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meri rooh bhi sari hui hai - 27th December 2005, 07:13 PM
bahut dino ke baad kuch pesh kar raha hoon umeed hai aap sabhi ko pasand aayega


nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi aalam hai,
har ek pankhuri bhi yahan dari hui hai.

aaj phir purane ghawon me kasak uthi hai,
har purani yaad phir uth ke khari hui hai.

itne baar tut chuki hai meri dil ki aash,
ki har khwaish mere dil ki mari hui hai.

ab to dard kuch yun bha chuka hai,ki kasak,
meri zindagi aur maut ke beech ki kari hui hai.

tohmat hoon main insaniyat ke naam par,
meri to lash aur rooh bhi poori sari hui hai.

are meri zindagi me itne hain gamn"maut"
ki ye to ab bas gamnon ki ek lari hui hai.

ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
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Re: meri rooh bhi sari hui hai - 27th December 2005, 07:20 PM
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bahut dino ke baad kuch pesh kar raha hoon umeed hai aap sabhi ko pasand aayega


nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi aalam hai,
har ek pankhuri bhi yahan dari hui hai.

aaj phir purane ghawon me kasak uthi hai,
har purani yaad phir uth ke khari hui hai.

itne baar tut chuki hai meri dil ki aash,
ki har khwaish mere dil ki mari hui hai.

ab to dard kuch yun bha chuka hai,ki kasak,
meri zindagi aur maut ke beech ki kari hui hai.

tohmat hoon main insaniyat ke naam par,
meri to lash aur rooh bhi poori sari hui hai.

are meri zindagi me itne hain gamn"maut"
ki ye to ab bas gamnon ki ek lari hui hai.


accha likha hai..
likhte rehna.. khush rehna

SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...

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duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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27th December 2005, 11:19 PM
bahaut acche...likhte raho aur saath me aur koshish karo behtar likhne ki.god bless u.take care.

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28th December 2005, 08:51 AM
nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi aalam hai,
har ek pankhuri bhi yahan dari hui hai.

itne baar tut chuki hai meri dil ki aash,
ki har khwaish mere dil ki mari hui hai.


Yeh lines mujhe bahut pasand aayi.. aapne bahut achha likha hai. likhte rehna... Take care!
   
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28th December 2005, 10:21 AM
Main maut ji
aapki kavita mein rooh ko bhataktey paya. kaafi kuch keh gaye hein ye lafz. waise poori kavita ko ek taar se jorey hue hein apke lafz.

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Re: Re: meri rooh bhi sari hui hai - 28th December 2005, 06:26 PM
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accha likha hai..
likhte rehna.. khush rehna
kuhulika ji jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya.aap bas yunhi padhte rahiye hume.

MAUT

ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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28th December 2005, 06:27 PM
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bahaut acche...likhte raho aur saath me aur koshish karo behtar likhne ki.god bless u.take care.
jaroor farhana ji.main humesha kosish karta rahunga ahcha likhne ki.bas aapse yahi darkhwast hai aap yunhi padhte rahe hume.

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ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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28th December 2005, 06:29 PM
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nistabhdta nisha ki din me bhari hui hai,
lash meri mere hi samne pari hui hai.

har taraf khamoshi ka hi aalam hai,
har ek pankhuri bhi yahan dari hui hai.

itne baar tut chuki hai meri dil ki aash,
ki har khwaish mere dil ki mari hui hai.


Yeh lines mujhe bahut pasand aayi.. aapne bahut achha likha hai. likhte rehna... Take care!
aap bas hume yunhi padhte rahen parul ji aur hum bas yunhi likhte rahenge.

MAUT

ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

aapka apna jana pehchana MAUT
   
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28th December 2005, 06:30 PM
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aapki kavita mein rooh ko bhataktey paya. kaafi kuch keh gaye hein ye lafz. waise poori kavita ko ek taar se jorey hue hein apke lafz.

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bahut khushi hui kanchan ji ye dekh kar kisi ne kaafi deeply padha mere kalaam ko.bas aapse yahi darkhwast hai ki yunhi padhte rahiye hume.aur hum bhi kosish karte rahenge yunhi likhte rahne ki kuch kuch.

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ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

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28th December 2005, 07:11 PM
khoob likha hai.....................

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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29th December 2005, 07:07 PM
janab shukriya tareef ka.jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapkohumara kalaam pasand aaya.umeed karta hoon ki aap bas yunhi padhte rahenge hume.

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ai zindagi tu bhool gayi,
main teri wahi saut hoon.
is duniya me sachhe pyar ki,
main khaufnak maut hoon.

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