yeh toh dekhiye (shimul)

[deewaana]

aslaamaaleikuum namaste sat sri a kaal jee

shimul jee aap kee innaayat kuch likhne peh aap majboor kiyee dete hoh toh fir yeh dekhiyeh mera kiya hallaat hain ab aap toh meri kahanee shee waaqeef hoh

BADEH BECHAIN DIKHTE HOH KABHI SHIKAYAT TOH KARKEE DEKHIYE
YAH FIR APNEE JUBAAN SHEE BEWAFAA KAH KHEETAB HEE DEH DIJIYEH

NAZOOK HAIN YEH BAHUT UTHTEE GIRTEE SAANSHE BHI NAH SEH PAYENGHE
KABHI CHAMKTEE RET PEH GHARONDHA TOH BANA KAR DEKHIYE

DARIYA KEE TEERTEE MACHLEE TADPNEH KEE TADAP KOH KIYA JANHE
USHE KABHI PANEE SHEE BAHAR KARKEE TOH DEKHIYE

KHAAREH PANEE MEIN REHKAR KAISHE MEH BARSHATEE JAATEE HAIN
KISI AJNABEE SHEE AANKHEE MILAA PEHLEE NAZAR KAH MAZAA TOH DEKHIYE

KAISHE TAPKATEE CHHAT AANSHOOH OH KAH BRAAHM HE DEH JATEE HAIN
KISI GAREEB KEH JHOPDEH MEIN EIK RAAT GUJJAR KAR TOH DEKHIYE

GHAR SOCHTEE HOH KEE APNEE MULLAKAAT NAHEE HAIN MUMKEEN
TOH TASAVOOR MEIN BOOLAA KAR TANHAYEEOH MEIN YAAD TOH KAR DEKHIYE

DAR HAIN HAMAREE SOHBAAT TUMKOH BHI NAH BANAA DEH SHAYAR
BHOOLEEH SHE !! DEEWAANEH !! KEE GAZALOH KOH HOTHO PEH SAJHAA KAR TOH DEKHIYE

SHIMUL JEE HAVE LOST CONTACT WITH HER HOPE YOU GET THE MESSAGE SORRY

ALLAH HAFIZ JAI SHIYA RAAM RAB RAKHA
DUA MEIN YAAD RAKHIYEGHA

[Shimul]

Wassalam,
How did you lost contact with her? Please explain a bit if you can.
Do write to me. I will be waiting. Aapka poetry ke bade mein phir aa kar reply karungi. Duwa hamesha rahegi. Take care. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

But still plz keep smilling.......

[Afshan]

Deewana ji..

Adaab!

Kaii dino baad aap is bazm me laute hain.. aur yakeen maaniye, aapke kalaam paR kar bohat achha lagta hai, ki koi apne khayaal, apne jazbaat ko itni khoobi se bayaan kar sakta hai.. Khaaskar aapke is kalaam me shaamil khayaal behad pasand aaye.. Umeed hai ki aap yunhi likhte rahenge..