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khwaahishoN ne hai lubhaaya dil ko - 25th June 2014, 02:08 AM
khwaahishoN ne hai lubhaaya dil ko
ik tamaasha sa banaaya dil ko

is ko seene meiN qaid rakh "maikash"
tuune sar pe hai chaRaayaa dil ko

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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25th June 2014, 06:18 AM
tumne sar pe hai chadaya dil ko....wahh...riyyat Ka khoob samaaN baaNdhaa hai janaab....qitta ki khoobsurati isee me'n hai ki uska misra-e-aakhir kis andaaz men baaNdhaa gayaa hai....bharpoor inaaaf kar diya aapne is qitaa Ke saath...daad qabool farmaaiye....
   
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25th June 2014, 08:08 AM
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tuune sar pe hai chaRaayaa dil ko
Janaab maikash sahab subhanallah bahut hi khubsurat Qitta paish farmaya hai aap ne...........sabse pehle to dhairoNdaad qabool kijiye ga......
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khwaahishoN ne hai lubhaaya dil ko
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is ko seene meiN qaid rakh "maikash"
tuune sar pe hai chaRaayaa dil ko

bahut hi khoobsoorat ahsaas pesh kiyen hai maikash bhai..........radhe radhe

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25th June 2014, 01:43 PM
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26th June 2014, 11:30 AM
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Waaahhhh Maikash saahaab ..... ise kahte hain ssau sunaar ki aur ek luhhaar ki.... kya khoob qataa hai kya khoob nashaa hai wallaah subhaan Allaah....

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26th June 2014, 10:07 PM
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26th June 2014, 10:22 PM
Wah maikash ji ..ye tou apne kamal kar diya ,

Kambhakht dil ko ek naya raasta dikha diya ...

Tumne sar pe charaya hai dil ko......Is line pe jitna soche
utna kam hai .. A new definition indeed ...

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27th June 2014, 12:46 PM
Wah Wah Wahhhhhhhhh Kia Kehnay Maikash Sahab.. Umdah Kaha



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27th June 2014, 10:28 PM
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Waahh... bahut khoob Maikash bhai! Daad kubool kijiye!

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Maikash bhai...aapki poetry ke to kehne hi kya, dil ki ulji baat ko bhi aap bade seede se lafzoN meiN kehne ka hunar rakhte hai.

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