah waaaaaaaaaaaaah aman janaab aap ko kaafi samay baad padha ,achha laga aap ka ye chhota sa ghazal.Dil se dhero saari daad kabool kare.aage bhi aise hi aap ko padhane ka mauka milega yahi ummid karta hoo regards take care manu |
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15th July 2006, 10:21 PM
bohat khoob aman ji...bohat khoob...
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17th July 2006, 09:39 PM
Namaskar Aman ji
So ur back with a beautiful poetry.....Acha laga kayi din baad kunal ki aur aap ki rachna dekh kar..... Jo bacha raha tha kashtioon ko…… Uske safiney ko doobte dekha…. Kayi baar safina unhi ka duubta hay jo bacha rahey hotey hain.....so true meaning......shayad uss safina ko bachaney ki kushi hi aur hoti hay....beautiful message.. keep writing Regards |
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18th July 2006, 01:56 PM
Aman bhai,
Kiski baat ki tumne? Ky main jaanta hoon usko.... yaar accha nahi lagafir se tumhe dard pe likhta dekh.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th July 2006, 11:48 AM
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Shukriya jo aapne is nacheez ki likhi ghazal ko saraha...... us roz dil ukhda hua tha isliye likh daali..... khush rahiye........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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27th July 2006, 03:53 AM
"WAAH NA KAHO E DOST...
JAB TUM WAAH KEHTE HO.. DIL SE AAH NIKALTI HAI..." Aah pe Waah to nahi karni chaahiye.. lekin gar dard ko alag karke.. sirf ek shayri ki tarah pade.. to waah to bahut choti si cheez hai.. bahut khoobsoorti se aapne un bezabaan lamho ko shabd diye hain.. behad pasand aaye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Re: ~*awaazon Ko Goonjte Dekha*~ -
4th August 2006, 12:00 PM
Armaan-e-dil ko aaj simat.te dekha…….
Apne chaman ko phir ujadte dekha….. Jo bacha raha tha kashtioon ko…… Uske safiney ko doobte dekha…. Har ek ki chaahat, bus us.se thi….. Jisko chahaton mein lut.te dekha…. AMAN, You beautifuly expressed your pain in nice words, awesome work buddy. I like these lines especially. hope you are fine. take care & keep writting.  |
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6th September 2006, 04:51 AM
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Deri se jawab ke liye muafi chaoohonga....... Aaj pehli dafa aapne is nacheez ko saraha hai.......... Shukriya............. Khush rahiye...ye dua hai............ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th September 2006, 04:52 AM
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Mohabaat mein aisa mor aata hai jab kutch apnon ke liye apne pyar ki kurbaani deni padti hai......us roz jab use is kashmakash mein joojhte dekha to ye ashaar likhe........ Khush rahiye...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th September 2006, 04:54 AM
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tumse kai roz pehle baat ki thi........lagta hai is rishte ko ab koi anjaam ki zaroorat hai......koshishein zaari hain........... Khush rahoooo..... Tumhara apna...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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6th September 2006, 04:56 AM
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Dard pe wahi shaqs wah kar saqta hai jab vo us dard ko mehsoos kar chuqa ho........ is wah se aapke dard ki gehraai ka pata chalta hai.......Salaam karta hoon............ dua karta hoon khuda aapko khushi de.......... aapka apna...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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22nd September 2006, 03:29 AM
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der se jawab ki muafi chahoonga.......Shukriya ada karna chahta hoon........tum jaanti ho kisliye..........warna tumhe jawab na doon ........aisa to ho hi nahi saqta......... TC........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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aman jiiii......................aapne dard ko bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai.....! god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd July 2009, 05:13 AM
Shukriya Sunita Ji.........
Rabb Raakha........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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23rd July 2009, 11:16 AM
Namaskaar Aman Ji
Bahaut samay baad aapko parhney ka awsar mila. Har baar ki tarah aapka likhney ka andaaz bahaut pasand aaya. aabhaar vipin 
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23rd July 2009, 11:54 AM
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aise hi likhte rahiye... Yahan jo bhi aaya...gaya haath mal ke..! Log kehte hain Sher kehta hun . Apne Zhakhmon se khelta hoon main!!! Albela Sajan |
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AApko first time padha hun aur wakai aapki yeh post aapke naam ki tarha pursukun o Aman wali hai, sabhi sher dil mein ghar kar gaye bahut khoob Masha Allah, Dil se daad kabool kijiye.. Bazm mein aate rahiye aur apne khayalon se ru-baru karate rahiye.. Ek dili khushi mili hai aapka kalam padhker.. Likhate rahiye.. Khush rahiye Khuda Hafez.. 
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24th July 2009, 08:18 AM
Sat Siri Akal jii
Aman jii ki haal hai touhada? Its nice to see u after really long time!!! Ghazal bahut pasand aayii .......hamesha di tarah chnaga likhde ho tusi ..!!! especially this lines ... simply awesome Armaan-e-dil ko aaj simat.te dekha……. Apne chaman ko phir ujadte dekha….. Hoton ki chuppi , sisak.ti saansein…. Deeda-e-tar ko kutch kehte dekha…… Tha *kirchiyoon mein kafn -e-ishq….. Mukhtarsar se dil ko toot.te dekha….. *Etraaf kar raha tha saara zamana….. Uske wajood ko bant.te dekha….. te umeed kardii haan tusi hor "Gems" pesh karuge ... te eda hi mehfill's nu sajadne reho ... take care best wishes mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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Shukriya aapka jo aapne is naachez ke kalaam pe aa kar hausla afzai ki khush rahiye... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th July 2009, 06:14 PM
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Albela Sajan ji... aaphe tah-e-dil se shukriya jo aapko ye dard-o-gam pasanad aaya.... Khush rahiye... Rabb raakha......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Kwahish Ji... Aapki daad ka behad shukriya... chand alfaaz apne pyar ki haalat pe likhe the us roz.... aaj bhi vo samaya yaad hai...office mein baith shaam ko isa agaaz hua...aur anzaam kab aaya...pata hi nahi chala... khush rahiye... Rabb raakha........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th July 2009, 06:23 PM
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Thuvada dhanwaad jehda tusi is post te aa ke kujtch akhaar likhey... Rabb thuvanu khushiyaan davey......... Rabb raakha.......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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