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i am new n mene abhi abhi likhna shuru kiya hai....
agar koi galti ho jaye to maafi chata hun....
but me itne sari baaten padh kar confuse hi gya hun k gajal kya hai....
kya meri gajlen galat hain....
i dont know....
plssss reply den....
koi ek mukammal javab batyen jis par sab sehmat hon....


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Originally Posted by Salman Ahmed 12121 View Post
i am new n mene abhi abhi likhna shuru kiya hai....
agar koi galti ho jaye to maafi chata hun....
but me itne sari baaten padh kar confuse hi gya hun k gajal kya hai....
kya meri gajlen galat hain....
i dont know....
plssss reply den....
koi ek mukammal javab batyen jis par sab sehmat hon....
Aap agal tafseel se batayein ki aap ki confusion kya hai to aapko yakeenan madad milegi...



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