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Mera Inaam Likh diyaa, (Tera Naam Likh Diyaa) - 7th October 2010, 06:30 PM

Mera Inaam Likh diyaa



Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..

In Surkh Hoto Se Jo Guzra Tha..
Woh Paigaam Likh Diyaa...

Tere Pehloo Se Guzarte Waqt Ko...
Maine Dhalti Shyaam Likh Diyaa...

Dil Ne Kaha Koi Sher Likh Khaas..
Maine Aankhon Ko Teri Jaam Likh Diyaa..

Maa Ne Kaha.. Kis Sukoon Me Khoya Hai Tu..
Maine Tere Khaawb Ko Aaram Likh Diyaa..

Yadon Ki Kitaab Ke Panne Jab Palte..
Teri Har Baat Ko Lajawaab Likh Diyaa..

Kitne Parwane Jal Gaye.. Paane Me Tujhko..
Teri Is Adaa Ko Humne.. Aftaab Likh Diyaa..

Neend Se Jaage Jab.. To Aankho me Aasoo The..
Teri Bewafai Ko, Mera Inaam Likh diyaa..

Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..




   
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7th October 2010, 07:57 PM

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Mera Inaam Likh diyaa




Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..

In Surkh Hoto Se Jo Guzra Tha..
Woh Paigaam Likh Diyaa...

Tere Pehloo Se Guzarte Waqt Ko...
Maine Dhalti Shyaam Likh Diyaa...

Dil Ne Kaha Koi Sher Likh Khaas..
Maine Aankhon Ko Teri Jaam Likh Diyaa..

Maa Ne Kaha.. Kis Sukoon Me Khoya Hai Tu..
Maine Tere Khaawb Ko Aaram Likh Diyaa..

Yadon Ki Kitaab Ke Panne Jab Palte..
Teri Har Baat Ko Lajawaab Likh Diyaa..

Kitne Parwane Jal Gaye.. Paane Me Tujhko..
Teri Is Adaa Ko Humne.. Aftaab Likh Diyaa..

Neend Se Jaage Jab.. To Aankho me Aasoo The..
Teri Bewafai Ko, Mera Inaam Likh diyaa..

Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..

aadaab
kamaal hai kamaal hai
aap ne jin tashbeehaat se ghazal ko sajaayaa hai wo kisee geele darakht par naqsh ke maanind dil par sabt ho gayaa
badee pyaaree rachnaa hai jo andaaz aapne apnaa yaa hai us se kitnee bhooli bisaree yaadon ki kitaab ke boseedah awraaq ki yaad dilaa dee
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8th October 2010, 03:51 AM

Good one, Aashique Ji...!

Keep it up

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Mera Inaam Likh diyaa



Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..

In Surkh Hoto Se Jo Guzra Tha..
Woh Paigaam Likh Diyaa...

Tere Pehloo Se Guzarte Waqt Ko...
Maine Dhalti Shyaam Likh Diyaa...

Dil Ne Kaha Koi Sher Likh Khaas..
Maine Aankhon Ko Teri Jaam Likh Diyaa..

Maa Ne Kaha.. Kis Sukoon Me Khoya Hai Tu..
Maine Tere Khaawb Ko Aaram Likh Diyaa..

Yadon Ki Kitaab Ke Panne Jab Palte..
Teri Har Baat Ko Lajawaab Likh Diyaa..

Kitne Parwane Jal Gaye.. Paane Me Tujhko..
Teri Is Adaa Ko Humne.. Aftaab Likh Diyaa..

Neend Se Jaage Jab.. To Aankho me Aasoo The..
Teri Bewafai Ko, Mera Inaam Likh diyaa..

Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..


aashique bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob........dil se daad.......har ashar khoob hai wah
likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath


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5th March 2011, 06:29 PM

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Mera Inaam Likh diyaa



Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..

In Surkh Hoto Se Jo Guzra Tha..
Woh Paigaam Likh Diyaa...

Tere Pehloo Se Guzarte Waqt Ko...
Maine Dhalti Shyaam Likh Diyaa...

Dil Ne Kaha Koi Sher Likh Khaas..
Maine Aankhon Ko Teri Jaam Likh Diyaa..

Maa Ne Kaha.. Kis Sukoon Me Khoya Hai Tu..
Maine Tere Khaawb Ko Aaram Likh Diyaa..

Yadon Ki Kitaab Ke Panne Jab Palte..
Teri Har Baat Ko Lajawaab Likh Diyaa..

Kitne Parwane Jal Gaye.. Paane Me Tujhko..
Teri Is Adaa Ko Humne.. Aftaab Likh Diyaa..

Neend Se Jaage Jab.. To Aankho me Aasoo The..
Teri Bewafai Ko, Mera Inaam Likh diyaa..

Gazal Likhne Baithe They..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..
Aur Tera Naam Likh Diyaa..


Too Good .......... Ji !

Very Nice Creation ....... dil se daad !!

likhte raheN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath .... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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Accha likha hai Aashiq jee... aap ki kavish ke ehsaas kaafi naye lage mujhe, likhte raheN..
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Too Good .......... Ji !

Very Nice Creation ....... dil se daad !!

likhte raheN ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath .... !
Shukriyaa Adaa Karta Hoon.. Aapki Zehmat Ka

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