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Tujko ab sochta hun mai to mujhko lagta hai !
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Sad Tujko ab sochta hun mai to mujhko lagta hai ! - 9th June 2004, 09:13 AM

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aaj kuchh dil ke bejuban jajbaato ne fir se alfajo kee shakl ikhtiyar kar lee hai to unhi alfajo ko aapke samne pesh kar raha hun

Tujko ab sochta hun mai to mujhko lagta hai !
Ke jaise mere andar aasma sulagta hai !

Mujhe aksar tera chahra dikhai deta hai ..
Kahin bhi jab koi bachha udaas milta hai !

Mai kya karun tujhe bhulana bhi nahi aasan ..
Tera saaya sa mere saath saath chalta hai !

Dil mai jab bhi koi armaan sa machalta hai ..
Aansuon ke saath aankhon se bah nikalta hai !

Mai falak hun ‘anish’ tamam tare jakhm hain mere..
Aaftab dil hai mera roj yun hee jalta hai !


anish

tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


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9th June 2004, 01:38 PM

Mai kya karun tujhe bhulana bhi nahi aasan ..
Tera saaya sa mere saath saath chalta hai !

Dil mai jab bhi koi armaan sa machalta hai ..
Aansuon ke saath aankhon se bah nikalta hai !

bahoot khoob Anish...acha likha hai.
specially these 2 para.

do keep writing.
take care


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hi roops
tumne to is kalaam ko apni tareef deke kamyaab kar diya thnx to reply tahe dil se shukriya kabool karo or haan duaen bhi ok take care


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Hi Anish ,

howz u?............mez fine........mujhe aapki yeh gazhal bahut achhi lagi.........likhte rahiye........... ............bye n take care........n njoyyyyy!!!


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hi sanskruti
bahut dino baad tumhe yanhaa dekha to khushi hui late reply ke liye maafi chahta hun or tumne meri ye koshish pasand kee iske liye dil kee gahraiyon se shukriya ada karta hun
khush raho
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hi anish,
bahot hi achha likha hai tumne. It’s really an awesome work.
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hi parul
der se reply ke liye mafi mangta hun aapko meri ye gajal achhi lagi tah-e- dil se shukrgujar hun aapke liye hee to likhta hun koshish safal ho jaati hai jab aap sabi ko mera likha pasand aata hai


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hi - 4th November 2007, 05:16 PM

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aaj kuchh dil ke bejuban jajbaato ne fir se alfajo kee shakl ikhtiyar kar lee hai to unhi alfajo ko aapke samne pesh kar raha hun

Tujko ab sochta hun mai to mujhko lagta hai !
Ke jaise mere andar aasma sulagta hai !

Mujhe aksar tera chahra dikhai deta hai ..
Kahin bhi jab koi bachha udaas milta hai !

Mai kya karun tujhe bhulana bhi nahi aasan ..
Tera saaya sa mere saath saath chalta hai !

Dil mai jab bhi koi armaan sa machalta hai ..
Aansuon ke saath aankhon se bah nikalta hai !

Mai falak hun ‘anish’ tamam tare jakhm hain mere..
Aaftab dil hai mera roj yun hee jalta hai !
anish ji aap ki yeh puraani kavita padh kar sach men bahut achaa laga. aap ne bahut khoob apne jazbato ka bayan kiya hai ap ki ghazal men.mujhe bahut pasand aaya,aate rahiyega janab

aise hii likhate rahiyega
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